At least you will enjoy a good dinner with your family :)
And wonder, I liked your story, it was well written too
RP General Discussion
09/01/2014, 11:19 PM #11552
I'm back.
@ Kristia
Really? Ya mean it?
Is there anything wrong with it though? I personally feel I stressed the plot twists. Let's see here...
And this is a real spoiler. So yea. Spoiliops.
2. Henry's not so bad a guy.
3. Belle betrayed Henry.
4. Or so he thought.
5. By the way, the hunter is an actually important piece of the story.
6. Belle fails at convincing the village that the hunter lied about the beast still existing and is therefore burnt at the stake.
7. Or so they thought.
8. Belle is actually Angel Aeryth, creator of the Sword of Aeryth.
9. Sword of Aeryth doesn't actually burn.
10. The hunter decides to let the beast and the angel live in happiness.
11. Or so they freakin thought. Aeryth/Belle gets stabbed by the hunter.
12. Belle was actually attacked by the beasts a long time ago.
13. The villagers decide to burn the village and give the land back to Henry.
14. Henry goes through complete transformation.
15. Complete transformation is lethal.
16. The events actually tie in to the main story of the present time (in the upcoming collab trilogy)
17. Scientists decide to create a chimera based on the tales of Henry Worshipper.
In the end, chapter seven was the worst offender. I just wanna know if I overdid it.
@ Kristia
Really? Ya mean it?
Is there anything wrong with it though? I personally feel I stressed the plot twists. Let's see here...
And this is a real spoiler. So yea. Spoiliops.
Spoiliops
1. The Assassin let him live.2. Henry's not so bad a guy.
3. Belle betrayed Henry.
4. Or so he thought.
5. By the way, the hunter is an actually important piece of the story.
6. Belle fails at convincing the village that the hunter lied about the beast still existing and is therefore burnt at the stake.
7. Or so they thought.
8. Belle is actually Angel Aeryth, creator of the Sword of Aeryth.
9. Sword of Aeryth doesn't actually burn.
10. The hunter decides to let the beast and the angel live in happiness.
11. Or so they freakin thought. Aeryth/Belle gets stabbed by the hunter.
12. Belle was actually attacked by the beasts a long time ago.
13. The villagers decide to burn the village and give the land back to Henry.
14. Henry goes through complete transformation.
15. Complete transformation is lethal.
16. The events actually tie in to the main story of the present time (in the upcoming collab trilogy)
17. Scientists decide to create a chimera based on the tales of Henry Worshipper.
In the end, chapter seven was the worst offender. I just wanna know if I overdid it.
09/01/2014, 11:31 PM #11553
Katrix had brought up un-deleting EG: Shards of Starlight and I had explained why I originally had it deleted in the first place, but I feel I should post this here so as to let everyone else know:
The reason I didn't explain it openly originally was because I feared trolls getting bright ideas if I made clear why I was paranoid.
Spoiler
Originally posted by Katrix
So, I was wondering if you would be okay with undeleting the parts of EG where people actually RP-ed. As you can see, there are many reasons to not have them deleted, and They'll still be locked so no one can actually post anything new there. If you do have a problem with undeleting it, could you tell me in detail why?
Originally posted by Cucoo5
...of all the things I have come to regret throughout the 10 years of working on EG, this was one I wish I didn't have to.
If it ends the complaints, then go ahead.
But I will explain why I did this in the first place:
The fact that I finally am starting to piece together things finally made me realize that I could achieve actually finishing EG and therefore begin to look at publishing it and trying to make money off it. However, because I'm slow on writing EG, and the fact my parents warn me continuously of people with malicious intents, I grew paranoid that someone would steal EG from me.
The original reason I even posted EG here was more or less naïve curiosity. To get feedback on it and to see how people would react to it.
Everything went wrong in that regard and so when paranoia began to set in as I mentioned earlier, I went for the simplest means of trying to put my mind at ease knowing that key information was eliminated.
Originally posted by Katrix
It's not like I want to force you into undeleting it, and if you abselutely want to keep it hidden, that is fine. About someone stealing it tough, you do realize that EG is copyright protected right? No one can legally steal EG.
Originally posted by Cucoo5
Waitwutitiscopyrightprotected?
...what legal literature says so?
If it really is then my paranoia really is unjustified.I thought I needed some sort of legal documentation that says EG is mine should someone try to claim it
Originally posted by Katrix
Any, and when I say any I mean ANY created work is automatically created with copyright. You know all those stories that's written in the literature section. All of them are copyright protected. As long as you don't infringe on someone else's copyright, then you have copyright on your creation.
Originally posted by Cucoo5
Ok then
Alright if that's the case then bring back the needed threads.
The reason I didn't explain it openly originally was because I feared trolls getting bright ideas if I made clear why I was paranoid.
09/01/2014, 11:43 PM #11554
Cucoo, we all know you are paranoid, it´s your work and it is acceptable, but as Katrix said, you should have asked us if we were ok with you deleting the threads.
I didn´t know things were copyrighted here either (my story is in fanfiction and created by me as N3raluna just to let you know!) so your work is safe
I didn´t know things were copyrighted here either (my story is in fanfiction and created by me as N3raluna just to let you know!) so your work is safe
Have you ever crossed the line between sanity and madness? You would be amazed by what lies beyond the fog..
Spoiler
09/01/2014, 11:55 PM #11555
Aye, but I figured a full explanation was in order.
Also this points out the fact that the other EG threads are not actually "deleted."
Therefore restoring the threads are possible.
Also this points out the fact that the other EG threads are not actually "deleted."
Therefore restoring the threads are possible.
09/02/2014, 12:38 AM #11556
i thought they were erased, I guess Remi just put them "invisible" to the normal users, right?
And actually, if you make EG reborn, I´m willing to help you on whatever you need, the the golden eyed woman wants to makes some glorious tests
And actually, if you make EG reborn, I´m willing to help you on whatever you need, the the golden eyed woman wants to makes some glorious tests
Have you ever crossed the line between sanity and madness? You would be amazed by what lies beyond the fog..
Spoiler
09/02/2014, 01:48 AM #11557
I have 90% certainty that that's what Remi did.
And saying EG Reborn...
...I guess EG Phoenix is really going to live up to its name...
Also I'll take you up on that offer.
http://yukkuricraft.net/showthread.php?2301-Eternal-Galaxy-Project
Now I am still attempting to divert away from EG's Timeline for Phoenix...
But I think it will help to know where EG's Timeline is to begin with.
I'm hoping that by having people question various parts of Eternal Galaxy it will become easier to recreate EG Phoenix so that it no longer is Eternal Galaxy.
I don't know how this will work but my hope is that this time it will work.
Especially considering the fact I've gone full circle with EG and brought it back to being a story rather than...well...everything else I've been trying to make it.
And speaking of experiments, I've done my share of tests with EG... though I think it's safe to say they all blew up in my face and ultimately caused more damage than I could have ever predicted.
...Some of the damage I don't even know if I'll ever be able to fix.
One thing that I've been wondering is if I'm overstaying my welcome here.
I've shot myself in the foot, head,knee within this last year and therefore think I've destroyed myself to the point where I've lost any sort of respect. Do I have a voice left to work with here or do I have nothing?
I want to know where I stand before I do anything further... if I stand at all.
And saying EG Reborn...
...I guess EG Phoenix is really going to live up to its name...
Also I'll take you up on that offer.
http://yukkuricraft.net/showthread.php?2301-Eternal-Galaxy-Project
Now I am still attempting to divert away from EG's Timeline for Phoenix...
But I think it will help to know where EG's Timeline is to begin with.
I'm hoping that by having people question various parts of Eternal Galaxy it will become easier to recreate EG Phoenix so that it no longer is Eternal Galaxy.
I don't know how this will work but my hope is that this time it will work.
Especially considering the fact I've gone full circle with EG and brought it back to being a story rather than...well...everything else I've been trying to make it.
And speaking of experiments, I've done my share of tests with EG... though I think it's safe to say they all blew up in my face and ultimately caused more damage than I could have ever predicted.
...Some of the damage I don't even know if I'll ever be able to fix.
One thing that I've been wondering is if I'm overstaying my welcome here.
I've shot myself in the foot, head,
I want to know where I stand before I do anything further... if I stand at all.
09/02/2014, 02:08 AM #11558
Hm.. I can only say you are you, be it good or bad since it is normal.
I just know what you post here so I don't know what you guys speak about in Mumble and I know you people speak more stuff ther than here.
I don't mind who you are or what you do unless you intentionally hurt someone, I think of myself rather whiny or desperate while waiting for you guys to post something since this place has been lonely, but that is my point of view
What you do or who you are is what you want to show us, so just be yourself.
I just know what you post here so I don't know what you guys speak about in Mumble and I know you people speak more stuff ther than here.
I don't mind who you are or what you do unless you intentionally hurt someone, I think of myself rather whiny or desperate while waiting for you guys to post something since this place has been lonely, but that is my point of view
What you do or who you are is what you want to show us, so just be yourself.
Have you ever crossed the line between sanity and madness? You would be amazed by what lies beyond the fog..
Spoiler
09/02/2014, 02:27 AM #11559
Aye...
But it still seems that me being me (and therefore having a one track mind dedicated to EG) has caused damage and I'm trying to figure out if I can fix some of the "damage".
Those that do bear anything against me is primarily who I'm talking to with this.
I want to try and clean up all the mistakes and make amends.
But it still seems that me being me (and therefore having a one track mind dedicated to EG) has caused damage and I'm trying to figure out if I can fix some of the "damage".
Those that do bear anything against me is primarily who I'm talking to with this.
I want to try and clean up all the mistakes and make amends.
