Eternal Galaxy Project

[Cucoo5]

Eternal Galaxy Project

Ok begging for help now.
I need other people to actually read and ask questions about the timeline or even tell me what you see in it because I'm starting to think that I have explanations in plain sight and I don't know of them.

Please.

[Cucoo5]

This is a reminder that the other two factions, the Commonwealth and Federation, need some depth added to them.

[Cucoo5]

Eternal Galaxy Project

The questions that shall never be answered.

"Why do you fight for this universe, Aion? You know it is doomed."

"Why, Trace? Why save a dying Galaxy? Why prolong its death?"

"Everything is gone, Eleos. Why are you still searching?"

"Why do you dwell in the past, Starla? Why haven't you moved on?"

"You can't save everyone, Kiara. Why can't you accept that?"

"They're gone, Terrisa. Why can't you let them go?"

"There's nothing you can do to bring them back, Joe. Why do you keep holding on?"

"Why are you afraid of your past, Lotus? You didn't do anything wrong."

"Why are you all afraid?"


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[Cucoo5]

Rifts are pockets of decayed Aura energy that caused weaknesses in space-time.

Rift affects:

Aging/anti-aging

Instinct timing/ "being in the right place at the right time"

Insanity

Fissure Sight

Corlaviri Sickness

Gaia / Aura Affinity

[Cucoo5]

Ok we're on the homestretch now. Next sections to tackle are Venion, Nexion, Helios, and Daedalus.
At this rate it'll be done sooner rather than later.
Then the next challenge is Echoes... which will be a real pain cause I never really delved that far before. Hell I never really went this far ever. The middle of SoS and the beginning and middle of EoT have never been really explored before so this is unknown territory for these sections.

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For when I wake up tomorrow:

Lotus is the answer for Venion
She could be a descendant of someone related to Aetheron or Erebos.

[Cucoo5]

EGALE SECTION HAS BEEEN COMPLETED
Thanks to S1 and Mima for coming up with the simple concept that the Federation don't know jack shit on what's going on and therefore meaning the group has to move on to find answers.

Now I finally get to the fun part that starts to lead to the climax. Inopia and the Temple of the Lost has been started and I figure that it would be the best part to have Strix be captured by the Commonwealth forcing them into the caverns of Inopia. With a twist, they also are followed by Lotus which helps tie up her story. Then I get to kill off a few members of Strix because they've been getting through this without incident and that needs to change.

It feels good to finally get into new parts again~

[Cucoo5]

Ok So here's the more current version of the timeline.
Comment/edit mode enabled so feel free to mark it up.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...it?usp=sharing
Egale section is the last part that I have a lot of details for so just scroll to the bottom and then scroll up.

Now
Excuse me as I side track my entire existence around the realization that I can make Eternal Galaxy: Tracer actually work and that every era has one common theme that ties everything together.
Basically, I'm going to have a list of "Revolutionaries" for each Era, and Trace, the AI girl that I mentioned in the prior post, will be one of them.

So just to list them out here:

VOID:
- Venturia
- Aion (Caeles)

Prism:
- Aion Leonares
- Tina
- Cicero
- Nero
- Sarah

Tracer:
- Trace

Reaper's Call:
- Eleos

Shattered Ice Flower:
- Achlys
- Marcus
- Kiara

Twin Rebellion
- Orion
- Jade

Shards of Starlight/ Echoes of Time:
- Aion Rixtravius
- Revere Exorco

Phoenix:
- Ignis

This is also going to be the list of characters whose perspectives I would be focusing on in each story.

Also have the music and art that helped everything click

[Cucoo5]

Ok new developments and a cry for help

So first off I've just figured out what's up with this period of time I'm calling the Great Blank, within which there is an event known as Trace's Revolution which would result in a regression in technology as AIs and augmentations are destroyed and banned respectively.

Basic story is that the Venturians achieve a state in which they believe they have perfected everything and thus turned the galaxy into a utopia. Everyone believed this until an AI girl named Trace proves otherwise. The resulting revolution would bring an end to this Golden Age.

Now the cry for help is concerning what I'm calling the Egale portion of Shards of Starlight.
Specifically the event that lead up to the Lost Princess passage and the events that occur after.
I'll post later what I have once I update the Timeline.

[Cucoo5]

@ S1
Took me way too long to make this, but I did it.

Also I finally think I got the concept down on the logo for EG down.

[Cucoo5]

From exploring how the tech works I also figured out what to do with the 80k years that are missing in the timeline which will explain why the outer rim is currently so desolate and why boundary planets exist.

Tracer Revolution
AIs are destroyed

Great Blank
Technology regression

War of the Rim

UPDATE:

To keep track of where things are in the Outer Rim (and because it is a lot larger of an area than the Inner Rim) I'm dividing it into twelve sectors that will be codenamed using the Zodiac



Each sector will contain a "capital system" which, until a better idea comes up, will be called what the sector is named.

This will at least give the Outer Rim some reference points as I start working out the Tracer Revolution which brings the technology of Venturia from pure perfection to its current state. Basically, technology in Venturia evolves so rapidly they actually perfect almost everything, manage to destroy the Nihiliods, and live Utopian lives. But things got too perfect and then someone tried to push things beyond with an AI system known as Tracer. This Tracer Revolution would ultimately result in the destruction of the utopian culture and technology and bring about the regression of technology and the ban on AI which lasts for a few generations.

[Cucoo5]

Ok so I just realized how Venturian Equipment could work. So now I'm preparing a document that details everything from power cores to weaponry. Also it will explain how Gaia and Aura energy break the laws of physics.

[Cucoo5]

Sedes Imperii would originally be a smaller planet than Earth and Nova Engine Failure would be due to bad Crystal Pairs. So it could be just a maintenance accident.

[S121]

@Cucoo

How large is this planet? What could have caused The Thunderbolt to fail?

[Cucoo5]

Or they didn't really bother since they have the floating cities. So a Nova Engine equipped fighter, and I'm thinking it was a Thunderbolt, went kaboom down on Sedes Imperii's surface, affecting the structure of the planet and its atmosphere, turning it Into what it currently is.

[S121]

@Cucoo

They basically had to glue a planet back together?