one thing is that the new hype in an RP went down become a normal thing by posting every hour or other, the other is to having to wait weeks for someone to post
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I can understand slow post days when people have work or school but on weekends it can go up some.
EDIT: I've read the apps and they look good to me except for Mima. It says in the OP that only One class per DMT chip and you have two down. I can't accept it until that is fixed.Last edited by Zekai; 02-22-2016, 01:38 PM."No matter how strong or what power the enemy has, I will fight and protect my friends, even if it cost me my life to protect them. I will fight until I die to ensure their future."
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Originally posted by Zekai View PostI can understand slow post days when people have work or school but on weekends it can go up some.
EDIT: I've read the apps and they look good to me except for Mima. It says in the OP that only One class per DMT chip and you have two down. I can't accept it until that is fixed.
'sides, I don't think it's as bad as having 25x reflexes of a human.
Sometimes when you're driving down a road, a bug hits your windshield. It's ugly and unpleasant, but you just activate the wipers / cleaning fluid and it's gone in a few seconds. It's just part of driving down the road. You don't dwell on it, because that'd be silly. Bugs aren't worth the time.
You just discard their guts and keep on driving.
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@Mima
Thought everyone was supposed to have a chip and one class.
Also she won't be using the 25x all the time, at most she'll be using 1.5x - 2x unless necessary like a gun is at her face."No matter how strong or what power the enemy has, I will fight and protect my friends, even if it cost me my life to protect them. I will fight until I die to ensure their future."
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@Zekai
I'd also lower the amount of MAXIMUM Reaction time she can achieve by about 10-15x that of a normal human, as well as come with a downside as Iread through it and I don't see one. Other than that I like it. Don't see much wrong with it.
@Kristia
I intend to try and be as active as possible. Besides if I don't post within a day or so don't just go on and skip me. If I NEED to post at all. Then just inform me and inform me until I do. I kinda have a hard time getting into a habit of doing something again, and any help I can get into getting into the habit of posting is in my opinion. A really nice and helpful thing. Even if it means pestering me.
@ Mima.
He may have listed two for type, but that was for type not class and he kinda got it mixed up. Something I should have specified in the OP. Type defines what that character IS with their class. Class is the whole "Caster Warrior Gunner" thing. Though I do have
to talk with him about some things as I have some questions.
Once Zekai's app, and Mima's app gets sorted out I'll make the IC.
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After reading and talking with Mima I have devised a new class type "Spellsword" which I will add to the opening soon. SPELLSWORD IS NOT A MIX TYPE. It's a type that has some features of both, but has it's own downsides. Rather than just being two full on types combined, which in turn has the full power of both types. Spellsword is different. I'll explain it in the Intro. So Koishi IS accepted.
@Zekai
Modification is better, and everything else is okay. So I'd say accepted.
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Is it bad that I feel like I shouldn't post yet in the IC? It feels like it's not finished yet and a Mod hasn't done the first post so that may be why I feel like that."No matter how strong or what power the enemy has, I will fight and protect my friends, even if it cost me my life to protect them. I will fight until I die to ensure their future."
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TACTICAL DERP INBOUND
T MINUS MERP HOURS
90% done
Name: Trace
Spoiler:
Age:
- Appearance: 21 years
- Operational: 4 months
Race: Bioroid
Gender: Female
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Personality: She's lukewarm, as in not quite cold and calculating nor warm and emotional yet capable of both.
Type: Engineer
Class: Support/Tactician
Equipment/Functions:
- MAG
Spoiler:
Floating companion drone that serves as an extension of Trace that contains various utilities and functions that couldn't have been placed in her body.
Initial appearance:
Spoiler:
I'll follow a sort of upgrade pattern depending on what Trace goes through and what she prioritizes throughout the RP. I'll be using this as a general idea for what I'll be doing.
http://www.pso-world.com/sections.ph...cle&artid=2602
In addition to basic utility, it can also transform into a set of jet wings that grant Trace the ability to fly.Totally not ripping off the Archwings of Warframe in a sense.
It could also turn into other things (possibly the giant mechanical arms shown above) but mainly she just uses the wings.
Spoiler:
Initial appearance:
Still not ripping off Warframe
Examples of basic utility functions it could have:
- Welding/Cutter laser
- Carrier function (Magnetic systems)
- Scout Mode (Trace can see through it)
- Medical/Repair (based on laser)
- 3D Printer Mode
-Toaster
- Storage
- TRACE
Spoiler:
Trace herself is a synthetic bio organic android with some things being modified in order to withstand the things she would be doing.
The most notable of these modifications is her increased resilience in high g-force situations as well as skin that is resistant to puncture to high velocity impacts.
(Another notable thing is that her "clothes" are actually a part of her skin and her hair is of a similar material to her skin.)
Inside she has simulated organs, however excluded is anything that isn't vital to her function since most of the simulated organs take up more room than organic ones. Only her brain is of comparable size to that of a human brain.
Her mind is capable of "organic thought" which grants her the ability to think as both machine and human. Her mechanical mind has default knowledge programmed in but she is still learning by her organic mind.
Faction: Excelsior
Back Story:
Trace is a prototype Bioroid, for a project of the same name as her, to serve as a test platform for the more recent design of a synthetic brain. In addition she was created to also test other things such as the companion utility drone.
On the way to a classified testing location, the transport she was on became involved in a tragic accident. When emergency response teams arrived, all the scientists and crew on board were found dead.
Trace was found holding onto her companion drone as if she was afraid of loosing it. Despite the tragedy that had occurred, the scientists that were involved in the project were excited that she might be developing human emotions.
Everything about the accident was documented as classified, in addition to being overshadowed by the promise of Trace's possible emotional capacity. No one truly knows what happened, except Trace.
When investigators tried to extract the information from Trace's memories, they found that she had no recorded memories in her mechanical mind.
Four months pass, testing resumes for Trace as usual.
Notes:
"Across the rift are truths which are terribly wonderful to behold."
Last edited by Cucoo5; 02-26-2016, 01:10 PM.
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Spoiler:
Name: Drake
Age: 28
Race: Cyborg (Human/Machine). An accident left him quite... injured. So he had to get some of his limbs and body parts replaced with robotic replacements.
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Spoiler:
(full body minus the mushrooms and moss growing on his coat)
He stands at 6ft 7. He rarely takes off his mask, if at all. As such only the higher ups know of what his face looks like. Please note he doesn't wear his mask to 'hide his mecahnical parts on his face'. No. He's worn his mask non-stop. Even WELL before his accident that caused him to get some robotic prosthetics added to his face. Like a mechanical right eye, a few scars on his right cheek, and a metal plate on the left cheek. Underneath his jacket both his arms are replaced with cybernetic replacements which LOOK outdated (instead of looking like actual human limbs), still have the same proportions of normal human arms. Only... more robotic.
Personality: Drake can best be described as cocky, and a bit of a show off. Despite being one of the better marksmen of his rank, he has a tendency to be a bit too show-offy in front of Rookies and Scouts of EXCELSIOR. Not only that but he tends to talk down to the Scouts and Rookies to mainly get them mad at him... but for reasons you might not expect. He's not doing it to just get a kick out of it, but rather because he wants to get the Rookies and Scouts fired to try and out-perform him. Get them to try harder. Motivate them in his own way. Sometimes it does work with how he seems to taunt and mess with the Scouts and Rookies. In a sense he's kinda like... that Senior year student in highschool that messes with the First Year students.
Though despite that he does have a softer, nicer side to the 'Cadets' as he calls them. If they actually manage to do something good, or complete a mission. Then he will properly compliment them, and give them a literal pat on the back. On top of that he does actually do his work and his training, as well as properly respect his fellow agents and commanding officers. On top of that he does take his missions VERY seriously.
However he is quite lazy when he actually gets time off or doesn't have to train anymore that day/week or when he's 'on break' in which he can be caught lazing about all over the place. Also he is a bit of a flirt, occasionally flirting with both men and women in EXCELSIOR. It has... very mixed results. Despite that his co-workers decribe him as 'Someone they can have a drink with' due to his rather laidback nature when not working.
Type: Ranger (similar to Gunner/Marksman except instead of guns and whatnot, they focus on using more silent and old-fashioned weapons like Bows and Arrows, crossbows, and various other ranged weapons that aren't guns.)
Class: Archer. He uses a Bow and Arrow. Specialized-futuristic bow and arrow, but a bow and arrow nonetheless. Used for ranged single shot take downs. Though he has a few... special abilities.
Ability: Drake is one of the better if not best archers in EXCELSIOR for the Captain class. Something he takes strong pride in. Thanks to the nano-machines in his body, the MDT Chip, and his cybernetic prosthetics he has some pretty good eyes. Really sharp. He can see a target clearly from a few miles away, and with his bow's built-in laser-sight that can only be seen by infrared cameras (like his robotic eye, meaning only those with similar eyes can SEE the laster sight on his bow. To anyone else it looks like he's aiming without a laser sight.) That combined with actual training with a bow, Drake can hit a target with an arrow from a very good distance away. On top of that, with his robotic arms he can actually keep a very steady aim for a long while. In fact he's had moments where he had to wait for hours with his bow drawn and ready to fire (which thanks to how his bow is, he was capable of doing so) without losing track of his target. It also gives him heightened reflexes which helps aid him in combat. Other than that he's more... normal than some other agents. With the similar perks of having slightly enhanced mobility and durability to help fight the Drifter's (though nowhere near to the same extent that a Warrior class EXCELSIOR agent has when it comes to durability.)
He makes up for this with a lack of any other real abilities. Most of his 'special techniques' comes from his weapon.
Special Weapon:
Spoiler:
Generated from the energies that the MDT Chip offers, it can retain full power when an arrow is fully drawn for over an hour. The bow itself is as long as his leg, and the arrows are actually roughly the same size. Yet despite that, the energy they are made from makes the weapon and arrows quite lightweight. He doesn't get a quiver when he uses his weapon. Instead he keeps generating arrows until he runs out of 'mana' or energy to do so. Of which he will be left helpless.
Now as you can see the tip of the arrow is REALLY sharp. Capable of piercing through most military grade armors (but just the tip), which makes it more useful against armored foes, and devastating against unarmored ones. The arrowhead can also open up, which is used to latch onto targets then have certain effects based on what he commands.
His commands and the effects they have are:
Boom: The arrow explodes like a grenade. Takes up quite a bit of energy.
Chill: The arrow begins to inject the target with a special cryo mix that begins to freeze the target from inside out. It's a slow, but painfully effective way to subdue larger targets.
Seek: The arrow simply begins to act like a tracking device. The arrow head will be lodged into the target, while the shaft and rest of the arrow falls off. This helps with tracking a target... obviously. He can then later command the arrowhead to explode.
Punch: The arrowhead on the arrow will flatten and become rounder/ slightly softer he is readying it, when it strikes a target it feels like one is getting hit by a heavy basket ball thrown by a pro. It'll hurt, but it won't be lethal. He uses it for training and non-lethal takedowns. Something that is actually quite useful.
Spread: With this command he'll actually fire the arrow up into the arrow, say the command, then it'll generate duplicates of the arrow (up to about 12 other arrows will begin raining down) that rains down. He can combine this with Punch or Boom for large aoe type attacks. However it drains him a LOT when he uses Spread on it's own. Using Spread and Boom can actually leave him without any MDT Energy to generate more arrows and his bow will disappear.
These effects (aside from Seek) use up energy that he NEEDS if he wants to keep summoning arrows. However his arrow versatility can easily help him fit into many different roles on a team. Ranging from support, to assassin.
Other gear:
His gas mask and jacket are the only real other pieces of equipment he uses. I mean there ARE his cybernetic enhancements, but those are a PART of him. Not separate pieces of equipment. His gasmask/goggles helps him see properly in dark areas thanks to night vision, as well as protecting his still human right eye, and his lungs from toxic substances. The same goes for his jacket which was modified to help be able to take light gunfire, as well as help keep him a bit warmer in colder climates (as well as colder in warmer climates due to it's design.) He almost never takes off his mask. Even when he's on break or not working.
Faction: EXCELSIOR Captain (only for plot relevant stuff. I need a guy to help move plot along for EXCELSIOR of course.)
Back Story:
Drake joined EXCELSIOR at the age of 14 because he thought it'd be fun to work and fight for them. He looked up to some of the Commanders in EXCELSIOR as heroes, idols. Kind of like how a kid would look up to their father. Mainly because he didn't have a father growing up due to a divorce (or rather he DID have a father. He only saw him on weekends and never really got to knowing him that well.) So when he became 14 he made the choice to join EXCELSIOR. Thankfully he already thought of what he wanted to add to the organization. His already (somewhat) decent archery skills which he used when going out hunting in the forest with his father on the weekends. Something that he worked hard on to improve. In fact he focused on improving his archery so it would be as best as it can be... and... he eventually started moving through the ranks. It didn't take long for him to become a Scout, and eventually a Hunter. Then Elite Hunter rank wasn't too far after that. Though it took a lot of training and hardwork to become Captain. In fact he remembers the mission that net him the spot as Captain.
You see he was serving under Selena for a short while who, despite being the same age as him, was a Captain herself. The two did butt heads over how they handled their missions and tasks, but they did get along somewhat well. It wasn't until one day where she was sent on a mission... alone that he began to start actually WORRYING about his commanding officer at the time (when this happened he was just an Elite Hunter.) He had a feeling that something just wasn't right about this... when she didn't return though he really got worried. When a search-and-rescue mission was deployed he demanded to take charge. He went to go look for her wit ha group of other Elite Hunters, and another Captain. Unfortunately they did not find Selena or her body. She was gone. They assumed the worst. She was killed and eaten by Drifter's...
Sadly when they were about to leave the area they were ambushed by a group of Class 5 (out of 10) Drifter's who attacked in a swarm. It was a very tough battle. They lost another Captain, and some other agents. Drake was nearly killed... Though he did survive... at the cost of losing his eye, severe damage to his cheek, and loss of his arms. It was only due to the life-support properties of the MDT Chip that he had managed to get to the nearest unnamed colony on the planet where he was then sent to EXCELSIOR Doctor's for immediate surgery.
Since then Drake had gotten a replacement eye, replacement arms, and due to his valliant efforts during the mission, as well as having managed to survive. Drake was declared Captain. Something that had very recently happened. Lately he hasn't been depressed really... more or less focusing on the things that are potentially going on Behind-the-Scenes in EXCELSIOR.
Currently he's on break. Just... resting over what recently happened.
Notes:
Okay this guy is JUST TO HELP GIVE ANOTHER MEMBER TO EXCELSIOR TO HELP WITH PLOT STUFF.
DONE!!!Last edited by SUSTIC; 02-26-2016, 04:56 PM.
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