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  • S121
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    @Cucoo

    Dawn of the Timemaster?

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  • Cucoo5
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    I've been trying to think on using something relating to beginnings since that's sort of the context... Can't use "Origins" though cause it isn't. That would be era of the void.

    Maybe something related to Dawn...




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  • S121
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    @Cucoo

    Damn... that is a hard one... 0-e;

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  • Cucoo5
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    It's target themes is the introduction of Aion and the others that I just mentioned. It focuses on the Prometheos and Arcains and their lifestyles during the beginnings of the Arcain Revolt. It introduces the Gaia Computer and the premise of the Caeles however it doesn't delve too far into the Caeles aspects. It ends with the second Phoenix incident, which in perspective of the characters, is the first time.


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  • S121
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    What's the premise of the first book, besides the Caeles? That themes does it have?

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  • Cucoo5
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    Actually... I think I solved the time travel "knowledge carried over" due to the limitations by the beast of time. They wouldn't use it often...if at all. However Aetheron is blinded later so he might have tried that...

    Also Revere is killed so Aion's time travel is a one-way trip so can't do much there.

    As for perspectives, considering the fact that the two groups are attempting to achieve different goals to a degree using the same situation, they might have differing sets of "knowledge" on what's going on.

    ...tbh I think I should write this first book part that takes place in Era of the Dawn. Once I establish those events the rest should follow...

    ...still need to decide on a subtitle for the part.


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  • S121
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    @Cucoo

    Why's that? Also, which perspectives?

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  • Cucoo5
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    Well a start would be the characters from EotD (Cicero, Nero, Aion, Aetheron, Erebos, Aurora).
    What each individual knows affects the group as a whole.
    Cicero Nero and Aurora are one perspective while the others are another.
    The hard part is factoring in where time travel is.


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  • S121
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    @Cucoo

    Hmm...

    So where do we start?

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  • Cucoo5
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    Remembering the fact that Tina's spirit was "programmed" into Aurora via the Gaia Computer...
    And that Aion doesn't know this exactly...
    ...Well I don't have anything particular in mind...
    Tbh this is a part that would be tedious to work out in terms of "who knows what and when."



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  • S121
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    @Cucoo

    What do you have in mind with the "spirit"?

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  • Cucoo5
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    Not quite...
    He dislikes Aurora for two/three reasons:
    1. She was created by Cicero and he blames Cicero for everything because he initiated the start of the Phoenix Code.
    2. She activated the Phoenix Code, causing him to lose everything in his perspective.
    3. She saved him and not Terrisa.

    Despite this, he doesn't absolutely hate her, in part because he believes there's more to Aurora than he originally thought. The whole spirit business could kick in here and explain that... Maybe.


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  • S121
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    @Cucoo

    So it's essentially just because he hates Aurora and wants her dead?

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  • Cucoo5
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    In a sense, yes.


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  • S121
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    @Cucoo

    So it's revenge?

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