Eternal Galaxy Project

For Starla, just need to figure out how to set up something similar for her history in Shinka. That can go back to the RP threads.
Meanwhile, Let's talk Nemesis.

Now I can use a lot about her from Iron Storm and Shinka Knights RPs.

And to summarize a bit...
Nemesis is to Aion as Cortana is to John.
Starla adapts Nemesis from android form to help Aion after she learns that he had been flying Eclipse Blade without an AI.

@Cucoo

So in other words, Aion did not really like Nemesis at first, but after they began to work together, they became close friends, and Nemesis improves upon what Aion is capable of, right?

In short yes. Even though he has seen what she can do as an Android, the notion of putting her into "his pride and joy" kinda put a damper on things at first. It wasn't until a sparrow missile went thru the cockpit and into his left shoulder, rendering him incapable of properly controlling Eclipse Blade, that his opinion changed as Nemesis helped control the fighter and didn't just try and bring him back to base but rather helped him finish the attack run.

There's a concept for like the culture of Maverick pilots I have...
Committing to Attack Run
When a squadron is about to execute an extremely dangerous attack run, each member would say "Committed to Attack Run!"
This is an oral contract stating that you will not "chicken out" of the attack and abandon your squad.
For Mavericks, they will go out of their way to keep a wounded craft in the fight (note the word craft). Because every fighter counts because of that shared energy concept.

So with that in mind, when Aion was wounded during an attack run, you could say he was being really stubborn when it came to people telling him to abort the run. So when Nemesis helped him continue on, that's when he changed his mind about having an AI in his fighter.


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@Cucoo

Ahh, I see. So after that, Aion kept her in his ship, right?

Right. And when not flying, she still has her original Android body.


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@Cucoo

Ahh, ok. :p

So, now that her history has been touched upon, what do we need to work on with her? Does her later history need more work?

Eternal Galaxy Project

Kinda... Cause right now... It could be possible that Nemesis is still around somewhere during Phoenix... Maybe critically damaged or something...


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@Cucoo

Dayum, how did she survive?

Then again, she is a machine, not a biological entity. :p

How would she have been critically damaged?

Test of time, not capable of properly repairing herself... I don't know where she would be or why...
...unless she's near where the space colony once was were Starla lived...


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@Cucoo

That would make sense.

Better yet, where would she have last been in your story? Same place?

Also, here's something interesting. I don't know if the material is real or not, but it might give you some ideas. :p

http://beta.techradar.com/news/world-of-tech/future-tech/10-mindblowing-uses-for-the-world-changing-substance-that-never-was-1156955