HI i have started writing a story and my grammar and phrasing are quite poor and I need help editing my story to be more coherent
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I can Help with grammar. -
i sent a private you a messageComment
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I've done some writing. I could help if needed.Originally posted by MogekoRelease the Yukkuri:Originally posted by Lord Prosciutto
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Ill try out a few people to see who works best and having more people opinions might helpComment
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Word can do a bit at least.Born in the light.
Molded in the dark.
Never Forget,
Keep Fighting.
–Don't Forget.
Always, somewhere,
someone is fighting for you.
–As long as you remember her,
you are not alone.Comment
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(I'm posting this cuz Yuuka just left to a place and wanted me to post this)
[Yuuka]:
Right now, I'm looking for people to analyse the story to see if it's any good.
We've already got enough people for grammar checking. (Kun_Kun and Leon)
If anyone wants to help with the analysing, don't mind posting.Originally posted by MogekoRelease the Yukkuri:Originally posted by Lord Prosciutto
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Yea if i could get someone to help give there opinion on the story and characters along with analyzing them for me to see if I'm getting the right feel and stuff across. Along with helping me by a little bit of BrainStorming so i can get over Writersblock easier and faster.Comment
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