[OOC Board] - All the World's a Game - Season II

@Kristia

That's why I said I wasn't worried about the augmentations. I don't think even I would be able to find an alternative. :p

As for ONI working in Prometheus Labs, I would say you do have a point. Halsey is ex-ONI, but she probably hates them more than anyone else in ATWAG. They tried to assassinate her. :p


This question is a little on topic, but a little off as well. So the Nassau Station is in the real world and is a base/home for Nicole, Melissia, and Vala? If so, then I would imagine that the MAC cannon is a great way to scare off solicitors and Jehovah's Witnesses... besides the fact that the station is in space. :p

The station was the first home for Nicole, but after deciding to live on the city of Nassau, she got a house, but kept surveillance of the space station from a camera room, she had a drop ship to travel between the house and the ship.

Depending on where I send Vala, (surely where Prometheus lab reside) The Nassau station will be on the orbit, but don´t try to send someone there, it is ´rotected by Melissa´s Firewalls and fail-saves :P

@Kristia

And then the random explorer was blown up by the MAC cannon. XD

I'm telling you, that MAC cannon might actually come in handy in the future, though I would NEVER recommend firing it at an enemy located on the Earth. The MAC cannon is a Mark V "Super" MAC with the explosive force of 51553.83 Megatons. To put that into perspective, the Nuke "Little Boy" had a yield of 13-18 kilotons, "Fatman" had an explosive yield of 20-22 kt, and the biggest nuclear bomb ever detonated, the Tsar Bomba, had an explosive yield of only 50-58 megatons.

That MAC might actually destroy a country, if not a continent. 0_0;

Of course, it wouldn't be crazy to think that the station has other weapons that could be used to perform orbital strikes against particularly powerful enemies. That might be a good asset for you. :p


As for trying to break into the station, I don't think you have to worry too much, Prometheus Labs would not be able to make use for the weapons on board. Too powerful for the missions they perform. That, and they already have the technology from their world.

Ah, I see you noticed that I have a powerful cannon, nice job Utsuh, I do have a plan for it, but it will be used when the time comes, because it is tied with Lucario, I got some issues with his part of how to make him, Samus, and Vala get together with specific enemies, but that issue will be attended when I need to deal with it.

@Kristia

Yes as, just be sure to aim the gun away from the planet. That weapon could really ruin someone's day. Also, it's a shame we didn't have that weapon during the Devourer Arc. Just imagine some of the bad guys riding a 3,000 ton bullet into space. :p


I actually have a few other questions about Vala, but it might get lengthy and make the app disappear. Should we continue this via PM?

I don´t have a problem, I know I will have an approval from Zekai, so 1 person more to approve her and BOOM, she will strike

don´t be worried to ask here, I will remind the others about the app

@Kristia

Well you have mine, if you didn't already.

Anyways, here's the questions.

1. When did she arrive into the real world?

2. Does she know the SPARTANS in Prometheus Labs? If so, I'll get to work on prepping some semi-apps.

3. I'm a little curious about this, but is she wearing MK V or VI armor?

After reading through, I am crestfallen to say that the recent apps of Zekai's have to be considered denied by me at least.

Here are the reasons why:

For Philia:
- Her weaknesses aren't exactly made clear, and the one that is already listed should be considered a possibly potential trauma.
- Her image is pitifully small. I couldn't even see the sword until I grabbed my glasses.
- Her biography leaves many things to be imagined. I have never watched SAO or played any SAO-inspired games in my life, so I have no idea who "Kirito" is or where the "Hollow Area region of Aincrad" is.

For Mimiru:
- A character that is blatantly from an anime. The rule 9 clearly states that the character must be originally from a game first, then the anime. And don't accuse that I didn't do my research, I did. .hack//link started in the late October of 2007. A PS2 game version was released in 2010.
- There's no explanation to what Xth form is, leaving the person watching the app to have to dig through the wiki to barely get an understanding of it.
- Again, too many proper nouns in the Biography and personality without too many explanation.

Thus, from me, the two app gets an UNACCEPTED from me until the problems above have been resolved in another edition.

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@Zekai

A quick tip with the apps, as I find them to be currently unacceptable. Though it's mostly with a seemingly lack of information.

Could you by chance list a little more about their skills instead of saying "Dagger skills and Broadsword skills"? It would be a little more useful to at least describe how skilled they are with a blade. For example when I made my app for Elsword (Lord Knight) I did this for his swordsmanship skills:

Elsword is also a master swordsman that excels at close range combat. He's quick on his feet and can hack and slash with the best of them. Not only can he dish it out but he can take a lot of punishment as well. His only real weakness is magic but in his mind, there's nothing a sharp piece of steel can't beat.
Eventually after 2 whole years of training he became the Sword Knight, a more experienced swordsman and with experience comes expertise. As a Sword Knight he became a far better swordsman with attacks that are powerful, and strong enough to destroy most armor and leave an enemy defenseless. He can also fight multiple targets at once. 1 on 1, though, he's almost unbeatable. I still had to make some of it up, and I did so by basing my information I got from what I saw and experienced watching gameplay and various other things.

Even if you have to, try and make up a little bit to make the app a little beefy in other parts. It may be filler, but if you can at least describe some things like how skilled are they with their weapons it would be a bit better rather than just leaving it as "Dagger Sword skills and Broadsword Skills" as it leaves a quite a bit to the imagination (leaving some things to the imagination is fine depending on the situation, but when it comes to making an app for a character from a pre-existing series it's generally a bit more useful to try and at least explain things yourself. If a wiki doesn't have the info, then try and make info based on observations you made or make while playing or watching a series.


That's just a little friendly advice from me.


I'm not denying the apps or anything, just giving a bit of useful advice when it comes to making an app for ATWAG as with ATWAG apps kinda need a bit more information instead of being simple. At least when it comes to abilities. With Bio's I'm a bit more open.


Everything else I'm just sort of... "Meh" about as I have no negative feelings about it or good things about it.

@Wriggle and SUS

The apps aren't even finished yet so don't go unaccepting (that one is towards Wriggle) and I have to find everything that goes with the skills (towards SUS). So WAIT UNTIL I SAY THEIR DONE BEFORE SAYING ANYTHING!!!!!