Alright!
I should be able to put more into the App process and stuff after work tonight. If you have ANY questions or things you feel need clarification, let me know so I can work on it when I get home!
[OOC] Exceed the Dawn
02/16/2016, 05:26 AM #31
I gazed up at the sable-haired maiden with eyes so full of warmth it appeared she was crying silently. My trecherous mouth opened, "Why do you look so troubled, Princess?"
Slowly, she moved her eyes from the moon to me. She studied my imperfections before her for what seemed to be a blissful eternity before gracing me with her voice, "I've slain this land's only prince. What use, now, is a princess?"
As the maiden left my presence, so too did my heart.
Slowly, she moved her eyes from the moon to me. She studied my imperfections before her for what seemed to be a blissful eternity before gracing me with her voice, "I've slain this land's only prince. What use, now, is a princess?"
As the maiden left my presence, so too did my heart.
02/16/2016, 06:03 AM #32
@Kagunyan: f you could take a look at my ship when your back and tell me if anything is wrong with it that would be nice. I tried to make a decently fast one.
02/16/2016, 03:09 PM #33
Everything looks good cept a few SMALL things.
1) Your Engine needs to be Q-3. (Pro1+Pro1+Hov2 = E-3) Thats an acceptable bump.
2) The Bathing Area is considered a fairly big luxury, and thus counts as a component of the ship. This puts you at 8 out of 7 components (Engine(+1), Hover/2 Pro Jets(+2), Actual Sleeping Area(+1), Bathing(+1), Tail Cannon(+1), TWO Forward Cannons (+2). This can be easily tweaked by making it only 1 Forward cannon, or cutting the bathing.
3) Your Energy Based guns will not have power to fire unless you re-direct power from one of your Propulsion jets to the cannon. This will cut your speed IN HALF, but hey its better than falling like a rock!
4) The Windmills will not actually power the Engine--the engine runs off magic. They CAN however power things like lights and heating.
1) Your Engine needs to be Q-3. (Pro1+Pro1+Hov2 = E-3) Thats an acceptable bump.
2) The Bathing Area is considered a fairly big luxury, and thus counts as a component of the ship. This puts you at 8 out of 7 components (Engine(+1), Hover/2 Pro Jets(+2), Actual Sleeping Area(+1), Bathing(+1), Tail Cannon(+1), TWO Forward Cannons (+2). This can be easily tweaked by making it only 1 Forward cannon, or cutting the bathing.
3) Your Energy Based guns will not have power to fire unless you re-direct power from one of your Propulsion jets to the cannon. This will cut your speed IN HALF, but hey its better than falling like a rock!
4) The Windmills will not actually power the Engine--the engine runs off magic. They CAN however power things like lights and heating.
I gazed up at the sable-haired maiden with eyes so full of warmth it appeared she was crying silently. My trecherous mouth opened, "Why do you look so troubled, Princess?"
Slowly, she moved her eyes from the moon to me. She studied my imperfections before her for what seemed to be a blissful eternity before gracing me with her voice, "I've slain this land's only prince. What use, now, is a princess?"
As the maiden left my presence, so too did my heart.
Slowly, she moved her eyes from the moon to me. She studied my imperfections before her for what seemed to be a blissful eternity before gracing me with her voice, "I've slain this land's only prince. What use, now, is a princess?"
As the maiden left my presence, so too did my heart.
02/16/2016, 04:05 PM #34
to the 4th point of what you just said, can´t a ship have a sort of emergency kickstart?, by logic, the windmills would charge a generator, we could have it adapted to be a magical energy recharge, the crank part would need someone of great strength (usually the engine master) to control the stored energy and send it to the engine.
Have you ever crossed the line between sanity and madness? You would be amazed by what lies beyond the fog..
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02/16/2016, 06:17 PM #35
Electrical Energy and Magical energy are different, in this case. A Windmill does not generate magical energy, and the engine is only made to process off of Magical energy. The amount of electrical energy produced by the windmills would not be enough to keep the systems running cuz there is no energy efficiency. There's no "Magical Battery" that a windmill could charge.
I gazed up at the sable-haired maiden with eyes so full of warmth it appeared she was crying silently. My trecherous mouth opened, "Why do you look so troubled, Princess?"
Slowly, she moved her eyes from the moon to me. She studied my imperfections before her for what seemed to be a blissful eternity before gracing me with her voice, "I've slain this land's only prince. What use, now, is a princess?"
As the maiden left my presence, so too did my heart.
Slowly, she moved her eyes from the moon to me. She studied my imperfections before her for what seemed to be a blissful eternity before gracing me with her voice, "I've slain this land's only prince. What use, now, is a princess?"
As the maiden left my presence, so too did my heart.
02/16/2016, 08:02 PM #36
Ok to fix the problems i improved the engines by 1 tier, removed the restrooom and removed Herobrine. Should still be somewhat balanced with that.
02/16/2016, 11:14 PM #39
Besides, who would like to read a post about someone needing to goo to the loo and (hopefully) being subtle about releasing bodily fluids?
Have you ever crossed the line between sanity and madness? You would be amazed by what lies beyond the fog..
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02/17/2016, 05:57 PM #40
the bathroom was really more a luxury so that thee characters could be flying for a few days to a week without smelling like a pirate. I'll just try not to think about it