Note for the weak-hearted... there is blood in this story. And death. Just putting it out there.
A series about the mental hospital Gensokyo, and how their patients came to be. Uhh...feel free to comment. I do like my daily dose of constrictive critisism.
BTW, I also know it's called 'Hospital Gensokyo' but that title has a double meaning
Flandre Scarlet's account
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Flandre found herself sitting on a beautiful chair. The hall expanded to the horizon, farther than she could see. Stunning shades of red and gold glittered on the banners and carpets that furnished the grand room. Stain glass windows sparkled, the kaleidoscopic light pouring onto the polished granite floor. Far above, a crystal chandelier glittered, brighter than the sun. Maids wandered the room, cleaning the windows, pushing carts, and simply greeting each other cheerfully as they tended to their jobs.
Flandre’s long blond hair was neatly kept in a side ponytail. Her clothes were the royal scarlet robes fit for a queen.
The room smelled faintly of vanilla. Flandre straightened her back as a maid walked up to the throne, delicately handing her steaming cup of tea. Instead of the normal black color she was accustom with, the drink was bright red. Neverless, Flandre brought the cup up to drink it, the steam- no smoke, making her choke...
“Gyah!”
Flandre choked on the smoke that was clogging her throat. She opened her eyes, the air a hazy gray, the smoke burning the inside of her throat. Her eyes stung and she coughed.
A-a fire?
Flandre waved her hand in front of her face, hacking and coughing. She scrambled out of her bed, rolling off and hitting the floor with a soft thud.
Now she could see much better. Above her, the smoke obscured her vision. She pressed against the carpet, crawling over to the door. She scratched at the wood desperately, trying to grab the edge and push it open. Finally, she simply slammed her hand against the panel and the door creaked open.
Now that she was in the hallway, Flandre could see that there was, indeed, a fire. Orange flames licked the walls, burning the red paint away and sprinkling black ashes on the floor. The smoke was getting lower, only a foot above her head.
“Remilia? Sakuya?”
Flandre yelled for her sister and maid. Distantly, she heard the cry of “Sis!”
“Remilia? Where are you?”
“Over here! Sakuya has me!”
Flandre sighed in relief. Her arms were beginning to sting, and she could smell smoke coming off of herself. Remilia and Sakuya were okay, which only left-
Oh. Oh god, no.
She had completely forgot about her parents. In a daze, Flandre scrambled up and ran in the direction of her parent’s room, completely ignoring Remilia’s cries, the fire burning her dress, or the smoke choking her. She paid no heed to the door, choosing to blast it open with a well- placed kick.
“Mother? Fath-“
Flandre stopped mid-sentence. The fire was even worse in here, burning everything in the room, except for two figures that lay on the carpet. Blood splattered the white carpet deep crimson. Her parents both had knives embed in their chest, their clothes drenched in the horrid scarlet liquid.
“No...”
Flandre sank to her knees. She touched the lifeless flesh that was once her mother’s arm. It was cold under the strong grip of her hands.
“Mother! Answer me!”
Flandre shook her mother’s dead body, hoping for a response. The smoke spiraled down to reach her , forming a horrible mouth and eyes.
“I told you to be more careful, Flandre”
Her mother’s voice echoed in the back of her mind. Pieces of wood fell from the ceiling and burned her back, the pain almost unbearable, but Flandre stared at the two corpses before her eyes. The smoky mouth twisted into a horrid grin.
“You see, Flandre? You forgot to blow out the candles downstairs, and now look what’s happened. Your parents are dead, and your beloved manor is on fire. It's your fault”
Flandre felt like she was drifting away from reality. Her voice echoed across her mind, repeating one thing.
myfaultmyfaultmyfaultikilledthemandnowit’smyfaultM YFAULT
IT’S MY FAULT
I KILLED THEM
A series about the mental hospital Gensokyo, and how their patients came to be. Uhh...feel free to comment. I do like my daily dose of constrictive critisism.
BTW, I also know it's called 'Hospital Gensokyo' but that title has a double meaning
Flandre Scarlet's account
---
Flandre found herself sitting on a beautiful chair. The hall expanded to the horizon, farther than she could see. Stunning shades of red and gold glittered on the banners and carpets that furnished the grand room. Stain glass windows sparkled, the kaleidoscopic light pouring onto the polished granite floor. Far above, a crystal chandelier glittered, brighter than the sun. Maids wandered the room, cleaning the windows, pushing carts, and simply greeting each other cheerfully as they tended to their jobs.
Flandre’s long blond hair was neatly kept in a side ponytail. Her clothes were the royal scarlet robes fit for a queen.
The room smelled faintly of vanilla. Flandre straightened her back as a maid walked up to the throne, delicately handing her steaming cup of tea. Instead of the normal black color she was accustom with, the drink was bright red. Neverless, Flandre brought the cup up to drink it, the steam- no smoke, making her choke...
“Gyah!”
Flandre choked on the smoke that was clogging her throat. She opened her eyes, the air a hazy gray, the smoke burning the inside of her throat. Her eyes stung and she coughed.
A-a fire?
Flandre waved her hand in front of her face, hacking and coughing. She scrambled out of her bed, rolling off and hitting the floor with a soft thud.
Now she could see much better. Above her, the smoke obscured her vision. She pressed against the carpet, crawling over to the door. She scratched at the wood desperately, trying to grab the edge and push it open. Finally, she simply slammed her hand against the panel and the door creaked open.
Now that she was in the hallway, Flandre could see that there was, indeed, a fire. Orange flames licked the walls, burning the red paint away and sprinkling black ashes on the floor. The smoke was getting lower, only a foot above her head.
“Remilia? Sakuya?”
Flandre yelled for her sister and maid. Distantly, she heard the cry of “Sis!”
“Remilia? Where are you?”
“Over here! Sakuya has me!”
Flandre sighed in relief. Her arms were beginning to sting, and she could smell smoke coming off of herself. Remilia and Sakuya were okay, which only left-
Oh. Oh god, no.
She had completely forgot about her parents. In a daze, Flandre scrambled up and ran in the direction of her parent’s room, completely ignoring Remilia’s cries, the fire burning her dress, or the smoke choking her. She paid no heed to the door, choosing to blast it open with a well- placed kick.
“Mother? Fath-“
Flandre stopped mid-sentence. The fire was even worse in here, burning everything in the room, except for two figures that lay on the carpet. Blood splattered the white carpet deep crimson. Her parents both had knives embed in their chest, their clothes drenched in the horrid scarlet liquid.
“No...”
Flandre sank to her knees. She touched the lifeless flesh that was once her mother’s arm. It was cold under the strong grip of her hands.
“Mother! Answer me!”
Flandre shook her mother’s dead body, hoping for a response. The smoke spiraled down to reach her , forming a horrible mouth and eyes.
“I told you to be more careful, Flandre”
Her mother’s voice echoed in the back of her mind. Pieces of wood fell from the ceiling and burned her back, the pain almost unbearable, but Flandre stared at the two corpses before her eyes. The smoky mouth twisted into a horrid grin.
“You see, Flandre? You forgot to blow out the candles downstairs, and now look what’s happened. Your parents are dead, and your beloved manor is on fire. It's your fault”
Flandre felt like she was drifting away from reality. Her voice echoed across her mind, repeating one thing.
myfaultmyfaultmyfaultikilledthemandnowit’smyfaultM YFAULT
IT’S MY FAULT
I KILLED THEM
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