Story Editor needed

Join Date: Jun 2013
Posts: 114

08/14/2015, 09:02 AM #1

HI i have started writing a story and my grammar and phrasing are quite poor and I need help editing my story to be more coherent

Kun_Kun

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Join Date: Aug 2015
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08/14/2015, 09:04 AM #2

I can Help with grammar.

yuuka

Join Date: Jun 2013
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08/14/2015, 09:11 AM #3

i sent a private you a message

99465

Join Date: May 2013
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08/14/2015, 09:11 AM #4

I've done some writing. I could help if needed.

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yuuka

Join Date: Jun 2013
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08/14/2015, 09:15 AM #5

Ill try out a few people to see who works best and having more people opinions might help

Katrix

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08/14/2015, 11:28 AM #6

Word can do a bit at least.

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99465

Join Date: May 2013
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08/14/2015, 12:12 PM #7

(I'm posting this cuz Yuuka just left to a place and wanted me to post this)
[Yuuka]:
Right now, I'm looking for people to analyse the story to see if it's any good.
We've already got enough people for grammar checking. (Kun_Kun and Leon)
If anyone wants to help with the analysing, don't mind posting.

Originally posted by Mogeko
Yummy prosciutto! Praise be to prosciutto!

Originally posted by Lord Prosciutto
Praise be to prosciutto.
..... I forgive the sin of all Mogeko.

Release the Yukkuri:

yuuka

Join Date: Jun 2013
Posts: 114

08/16/2015, 05:02 PM #8

Yea if i could get someone to help give there opinion on the story and characters along with analyzing them for me to see if I'm getting the right feel and stuff across. Along with helping me by a little bit of BrainStorming so i can get over Writersblock easier and faster.