And I ninja edited again.
Something I learned with Eternal Galaxy when I was writing it...
Because I started with the end and focused on the end for such a long time, I kept expanding on the end of the story. I wrote sequels to the end, adding more scenes to it, never coming to a decisive end. I kept adding "Ok I'll have this happen and end it there...but wait...I could throw this in and use this as a plot twist and do that and then end it...but then I could...and then...and then..."
I kept going with that to the point where I had what I called "Part IV" (this was before when Echoes of Time was Part III and I had Blaze of Chaos as Part II)
Basically It was an inside joke where I said that my entire ending sequence for Echoes of Time could be a stand alone part If I wasn't careful.
So I nixed it.
All that planning I threw away.
Instead I went with my second ending after my overhaul. My more decisive ending that was to prevent me from writing a sequel.
Have everyone die.
Simple, Tragic, and powerful. Just what I wanted.
It worked for the most part....
But I wrote out the current Part III anyway. But I still deem my Part II end perfect as I prevented myself from continuing on with Aion and the main group.
I ended that story.
That's sort of what I want to see here right now. An end to this story and then lead in to the next. We close the curtain and say
Exit Everyone.
and then have it where we can finally say
Begin Act II (Season II)
EDIT:
Also I kinda cringed initially because this scenario that happened with me in Eternal Galaxy happened back when Wriggle wanted everyone at the funeral to be the end, but then that card game happened...
the "but wait...I could throw this in..." situation I went through with my own story.
I find it Ironic that I would find myself looking at a situation similar to what I went through not that long ago (a year...and it took me a year to finally end my madness) and see it practically repeat before my eyes now that I finally look at it in comparison...
It's scary...
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