I'm not sure how many people here know of Monster Hunter but I'm doing a story on it. I do have grammer problems and not great on details so please bear with it. R&R if you want.
An adult male in Hunter’s Armor is walking with a little boy. “Hey Master, what are we hunting today?” A little grayish-silver, spikey haired boy with red eyes asks as he carries a Bone Kris Sword and Shield. “Just some Jaggis, we got to have some fresh meat.” The spikey blonde haired male said while carrying a wrapped up greatsword.
After walking for 5 minutes, the male stops walking. “What is it?” The boy asks. “Shhh.” The male says. He moves his hand down, signaling the boy to crouch down. The boy crouches and so does the male. They slowly walk forward and hide behind a bush. They slowly open the bush and looks through. “There.” The male says softly.
The boy sees a group of 5 Jaggis. The boy gets excited and is about to leap over the bush when the male stops him. The boy looks over at his master. He points to the right and the boy looks over and sees 2 Jaggias. The male signals the boy to stay here. The boy stays as the male sneaks around. The boy watches as his master sneaks around and kills the Jaggias and Jaggis. The boy does an open mouth smiles.
A growl comes from behind the boy. The boy turns around slowly and sees a Great Jaggi staring at him. The boy gets scared and can’t move. The Great Jaggi goes and tries to bite him but gets its head chopped off by the male. “That was close.” The male said. The boy sighs. The male looks at the boy and starts to laugh. “What’s so funny Master? I was scared.” The boy said. “Yeah, so scared that you peed yourself.” The male said.
The boy looks down and notices that he did peed himself. “I thought that I was dead, it’s only natural.” The boy said. The male smiles and places his right hand on the boy’s head.
“As long as you believe in your friends and partners, there’s nothing to be afraid of.” The male says. “Like with Lyra?” The boy asks. The male smiles. “Yeah, now come on, we have a bigger haul than originally thought. We better get going, Zedept.” The male said.
Forest: Night – 9 Years Later
A grayish-silver, spikey haired male, sitting against a tree with a wrapped up greatsword leaning on him with his right hand on the handle, wakes up. “It was only a dream.” He said.
“But why now? It’s been 9 years since Master was killed by that unknown monster.” He said. He looks at the greatsword. “Master, I’m sorry that I’m not following your teachings about friendship and partners. Please forgive me.” He said before falling back asleep.
Here's the Prologue for it. Opinions are welcome and if you want a hunter, I am sorry but all the roles are fulled already. Please enjoy the story.
Monster Hunter: The Ultimate Hunt
A story of a hunter who’s searching for the monster that killed his master. After meeting some people, can he accomplish his journey? Some similarities to MH Orage
Prologue
Forest: Mid-dayA story of a hunter who’s searching for the monster that killed his master. After meeting some people, can he accomplish his journey? Some similarities to MH Orage
Prologue
An adult male in Hunter’s Armor is walking with a little boy. “Hey Master, what are we hunting today?” A little grayish-silver, spikey haired boy with red eyes asks as he carries a Bone Kris Sword and Shield. “Just some Jaggis, we got to have some fresh meat.” The spikey blonde haired male said while carrying a wrapped up greatsword.
After walking for 5 minutes, the male stops walking. “What is it?” The boy asks. “Shhh.” The male says. He moves his hand down, signaling the boy to crouch down. The boy crouches and so does the male. They slowly walk forward and hide behind a bush. They slowly open the bush and looks through. “There.” The male says softly.
The boy sees a group of 5 Jaggis. The boy gets excited and is about to leap over the bush when the male stops him. The boy looks over at his master. He points to the right and the boy looks over and sees 2 Jaggias. The male signals the boy to stay here. The boy stays as the male sneaks around. The boy watches as his master sneaks around and kills the Jaggias and Jaggis. The boy does an open mouth smiles.
A growl comes from behind the boy. The boy turns around slowly and sees a Great Jaggi staring at him. The boy gets scared and can’t move. The Great Jaggi goes and tries to bite him but gets its head chopped off by the male. “That was close.” The male said. The boy sighs. The male looks at the boy and starts to laugh. “What’s so funny Master? I was scared.” The boy said. “Yeah, so scared that you peed yourself.” The male said.
The boy looks down and notices that he did peed himself. “I thought that I was dead, it’s only natural.” The boy said. The male smiles and places his right hand on the boy’s head.
“As long as you believe in your friends and partners, there’s nothing to be afraid of.” The male says. “Like with Lyra?” The boy asks. The male smiles. “Yeah, now come on, we have a bigger haul than originally thought. We better get going, Zedept.” The male said.
Forest: Night – 9 Years Later
A grayish-silver, spikey haired male, sitting against a tree with a wrapped up greatsword leaning on him with his right hand on the handle, wakes up. “It was only a dream.” He said.
“But why now? It’s been 9 years since Master was killed by that unknown monster.” He said. He looks at the greatsword. “Master, I’m sorry that I’m not following your teachings about friendship and partners. Please forgive me.” He said before falling back asleep.
Here's the Prologue for it. Opinions are welcome and if you want a hunter, I am sorry but all the roles are fulled already. Please enjoy the story.
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