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Major Mario

Major Mario

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08/03/2014, 03:18 AM #11291
Shoot. Writer's block and exhaustion are setting in. I'll finish the OOC in the morning, I hope...

Kristia

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08/03/2014, 03:50 AM #11292
then take a good rest Major, there is no pressure

Have you ever crossed the line between sanity and madness? You would be amazed by what lies beyond the fog..

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WriggleRid3r

WriggleRid3r

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08/03/2014, 05:36 AM #11293
Let me know right now where I need to post and I'll get it done first thing when I wake up tomorrow.

Good night.

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Major Mario

Major Mario

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08/03/2014, 04:29 PM #11294
Well Wriggle, the only thing I can think of is Hoenn, but I think SUSTIC said something about Clockwork Voyage. Something about pirates and an airship battle and Mard.

wonderweiss

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08/03/2014, 04:40 PM #11295
SUSTIC, you on? I want to ask you something!
SUSTIC

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08/03/2014, 04:44 PM #11296
*Pops out of nowhere behind Wonder*

Yes? What is it you need stranger?

wonderweiss

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08/03/2014, 05:33 PM #11297
Can you take a quick skim over my Shonen app to see what should be changed other than being a teacher?
SUSTIC

SUSTIC

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08/03/2014, 05:48 PM #11298
@Wonder

Well what I would do is I would make him younger, don't make him as powerful (tone down his abilities, maybe give a few weaknesses as well), and change up the backstory a bit. Also change his personality and all regarding to him being a teacher and try and rewrite it in the way you would if you were making him as a student the first time around rather than a teacher.

That is all I can say really. You can change whatever you want to make it seem more fitting as a student rather than a teacher.

wonderweiss

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08/03/2014, 05:58 PM #11299
Okay. Do I still keep Toten Larm or do I keep that as a hidden ability?

And final question, can all that happened in the past still happen only in a shorter time span in years? Like two years should be enough, he would be 21 at the point he enrolled.
SUSTIC

SUSTIC

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08/03/2014, 06:10 PM #11300
Okay the whole Toten Larm thing I can allow, but I would be very careful with it, and probably put some limit on it like he is unsure of how to properly use it or some limits to it.

As for the backstory that can be potentially done. Just make the app and I will see.