Trinity Soul University: A Casual Magic RP (OOC)

SereneGrace

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04/30/2014, 04:34 PM #1061
Okay now here is her Butler Jonathan.

NPC Name: Jonathan

Age: Well into his 50's, being about 35 or so when Charlotte first turned into a vampire. Also despite his age he is quite a healthy and well-fit man, one would say he is not even human.

Abilities: Dark Magic: Teleportation/Close Combat: Jonathan is quite a skilled Dark Magic user, using his dark magic to teleport from one location to another if enough energy is used. Although this is highly draining for him, and as such he only uses it to teleport to his mistress or to teleport both himself and Charlotte out of danger. He's also quite adept at using Dark magic in his attacks, embueing each punch and kick of his with a bit of Dark Magic to create a small black shockwave when he strikes someone. Luckily he is quite skilled in the Hapkido fighting style to compliment his magic.

Gender: Male

Appearance:
Spoiler
He stands at 6ft 1.

Personality: He is quite sensible, and always remains calm in most situations. Only ever losing his cool whenever someone harms or attempts to do something bad to Charlotte of whom he considers as a daughter. He will go to any lengths to make Charlotte as happy, and comfortable as can be. This compared to Charlotte's original parents makes him seem like a saint. He loves her to the extent that he doesn't care that she is a vampire, deciding to go with her and leaving the rest of the Spade family behind.

When it comes to other matters he is like I said, calm. He respects others, and whenever he is not helping Charlotte he will be helping to help others if he is asked to do something (though he is more likely to help someone with something if they had earned his trust.) This makes him not just loyal to Charlotte, but even to others... as long as they had earned his trust.
Luna Pixu

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04/30/2014, 04:57 PM #1062
@Serena
Kind and well-mannered? When I saw that picture, I was thinking of a somewhat bratty and childish character like Remilia. It gives an air of Lawful Evil or Chaotic Neutral instead of what seems like a proposed Good or Lawful Good. Hmm... Regardless, it's nice to see another vampire character. After all, I really like them (or absolutely love them in the case of the Scarlet sisters).
Could this be a partial replacement for Sarah (Bloody) Hunnigan? Well, not completely as Sarah is still a student and a character but her owner has gone. Maybe permanently. But, who knows? (Maybe SUSTIC and/or myself).

It appears that Charlotte is another rich girl of sorts. One that has a butler and everything... I can go along with that. Right now, we only have at least 2 other rich characters so we aren't at risk of having too many. You know, I would like to see some kind of rivalry of rich families. Namely Spade vs. Noelle (Rachel's family). I would include Stallion but all of the Stallions except for Cygnus were murdered and Cygnus would not engage in combat unless he deemed the target a threat.

Blood Magic. That seems alright. We definitely need more characters in certain elements. Blood is a slight exception considering the minute rule around it and also the nature of it. But it's nice to see that Katrix isn't completely controlling the blood scene. But where Charlotte's magic is in making blood crystals (which sounds AWESOME!), Sinuda's magic is more varied and chaotic. But so far, the only examples that have been shown or alluded to are Sinuda's blood solidification, hemokinesis, and manipulation of blood flow. If taken in a certain direction, Blood Magic could become highly dangerous to both the user and their target.

All in all, this is a decent app. The only complaints I really have are minor ones that make little difference and also the age. This isn't necessarily a problem considering vampiric growth cycles (or lack of a growth cycle) but the general age for students is 18-24. But this can be changed for other races and certain exceptions. And in the case of vampirism, I think exceptions can be made. I usually go by a combination of the Young Dracula and Scarlet Archives takes on vampiric development where natural born vampires start with a development like humans but slows down at a certain age (varying from vampire to vampire). For vampires who had been turned, like Charlotte, their physical age is either fixed or their growth is slowed to speeds even lower than that of natural borns. With this in mind, it's fair to say that Charlotte can be accepted with an age of 30. Because, despite it being middle-aged for humans, that can be considered young for vampires.

So in short, I think Charlotte is good to go. A very interesting and mixed up character which might add quite a bit to the story. Accepted by TRXD

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SUSTIC

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04/30/2014, 05:10 PM #1063
If it makes any solace to you TRXD I did allow Jasmine to make a character with Blood Magic.

Also as for age as long as one is of 18 years of age (which includes a vampire that is stuck in the body of a 15 year old, yet is well over 20) they can attend the university. So Charlotte is mostly in the clear when it comes to age.
SereneGrace

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04/30/2014, 05:10 PM #1064
@TRXD

Yeah I feel like I should have made a few slight changes to it with the age, and a bit of her personality.

As for Blood Magic I did ask Sustic if I could use Blood Magic and he did say yes to it.
Luna Pixu

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04/30/2014, 05:19 PM #1065
@SUSTIC and Serena
Did you honestly think that I didn't think of that? That why I said about the "minute rule", the rule being that you need SUSTIC's permission to have blood magic for your character. A rule that is obviously in place due to the level of danger that be brought about from using such a thing.
Seriously, when two people know each other IRL, I think it's to be expected that one of them asked the other beforehand.

And why are you picking on that paragraph, out of all the others? Blood magic was the thing that I was the most ok with. I had no problems with it at all. Literally none and yet people think otherwise. Why do people sometimes think the exact opposite of what I think or what I want people to think?

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Zekai

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04/30/2014, 05:29 PM #1066
@TRXD

When you get the chance, SUS and S1 need to talk to you about something.

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Luna Pixu

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04/30/2014, 05:46 PM #1067
@Zekai
I wonder (and dread to think of) what it could be about. I'm going to be having dinner shortly so I'll have to ask them afterwards. That or SUSTIC could just PM me.

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SUSTIC

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04/30/2014, 05:54 PM #1068
Well I would wait until you get on Mumble, but if you don't want to get on Mumble TRXD then I'll PM it to you. It's not bad or anything, just a magic concept Zekai had. Also TRXD I wouldn't say that. Just our natural thought processes to respond to every single one of those instances you brought up. Including the Blood Magic.
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SUSTIC

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04/30/2014, 06:08 PM #1069
I should also mention that The NPC Jonathan, the butler of Charlotte is accepted in case TRXD did not accept Jonathan's app.
Luna Pixu

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04/30/2014, 06:19 PM #1070
@SUSTIC
I only looked over Charlotte. Jonathan's app was posted while I was still making mine. But he would have been accepted regardless.

And a magic concept proposed by Zekai? Hmm... This'll be interesting...
"T... T-chan...? Why won't you let it go?"
What are you talking about? And who gave you the right to break the 4th wall? I only let Flandre do it from time to time.
*yelps* "Oh! I-I-I didn't know! I'm really really really sorry! Please! But... before I... I erm... Before I go, could I ask... Why... Why don't you let that sense controversy go? I thought it was... dead..."

<To be continued>

Smash through the blocks that bar your way; No time for fear, just let it all fall away; Nobody believes in me and you, Just look at the way they stare; So what if we live in a walled garden, As long as I've got you then I don't care!


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