Shinka Knights OOC

[Tewi_Inaba]

@ S1 you seem to have misunderstood part of the story. Ragnarok did not exist on earth, nore was there any war among them ntil they crash landed in a new world. The world the infecta landed in was said or at leat implyed to be in anouther solor system. This makes the history for Jason Imposible as it clashes to heavely with the main story thus far. I apologize if the ministration was more my fault or if i made a mistake while writing. I'll check The OP and fix any mistakes, but please fix your history. It can stil work if you say Jason joined the infecta after they landed and make a few tweeks to the story. Soon as you fix your story i can approve your application.

@ cucoo Female character is Approved. I'll read more about the second character when my eyes don't hurt so much

@bookdragon. both of your characters are approved. however i thnk you're missing the point of being a moko. They were meant to be more reptilian like but giving the wide rang of what's possible as a Ragnarokan he two characters you came up with would not be impossible to exist.If you wish to make any changes to your character application please do so before your first post in the IC (once i actully put it up)

@ everyone Just to note any applications will be finilised once you make your first post in the IC with said character. Any changes to an application that has been approved needs to be brought to my attention.

[S121]

@Trouble

Actually, I fixed all that yesterday or the day before. I was told about Ragnarok and changed it so that he joined the human army instead.



EDIT:

Ok, I looked over my app again and saw the problem.

There was still a remnant from my previous edits and I forgot one of the "Ragnaroks" in my character's history. It's fixed now.





EDIT 2:

After looking at my character's armor, I decided to add Titanium plating to it. It would be weird if his armor didn't match it's appearance.

[bookdragon2000]

@tewi

I'm not exactly sure what "reptilian humans" are supposed to look like. Are they like bipedal lizards or what?

[Tewi_Inaba]

@ bookdragon https://encrypted-tbn2.gstatic.com/i...qPPYgAm2h9ByWQ

@S1 soon as it's fixed i'll re-read it

[S121]

@Trouble

It's fixed now. I added my edits to my previous post.

[Tewi_Inaba]

On the television was a news report that showed a colossal ship being made for all the Infecta. The Infecta were to be transported to space until humanity could find a cure, away from oppression, and away from people that would wish them harm. Jason thought this was his opportunity to finally be free, and after escaping yet again, he traveled to where the Infecta were to be rounded up and was guided into the ship.

Despite the fact that Jason boarded the ship with his military-grade armor and weaponry, they still let him on. Jason found this to be somewhat suspicious, but he didn't think much about it at the time. Little did he or any of the Infecta know that when they left Earth's atmosphere, they would be attacked. As the ship was attacked, Jason did all he could to save as many people as possible, and luckily for him, he was not the only person taking action. Many of the Infecta helped not only each other, but also helped to save the ship from breaking apart. As The Infecta escaped from Crux, Jason looked back at Earth, happy that he and the others had escaped, but felt sad that he was no longer welcome at his home, the only world he knew.

This is the part i was talking about. Idk if maybe i'm lagging or something but it's still there for me.

[S121]

@Trouble

Wait, how is it breaking continuity? Is there more than just the Ragnarok part?

[Tewi_Inaba]

Well from what i understand, and correct me if i'm wrong. You're character was born as a ragnarok. Yet he was on earth with the human infecta when the were forced to leave and then attacked by crux. Not only that but you apparently had your gear before it was actually created since power suits and crystals were not used until until after the infecta landed on the new world. I think you fixed this already without me noticing, but ragnarok would not have been on earth at the time when the infecta were being pushed onto the ship, or at all for that matter. If they ever went to earth they would likely go to war with Crux for ownership of earth.

Overall i think we're both misunderstanding each other at some points.

[S121]

@Trouble

Ohh. No, he's a human and has nothing to do with Ragnarok. I made a fix that said he was a part of the human army, ot Ragnarok's. I originally thought Ragnarok was actually a part of Crux's army, but I was wrong, so I fixed it.

As for the armor, I was trying to explain why Jason would have armor that doesn't run on just crystals. To be honest, the armor idea was something I had when Wriggle made his Minerva RP. Sadly, the RP was scrapped, so I still had this idea for a nanosuit floating around, and when you made Shinka Knights, I thought that the suit would fit right in. Of course, I knew that the piezoelectric bits of the suit would make no sense if it was being powered by crystals, but the piezoelectrics of the suit were integral to its design, so I kept them. I then used the military equipment as an excuse to explain why he had this armor, and left it up to the imagination how it would be compatible with crystals. I just assumed they would have modified the suit to use crystals as well.

Of course, this also had an interesting advantage that I did not expect until I tried to figure out how the suit would accommodate the crystal. Because of the fact that Jason's suit does not run on the crystal's energy, the crystal's power can be devoted to powering his abilities instead of all the suit's functions.

In short, he's from a human Earth, and his suit was standard issue from Earth's military, but it has been modified to accommodate a crystal. This is mainly to explain the suit's design, and to get rid of any possible plot holes involving it.

[Tewi_Inaba]

Alright then. In that case the only thing i could say to that would be at least mention at some point the armor was heavely upgraded as standared earth armor at the time, while very high tech would not accommodate for a crystal that didn't exist on earth. You're story works perfectly other than that small detail. But since it's a very quick and easy fix i'll go ahead and say it. S1 your application is approved.

[Cucoo5]

@ Tewi

> Female Character
> Both are female

though the rest says that you're talking about Starla, aye?

[Zekai]

And the IC comes the day I'm on the road. I'll make a post as soon as I get internet connection somewhere cause making IC post by phone is hard.

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[Cucoo5]

So Tewi, verdict on Nemesis?


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[Tewi_Inaba]

Full Name: Starla Monroe

Age: 21

Race: Stella

Gender: Female

Affiliation: Ragnarok

Blood type: B

Crystal(s): Magnetism, Electricty, and Fire (all three for utility)

Gear:

Utility Glove that channels the crystal Energy. Used for manipulating nanomachines through magnetism and electricity, as well as using fire for welding.

Appearance:

Spoiler:

This


With these clothes:

Personality:
She has a calm personality and tends to be a bit of a "firecracker" at times (also tends to 'spark' into a mood and snaps at people that interrupt her while in it.)

History: Starla is a scientist that develops weaponry. Her motivation for this is as a means to obtain funding for the development of Self-Aware AI, however she has been hired to develop a new weapon for the Ragnarok. Therefore her current project, titled "Nemesis," is the attempt to achieve both her own personal goal and Ragnarok's.

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Full Name: Nemesis

Age: N/A

Race: Golem/AI

Gender: Female

Affiliation: Ragnarok

Blood type: N/A

Crystal(s): Poison

Gear:

Weapons:
- Daggers: Plasma Edge
(energy type)

Spoiler:

*Smaller than depicted in the scale. Might use progression upgrades.

- Gunblades: Plasma edge and shots + "blunt edge" thrusters
(shotgun type to rifle type upgrades)

Spoiler:

Density of material being cut determines effectiveness of the blades.
Blades can cut through "almost anything" except that anything with a density greater than 5 g*cm^-3 at tier 1 will be extremely difficult to cut.

each tier adds (1/2*tier #*(tier #+1)) g*cm^-3 to the base of 5 g*cm^-3

maximum tier is tier 4. (15 g*cm^-3)


Upgrades

Basic improvements to the weapons with 4 tiers. (4th will be red.)

Body:
- Synthetic Simulated Organic Body w/ Nano bot "blood"
- EVO Shield: Can allow the user to survive in hazardous environments for as long as the crystal can provide energy. Drains more energy than can be replenished when in such an environment and the concentration of the hazard will determine how fast (Toxic, Acidic, Extreme Heat, Extreme Pressure, etc)

Experimental Equipment:
- Biostasis module: Small container that can store biological material in stasis.


Upgrades:

Movement upgrade:
- Agility thrusters

Energy upgrade:
- Extended capacity (various levels)

Combat upgrades:

Each tier has 4 separate levels via number of drones (1 to 4)

Tier 1: Pistol Drones - Quick drones that will briefly assault targets in front of her.

Tier 2: Orbital Cutters - A fast set of energy blade drones

Tier 3: Breaker Cannon - Special: 4 charge levels - lvl 1: (1s) can cause 3rd degrees burn wounds - lvl 2: (3s) can punch a hole through soft materials - lvl 3: (6s) can punch through very hard materials - lvl 4: (10s) Tank Buster

Defense Upgrade

Military grade shielding: adds additional functionality to the EVO Shield so that it is effective in combat. i.e. able to resist gun fire/ explosives/ etc. Same limitation as EVO Shield (since it is still the EVO Shield.)

Abilities:
- Aura Burst: one time only all-or-nothing ability that overcharges EVO Shield for one absorb-all-damage-below-a-certain-threshold shield. Once used, the crystals used in the move will be reduced to 0 energy and they will not recharge naturally.
The "power level" of the crystal determines the threshold.

- Poison Edge: Daggers only - Inflict a short term poison effect to targets. (?)

- Impact Zero: Gunblade only - a powerful thrust attack to attempt to skewer a target and then create an energy burst explosion at the tip.

Appearance:

Spoiler:

Hologram:

Android:

Personality: Initially lacking a personality, however upgrades to her program will add a personality later.


History: N/A *is being made in the beginning*

Both characters approved.

[Cucoo5]

Alrighty then

Oh and one last question: for the lab, could I control a small handful of nameless NPC Scientists to help progress the starter with Starla? Or should I leave that to you for a quick bit so I can understand what kind of mindset they have?