Trinity Soul University REVAMPED: A Casual Magic RP [OOC]
05/31/2015, 08:23 PM #661
I did the thing. Took some time out of playing Splatoon to do it. But I did the thing.
Smash through the blocks that bar your way; No time for fear, just let it all fall away; Nobody believes in me and you, Just look at the way they stare; So what if we live in a walled garden, As long as I've got you then I don't care!
My Switch Friend Code: SW-1503-3394-5328
My NNID: OfficialTRXD
Steam: http://steamcommunity.com/id/lunapixu/
My Switch Friend Code: SW-1503-3394-5328
My NNID: OfficialTRXD
Steam: http://steamcommunity.com/id/lunapixu/
06/02/2015, 05:39 AM #663
Still accepting apps?
06/02/2015, 06:30 AM #666
Name:Noizu Tamashi
Race:Ghost
Age:18
Bio:Only son of two musicians that have recently passed away in an inccident.This child now travels alone making his money by
playing music just after he discovered his magic.When he finished studying 12 grade he knew the university he was looking for,that being Trinity soul university.
Gender:male
What Element/and or type of magic:Sound magic,He uses his ability mostly to control the sound of his violin,voice or noises.Has recently learned to make echo walls.THis recent discovery actually helps with echoing any sound but if not controled correctly might break.
Luggage:Clothing,3ds,books(lots of books),Music player,board games,Money and violin.
Appearance:![]()
Why did you come to the University?:So i could master my sound magic
Personality:shy to strangers but is has a nice personality that makes friends happy
Other: (This is for any notes about your character that should be listed.)
Suggestions: (This is for any suggestions about the RP, like if you have any suggestions for me to add or fix.)
Race:Ghost
Age:18
Bio:Only son of two musicians that have recently passed away in an inccident.This child now travels alone making his money by
playing music just after he discovered his magic.When he finished studying 12 grade he knew the university he was looking for,that being Trinity soul university.
Gender:male
What Element/and or type of magic:Sound magic,He uses his ability mostly to control the sound of his violin,voice or noises.Has recently learned to make echo walls.THis recent discovery actually helps with echoing any sound but if not controled correctly might break.
Luggage:Clothing,3ds,books(lots of books),Music player,board games,Money and violin.
Appearance:
Why did you come to the University?:So i could master my sound magic
Personality:shy to strangers but is has a nice personality that makes friends happy
Other: (This is for any notes about your character that should be listed.)
Suggestions: (This is for any suggestions about the RP, like if you have any suggestions for me to add or fix.)
06/02/2015, 06:42 AM #667
An advice Nitori, the apps will be important for the other users to know about your character, how he acts around, what he likes and dislikes, etcetera, it is good to have good information for the app so it can be better understood about it, and this one can be developed even more
Have you ever crossed the line between sanity and madness? You would be amazed by what lies beyond the fog..
Spoiler
06/02/2015, 07:42 AM #668
What Kristia said, but gonna make it more in-depth.
Idea-wise, I like it. Reminds me of a scrapped character of mine named Melody (Here's the app if you want reference). Sound magic is actually a pretty diverse magic type, and you captured one part of it that I didn't even think about: wave, echo, and resonance.
The bio... could use a lot of work. Of course it's a bit biased opinion because I am known for writing over-the-top biographies for all my characters (Skylark, my ~5,000 word app in all my RPs, but ask Sustic (GM) or other roleplayers and they'll also say that the bio is lacking in terms of backstory. The only information we get is that he is a spooky ghost and a musician. (Lunasa?) I as a moderator would like to know what happened; what aspect of the accident did his spirit be bound as a ghost and not reach enlightenment?
Another thing that needs work is his personality. Not saying that having another shy guy is a bad idea, but a real person's personality has more flavor and more depth than a single sentence.
Overall, gonna use some fattening up, but definitely could be turned into a satisfactory app.
Idea-wise, I like it. Reminds me of a scrapped character of mine named Melody (Here's the app if you want reference). Sound magic is actually a pretty diverse magic type, and you captured one part of it that I didn't even think about: wave, echo, and resonance.
The bio... could use a lot of work. Of course it's a bit biased opinion because I am known for writing over-the-top biographies for all my characters (Skylark, my ~5,000 word app in all my RPs, but ask Sustic (GM) or other roleplayers and they'll also say that the bio is lacking in terms of backstory. The only information we get is that he is a spooky ghost and a musician. (Lunasa?) I as a moderator would like to know what happened; what aspect of the accident did his spirit be bound as a ghost and not reach enlightenment?
Another thing that needs work is his personality. Not saying that having another shy guy is a bad idea, but a real person's personality has more flavor and more depth than a single sentence.
Overall, gonna use some fattening up, but definitely could be turned into a satisfactory app.
06/02/2015, 09:50 AM #669
Call my name and I shall appear. What do you need, Wriggle?