SCP Creation

[wonderweiss]

Btw, here is a termination order. These always sound like stories. http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/termination-order

[Jaeyjay]

Oh hey, I remember this. I used to read a lot of it last year. Remi also did a livestream of the game a while back, not sure if the video was saved though.

[wonderweiss]

Musta been hilarious. Well, here's the final post regarding SCP 2000.

Extermination Log (Part 2)

The following is a conversation between Emily and SCP 2000. They are inside the subject's containment room. The entrance was sealed, but the voltage on the walkway to the island has been toned down to a voltage low enough to walk around safely in rubber boots, which Emily is wearing. The subject shall be referred to as Cell Zero for this log.

Emily: "...hi."
Cell Zero: "...that voice..."
Emily: "It's me... =====.
Cell Zero: "Why... does that name... wait, don't tell me-"
Emily: "Yes, it's me, your mother."
Cell Zero: "You have a lot of guts to show your face around here."
Emily: "I know. The agents that brought me here told me everything about you, including...your soul.
Cell Zero: "Yea. Pretty amazing, huh? I attempted to escape five times, and I succeeded the last time. I broke this place in half. Unfortunately I'm still here."
Emily: "I heard the recorded conversation between you and a female doctor."
Cell Zero: "Oh, you don't want to go there with me. I almost escaped that time. The doors are sealed and you have no drugs on you. But something tells me you wanted it that way. Would you care explaining that, ====="
Emily: "I didn't bring them because I didn't need them. I need to talk to you about-"
Cell Zero: "My anger issues? Yea, a lot of people tried. They failed."
Emily: "Why do you hate me?"
Cell Zero: "Why do you think? You let me get taken away without putting up a fight. What's worse... you seemed relieved. Was that all I was? A burden?"
Emily: "It isn't what you think. I felt relieved because they told me you were going to be free. They told me you were going to be taken care of."
Cell Zero: "Oh yea? Well guess what? I was still there for another bloody 2 years. Luckily, the power went out. I managed to find an escape route using my intelligence. The intelligence you gave me."
Emily: "I gave you intelligence and lethal combat knowledge so that you could protect yourself. So that you wouldn't end up like me. I to this day regret killing all those people, and for what? Just because [DATA EXPUNGED]?"
Cell Zero: "Well guess what? I became exactly like you. As a matter of fact, I became much better than you."
Emily: "I know."
Cell Zero: "And you know what else? I died for god's sake. Look at me. I'm still alive because I hated. I hated you.
Emily: "Please, it was all just a misunderstanding. I loved you, and I still do."
Cell Zero: "Yea right. Then where were you when they took me away, huh? Where were you when I escaped?! Where were you when I died?!"
Emily: "Please calm down!"
Cell Zero: "No way! I've been waiting all my life for this."
Cell Zero begins sounding more demonic and deformed.
Cell Zero: "Now you've come to me! I've wanted to kill you ever since I escaped!"
Emily: "No..."
Cell Zero's jacket begins ripping.
Speaker: "=====, get out of there now! The subject is about to break loose!"
Emily: "No! I will protect him!"
Cell Zero: "Protect me?! You made my life a living nightmare! Now you pay for it!!!"
Cell Zero's jacket breaks. A dark shadow rises from the now lifeless body.
Cell Zero: "DIE, YOU WITCH!!!"
Cell Zero stabs Emily in the kidney. Emily coughs up blood.
Emily: "... I... love you... no matter... what..."
Emily walks closer to Cell Zero, and proceeds to hug him.
Cell Zero: "What are you doing? You want a death wish?!"
Emily: "I want... you... to be happy..."
Cell Zero: "... you... I hate you!..."
Cell Zero begins to show tears.
Emily: "Then why did you stab me in the kidney? You know that the heart or the brain means instant death... I taught you this... remember?"
Cell Zero: "... I... why... WHY CAN'T I KILL YOU?!"
Emily: "Because... deep down inside... you still love me... and deep inside... you wished that I would love you as well."
Cell Zero's massive smoke begins dissipating. He is now the size of a regular teenager.
Cell Zero: "...mom...I... couldn't answer that question... I am the smartest man on earth... and yet you answered a question that I couldn't."
Emily: "I...am...your mother...aren't...I..."
Emily collapses.
Cell Zero: "Mom... mom!... MOM!!!
SCP 2000-2 completely disappears. SCP 2000-1 wakes up and regains consciousness. He breaks free from the iron bars and walks towards his mother, enduring the voltage. He is in heavy tears.
Cell Zero: "Someone... anyone! Call an ambulance! Call the medics! Call anyone! Just bring my mother back!!!"
The voltage from all over the room was turned off. The medical team rushes in to help Emily.

From then on, SCP 2000-2 was never heard from again, with or without the straight jacket. Emily made a full recovery. Cell Zero was moved to a less intensive containment room. He is now classified as Safe/Euclid. The reason that he is classified as Euclid is that if SCP 2000-1 were to regain a strong hatred, the chances of SCP 2000-2 reviving would be high. Only Class C or higher operatives and his mother are allowed to see him. His new containment cell is the same size as his old cell. However, the interior now represents a living room. If anyone were allowed in the room, they were to treat the subject nicely and show no signs of hostility. Any signs of hostility will be greatly punished and the offender is not allowed into that room again. Case closed.

[Jaeyjay]

I think 2000 is already taken.
http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/scp-2000-j
Though it's a joke SCP.

[wonderweiss]

F***. Oh well. Mine will not be a joke.

[Jaeyjay]

I recommend posting your SCP in the forum for criticism before creating it on the site.

http://www.scp-wiki.net/how-to-write-an-scp
Also read through that and all the tabs if you haven't already. As it states, "Many first SCP articles fail miserably for one reason or another, primarily due to the writer's lack of experience. This is not an excuse. This is a challenge."

Your SCP is very well written and I like it, but I can't really say if it can be posted or not. The community is very picky on the guidelines to follow to create an SCP.
Example

Containment Procedures: Must be contained in a 30x30x30 room.

30 what? Feet? Meters? Yards?

[Kristia]

I wonder how creative people have been with the SCP

[wonderweiss]

30 what? Feet? Meters? Yards?

Miles!!! No its feet. I guess I frgot that. And scp reviewing is the reason i put up this thread.

@Krista
Well then, lets find out.

Let the hunger games begin!!!

[WriggleRid3r]

Here's a joke one.

SCP-2010.2: The Creepy Goddess

[wonderweiss]

One, it would be scp 2010-2. Two, JESUS FUKIN CHRIST THAT IS A KETER!!!

[S121]

Miles!!! No its feet. I guess I frgot that. And scp reviewing is the reason i put up this thread.

@Krista
Well then, lets find out.

Let the hunger games begin!!!

Funny, funny, funny. I just put up this picture in Count to 10,000.

gensokyo_chainsaw_massacre_by_kwirk816-d5bezaf.jpg

[wonderweiss]

So I was derping around the SCP wiki and I ran into the invincible lizard SCP. I read the article and saw a termination attempt log. So I decided on doing that. Here you go, folks.

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Termination Order for SCP 2000 (Part 1)

As of late, SCP 2000 has become a major threat to the entire facility. We issued out orders to have the subject interact with other SCPs in an attempt to exterminate the subject. These are interaction logs from said interactions.

SCP 019
Action: The subject was put inside the containment chamber for SCP 019. The jacket was not removed for this experiment.
Outcome: Many SCP 019-2s emerged and attacked the subject.
Result: The subject shook off the SCP 109-2s as if they were pests. Any damage done to the subject was covered in a black mist and instantly repaired. We assume that it is because of SCP 2000-2 healing SCP 2000-1. As of now, this process will be called "zero regeneration."

SCP 029
Action: The subject was slowly put in the containment room of SCP 029. The straight jacket was not removed for this experiment.
Outcome: SCP 029 immediately took action. She [DATA EXPUNGED] and began strangling the subject.
Result: The subject did not take any action against this. He laid there for over ten minutes with SCP 029s hands clasped against the subjects neck. SCP 029 asks, "Why won't you die?!" The subject responds, "Get your dirty hands off my neck, I'm already dead." The subject did not move his mouth while talking, and the subject did not sound as if being strangled. We assume it was SCP 2000-2 talking. SCP 029 gets up and walks away.

SCP 053
Action: The subject was put inside the containment chamber of SCP 053. The straight jacket was not removed for this experiment.
Outcome: The two just stand there. They remain speechless. Finally, the subject says, "It's pretty obvious that you aren't human. I have no reason to waste my time killing you."
Result: The subject walks away.

SCP 096
Action: The subject was moved inside the containment chamber of SCP 096 with an item on his back. Once the doors closed, the item ripped up the subject's jacket, letting loose SCP 2000-2 in hopes that either one would be terminated.
Outcome: The subject looked at SCP 096's face and SCP 096 began weeping. A minute afterwards, it charged at the subject.
Result: The subject summons a large block of an unfamiliar substance and surrounds himself with it. SCP 096 cannot seem to break through the substance. The subject does not seem retaliate, saying, "I have no time for you. You're not human." SCP 096 calms down and walks away. Class D personnel rush in and throw the body at the subject and return him to his cell.

SCP 173
Action: We placed the subject inside the containment chamber. The jacket was not removed for this experiment.
Outcome: Once the door closed, the two just stared each other down. Once the subject blinked, SCP 173 came closer to him. The subject seemed somewhat surprised. The subject purposely kept on blinking until SCP 173 broke the subjects neck.
Result: The subject seemed dead for a while. The subject then spoke, saying, "Incredible. A blood-thirsty sculpture that moves every time it blinks." The subject began healing through zero regeneration. He began speaking to SCP 173, saying, "How about I let you free? I can let you kill all the people you want along side me." The subject then kept his eyes closed and SCP 173 began assaulting the subject, soon ripping the jacket. The subject escaped the holding chamber and [DATA EXPUNGED], but was later re-contained along with SCP 173.

Note: Only animate SCPs (in exception of SCP 173) were used to terminate the subject. To be continued.

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By the way, I noticed that no one but I have posted a creation, so here are some mind joggers.

Dark Angel
Universe in the hand
God-freaking-zilla

[S121]

Someone should make this an SCP.

StrangeC003.jpg

[wonderweiss]

SCP 2001 "Crazy Horse." I'm not gonna do it. But it would be...interesting...

[wonderweiss]

New piece!

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SCP#: 2012

Nickname(s) (if any): The Oracle

Class: Safe

Containment Procedures: The subject is to be contained in a well-lit 5 x 5 x 7 yard room. The interior contains a TV, a bed, and a Playstation 2. If it requests any games, then allow it. No other items except for clothing articles are allowed.

Description: It's appearance is that of a 17 year old male Hispanic. It contains no other extreme features (i.e. Black eyes, forked tongue, etc.). It currently shows no signs of wanting to leave. It's abilities change it's appearance. The subject has the ability of foreseeing a certain event in someone's life once the said person makes contact with the subject. After that, the subject and the victim remain motionless. Once contact has been made with the subject, the subject's eyes change color, the left eye turning completely yellow, and the right eye turning completely purple. If contact has been made, the two will become ignorant to the outside world. According to the subject, the right eye predicts someone's future without giving the victim a warning, and the left eye is the future of which happens when the warning is given. The subject, after approximately 1.27 minutes, will then say one of four phrases:

If both eyes show good fortune, the subject will say, "you are a very fortunate man."

If the left eye shows good fortune and the right eye shows bad fortune, the subject will say, "Ignorance is best."

If the left eye shows bad fortune while the right eye shows good fortune, the subject will say, "An important warning is recommended."

If both eyes show bad fortune, the subject will say, "Doom is now your destiny."

The subject will then ask the victim if the victim wants to hear his/her fortunes. After explaining what the subject saw, the subject will say, "This is your own choice. The burden is now yours." The subject will not say anything otherwise. It remains silent until someone wants to hear a fortune.

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Invite some people over! I feel like this thread is to show my ideas only. If that were the case, the thread would be named "My SCP Creations." Or, on a more comedic standpoint, "Listen to me ramble on!"

Don't make my voice sound angry. I'm actually kinda joyful at this moment. Long story.