[OOC Board] Eternal Galaxy: Shards of Starlight - Part I

S121

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10/05/2013, 08:23 PM #201
@Cucoo

Solution?

Sign language.


No worries, John doesn't talk much either, so she's used to it.:p

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Cucoo5

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10/05/2013, 08:26 PM #202
true true XD

anyway here's sort of the initial starter I had for Nexion system


Venturia
Nexion System
Planet: Nexus
Capitol of the Venturian Council


Nexus, known as the great city in the sky. The shining towers and walkways seemed transparent. The glass city bore an elegance that seemed fitting for the Venturian Council, which had been responsible for keeping the peace in the galaxy. Now, it is a haven, a safe zone from the War of Eternity. Lady Avonna, the Head Priestess of the Council walked through the central structure known as the Palace of the Sky. Various tree-like decorations lined the paths. Everything bore the hues of the sunset, even though it was an early morning at Nexus.

"Milady!" One of the caretakers hurried to Avonna.
"Oh? What's wrong?" She spoke with a soothing voice that could almost make anyone forget their sorrows.
"I- I'm sorry to disturb you, b-but..."
"Take your time. It's alright."
"Well...uhm...ok...uh I have a daughter that always wanted to see both the Palace and wanted to meet you, so I was wondering...if...if-"
Avonna smiled and helped finish her question. "If she could? Of course, it would be my pleasure."
"Oh thank you milady!" And with that the caretaker ran off, happy that the Lady had accepted.
Avonna watched the young woman disappear around the corner, her smile faded when silence hung once more on the air.

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10/05/2013, 10:28 PM #203
@Cucoo

Just posted.

Just be sure to tell me if I made any mistakes with the planet.

The Slipspace rupture would easily be seen by anyone on the planet, due to how close it was.

Your turn.:p

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Cucoo5

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10/05/2013, 10:48 PM #204
Only one mistake with the planet.
It's...more like a Gas Giant. Like Jupiter, except its not perfectly spherical and resembles a sort of Nebulae in which there is a breathable atmosphere
My bad for not perfectly explaining that ^^;;

Think of the scene in Star Wars and the Sky City for color scheme.
And there is a core, like any gas giant.

Again my bad >.<;

Also I realized something...
John existed in a time when Earth still existed...
Not only is he in a different galaxy, but a future time.
I wonder how he'll react when he learns he's in a time a few hundred billion years since "Old Earth" was destroyed

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10/05/2013, 10:51 PM #205
@Cucoo

Ok.

While I edit it, you can reply. I'm not going to be changing much, so it will be safe.:p

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Cucoo5

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10/05/2013, 10:52 PM #206
of course...
hmm...I think I'll have Avonna's Royal Guard find him instead of Alpha Division...
Alpha Division is...how to say...not exactly the most hospitable hosts.

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10/05/2013, 10:55 PM #207
@Cucoo

Who's Alpha division? How nasty is Alpha division?

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10/05/2013, 11:32 PM #208
Alpha Division is actually the Professional Army Division of the Strike Fighters and takes orders from the Venturian Council directly and Is the larger of the 3 Divisions as they protect Nexion system. They're just really strict since Regalis is in command.

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10/05/2013, 11:38 PM #209
@Cucoo

Ahh, I see.

Honestly, I would have to say that John would be more of a threat than his ship.:p

He'd might as well have an ejector seat that propels him at the enemy's ship, turning him into a giant bullet.

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Cucoo5

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10/05/2013, 11:44 PM #210
Aye

Also, what's the biggest ship in Halo? I now have another wonder for what his reaction would be when he sees an Alpha Class Battle Cruiser, which I said is about the size of a planet in of itself (should come up with a more definitive definition =w=')