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WriggleRid3r

WriggleRid3r

Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 7523

07/21/2013, 08:43 PM #141
Oh so it's a stronger Sunny Milk. :3
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Kilelicus

Kilelicus

Join Date: Dec 2012
Posts: 481

07/21/2013, 09:19 PM #142
Agh, writing fight scenes alone can be so boring sometimes. It gets weird when you're going back and forth between names @_@
Sometimes I feel like the only normal person here
"My Threshing has been Extra Princely Fresh"

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Katrix

Katrix

Shulker box confiscator

Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 3493

07/21/2013, 09:55 PM #143
That's why I try to avoid it as much as possible. Having Sidna nearly kill her teacher is another thing though.
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–Don't Forget. Always, somewhere, someone is fighting for you. –As long as you remember her, you are not alone.
NeoFox

NeoFox

Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 3874

07/21/2013, 09:57 PM #144
This RP seems to actually be quite interesting... I might join this (and no I won't machine gun post. I'll try my hardest to get decent length posts in.)
S121

S121

Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 12685

07/21/2013, 09:58 PM #145
@Katrix

Sidna nearly killing her teacher for the sake of a couple of laughs?

Sounds good to me!




Anyway, I think machinegun posting would only be acceptable if there's a fight between characters. It's not exactly easy to make a long post describing someone swinging a sword.

Not only that, it would get repetitive to keep describing the same type of swing over and over and over again.
Last edited by S121; 07/21/2013, 10:00 PM.
Originally posted by S121
Every time I see a new post on the Forum, I feel like a little kid during Christmas, all giddy.


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Kilelicus

Kilelicus

Join Date: Dec 2012
Posts: 481

07/21/2013, 10:00 PM #146
121, please don't do a line for every sentence. Try writing a bit more, your posts are lacking D8
Fill them with all sorts of considerations your character has, have them do little insignificant things like picking up small rocks and studying them out of boredom or plain curiosity. MOAR SUBSTINS
Sometimes I feel like the only normal person here
"My Threshing has been Extra Princely Fresh"

Hazmer Baybee
S121

S121

Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 12685

07/21/2013, 10:02 PM #147
It's a cave. I already described everything there is.

I could probably fit a sentence or two, but caves are pretty boring places.:p

If it was a city, I could make at least a paragraph describing it.
Originally posted by S121
Every time I see a new post on the Forum, I feel like a little kid during Christmas, all giddy.


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Kilelicus

Kilelicus

Join Date: Dec 2012
Posts: 481

07/21/2013, 10:09 PM #148
Originally posted by S121
It's a cave. I already described everything there is.

I could probably fit a sentence or two, but caves are pretty boring places.:p

If it was a city, I could make at least a paragraph describing it.


Use his mind, have him do simple things to occupy his time. Detail his motions, include mundane things that are completely unimportant. It helps paint a picture of what the character is doing in someone's head. The characters become less stiff and more like people :V

Sorry I'm such a stickler about this. College writing classes will do that to you
Last edited by Kilelicus; 07/21/2013, 10:13 PM.
Sometimes I feel like the only normal person here
"My Threshing has been Extra Princely Fresh"

Hazmer Baybee
S121

S121

Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 12685

07/21/2013, 10:13 PM #149
I put some extra stuff.

Details about where he's planning on going.
Originally posted by S121
Every time I see a new post on the Forum, I feel like a little kid during Christmas, all giddy.


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Kilelicus

Kilelicus

Join Date: Dec 2012
Posts: 481

07/21/2013, 10:24 PM #150
that's better :3 It's all about the little things :)
Sometimes I feel like the only normal person here
"My Threshing has been Extra Princely Fresh"

Hazmer Baybee