Peripheral Illusion (Tragedy/Action)

wonderweiss

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07/17/2013, 11:11 PM #21
Okay guys, I'm just going to throw this out right now: I won't be doing this on a daily basis any longer. There is simply not enough time to spare for imagine for the story. However, that does not mean that I will stop writing. I will write as much as I can and as frequently as possible for all you valued readers. Now then... time to get crazy with part writing!!!


Part 8: You Just Stood By



"Remi..."

Reimu walked up to the little scarlet vampire, Remilia Scarlet. She was a mess, as if she had been living on the streets. Quite unsavory compared to her European origins.

"Hey, Remi, what happened?" Marisa asked. Remi stood up.

"If you must ask, stealer magician, Patchy died. How could you not have heard?"

"But Remilia," The miko intervened, "don't you control fate?"

"..."

"Remilia, what happened? We're trying to solve an inci-"

Remilia turned around in tears.

"An incident?! Now you care?! Patchouli was dying!!! Where were you then, huh?!"

"Remilia-"

"Don't you dare to talk to me!!! You damned miko... you could have saved her!!! You could have helped her!!! But you just sat back drinking your tea!!! You... YOU'RE DEAD!!!"

Remilia then began floating in the air with a cold murderous look in her eyes.

"Remi-"

"You've screwed up this time, miko!"

Reimu. looked at the ground.

"... I see. You're too distraught to listen to reason. Then I guess... I'll have to knock some sense into you!!!"


Alright guys, like I said, I'm no longer doing this on a daily basis. Comment, Critique, or PM me about anything and I'll get to it. Next issue comes out whenever.

wonderweiss

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07/26/2013, 10:27 PM #22
Part 9: The Outside World is Intriguing...



Yukari and the gang had finally reached the apartment in which Sharlene resides. It was a humble little abode , but to Yukari, this was the cutting-edge room of the near future.

"I can't believe that I've been away for so long... everything is so different."

Sharlene turned to Yukari with a smile. "Well, that's because there aren't that many humans in Gentokyo that wish to-"

"Um, it's Gensokyo, Shar." Mike interrupted.

"Up, crap, there I go again. Anyways, there aren't many humans in Gensokyo. But the people that stay there seem to be the ones that are more content with their lives. They never needed anything. But us humans here, well... we just want more. Bigger. Better! That's, mhow New York came to be."

Then Mike added to that. "But if you youkai and humans work together, you can all thrive. You can grow!"

Megan jumped in to the conversation. "Yea, and if you grow while working together, not only will you widen the possibilities for Gensokyo, but also the social circles of both youkai and human alike. You can finally be able to get along, and your community... well, it might even be better than our little NYC here."

Yukari though for a while. I've never thought of that before. Gensokyo had always been a haven for both youkai and human alike, but they never got together. And Gensokyo was peaceful as it is. I mean, without all the incidents. I... I just need time to think on it.

Sharlene opened the door to her room to reveal a nice little well laid out room. Megan hurried to the fridge.

"Hey, Sharlene, we're outta drinks!"

"What're ya talking about, I just restocked the fridge. If you're talking about alcohol, then of course we're out. You drank all of it three nights ago, remember?"

"Oh yea... well, can ya get me some more?"

"Well..."

"Oh yea, Carrabba's... I'm just forgetting everything today..."

Yukari spoke up. "Well, I have sake back at ho-"

Megan rushed over to Yukari in the blink of an eye. "Did you say sake? Oh, I love sake! It's like my second favorite drink in the world!"

"Eheh... well, I'll go get it now."

Yukari opened a gap to her house. The others tried to peak in, but all of a sudden, a girl with.. cat ears and two tails blocked their vision?

"Huh? Yukari-sama, you have people looking through your ga~ps!"

"Don't mind them, Chen! I'm going to need you two to look after the place while I'm gone!"

"Oka- Ow! Yukari-sama, one of them is pulling my ear!"

Yukari walked back to her gap to find that Megan was intrigued in Chen's cute cat-like appearance.

"Oh dear! Megan, would you please stop?!"

"Huh? Oh, sorry," She said as she let go of Chen's ear. "It's just... she's so damn cute!"

Yukari let out a sigh. But before she stepped back out, Ran came from the kitchen.

"Ah, Yukari-sama. Listen, I have something to tell you. It's about the SDM. You see-"

"Ran... I know. It's better to just let go of it. I'm sure that our favorite little miko will solve the incident."

"But Yukari-sama!"

By that time, Yukari had gone away into her gap.

"... the miko is the problem...


Alright guys, leave a comment, critique, or PM and I will get to it. Later ya'lls.

wonderweiss

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07/30/2013, 11:30 PM #23
Part 10: Twelve o' Clock...



It had been a long night for the group. Everyone had a good time. There was much racket, a lot of games, and idiocity floating in the alcohol scented air. Yukari had much fun that night. She had almost forgot about the tragedy.

But soon that was about to change.

Yukari looked at the clock. "Midnight, huh? Well, I guess it's about time to go to sleep."

All of a sudden, she felt a presence behind her. "Who goes-" But when she turned around, no one was there. She felt the presence rush by her again, and again, there was no one there. "I... I must be hallucinating. I really do need that sleep."

She looked at the clock by sheer chance as she went to look for a bed. But then she noticed something and looked back at the clock. The clock had stopped moving.

"Well, it must be broken. I will tell Sharlene once she wakes... wait..."

The clock had not only stopped moving, but it stopped at exactly twelve o' clock. Not a second over, nor under.

No! I'm simply paranoid! I need sleep!

She rushed to the bed, when all of a sudden, a strange voice came from nowhere.

"Where do you think you are going, my dear?"

Yukari stopped and slowly turned around to see a humanoid black mist figure with red piercing eyes. "W-who are you? State our name before I send you to Makai!"

"But alas, there is no need for that... Yukari Yakumo."

"How do you-"

"How? Why, I know everything. I know who you are, what you are, what you did, who your shinigami are, and most intriguing... why the librarian died."

Yukari's eyes opened wide in shock. "... why are you here?"

"I'm here to tell you something. Something that you might want to know. Your world... it's becoming quite a disturbance. The 'peaceful' world of Gensokyo... you would like to know that it's not to be staying around for very long."

"Wait, are you threatening the existence of Gensokyo?!"

"You would like that, don't you? You want to know that it is nothing but a mere joke. Unfortunately, your delusions are in vein. Your world is going out. Now it's up to you to make everyone leave."

Yukari stood there in anger. But she couldn't speak. The black mist began to dissipate.

"Take heed, youkai. By the way, I've one more thing to tell you: that which the soul crosses to the next life in a divine world... it is now decommissioned. Good-bye."

The black mist went away. Yukari thought to herself. What am I doing?! I came here for a reason! I must finish my duty here and return as quickly as possible!

She went to bed. All that she hoped for... is that what she heard was nothing but a nightmare. And henceforth...

The clock began ticking again.


Remember, feel free to comment, critique, or PM and I will get to it.

wonderweiss

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07/10/2015, 04:15 PM #24
Part 11: You Blame Yourself




Voile had been made a mess of with the battling. Remi is beaten, but it was no walk in the park. The miko was battered, much more than other times she fought with Remi. Both were hovering in the air, barely maintaining their composition and panting in exhausting.

Remi spoke up. "... where... were you... huff... WHERE-"

"You blame yourself."

All activity stopped. Voile stood silent, no one uttering a word. Sakuya and Koakuma both looked on in shock that Reimu would say such a thing.

"... How dare you talk to me... with such tongue..." Remi uttered in rage.

Reimu made her way closer to Remilia. "It's not hard to see. How easy you were to anger. How you didn't answer my question as to why you didn't alter her fate. Let me guess... you couldn't."

The two floated down to the ground. Remi stared at the ground.

"... It doesn't make sense! I tried to save her, there was no reason for her to die! She shouldn't have! She... I just... don't understand any of it. How could she die, WHY did she die?!"

Reimu just stood there. Remi began collecting herself.

"... Just... Leave. There's nothing to look into. Her death was an illness. No one knows what kind it is. I have a fairy sending a sample of her blood to Eintei. Eirin will inspect it. In other words, you're done here."

Reimu nodded. She began making her way to the exit. "Come on, Marisa, you heard her."

Marisa followed. That is, until they were intercepted by Meiling. The front half of her suit was slightly wet.

"Mistress, there's something you must see!" She said. Everyone made their way to the main entrance to be greeted by a soaking Komachi. She was breathing hard.

"Komachi?" Sakuya questioned. "Why are you- you should be taking Pat-"

"The river..." Komachi interrupted, "... It's... It has a sinkhole in it."

"What?" Remi said in disbelief. "It's a bottomless damned river, how can it have a sinkhole?!"

Komachi coughed up water. "... Damned if I knew. It also turned black... I think..."

Reimu sighed. "Komachi, you show up half drowned from a bottomless river turned black and now has a sinkhole, can you please get to the point?"

Komachi grinned a bit. "So impatient... I'll enjoy taking you across the river... thing is- *Cough* ... the black river, it was like... there was something in it, other than souls of the damned. Like the river weren't black, but it had... something in it. I mean, otherwise, you'd see little black water droplets on me."

"Hold on, you fell into the river? You had a- nevermind," Marisa said. "Okay, so the river might not have turned black. But why would you think there was something in it?"

"Because... When I looked into the river... I thought I was just hallucinating, but... I saw two red dots, like eyes, staring back at me. Next thing I know, I fell in. I seem to have ended up in Misty Lake somehow."

"But..." Remi spoke up, voice trembling, "... Where's Patchouli's soul?"

That question struck shock into everyone. What had happened to her soul? The river was no longer accessible.

"... I have her," Komachi responded. I was only barely able to save it. It's in my body. I'm afraid it'll be here for a while."

Remi was discomforted by the answer, but overall relieved. "... Very well. I'm going to... go to bed. It's been a long day. I need to rest."

Remi turned around and motioned Sakuya to follow her. "Oh, and Komachi," she said with her back turned. "... Thank you."

She made her way to her room as the others watched. As soon as Remilia was gone, Komachi sighed.

"... I'm so sorry..."

"It's alright," Meiling reassured, "at least you saved-"

"I didn't."

Those two words rung in the ears of everyone in the room.

"... I didn't save her... that thing in the water... it took her. It took her into the water."


By god, I finally got back to it. I finally have a plot map mapped out. Sorry for the excruciatingly long pause... not that anyone cared. Anyways, feel free to comment, critique, or PM and I will get to it.