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Katrix

Katrix

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01/11/2014, 10:21 PM #3541
@Wonder

Looks good. There area few things I have to point out however.

1. Power of the moon. It's not really that big of a problem tough. He you state the light from the moon as something of it's own. In this world however it is just like any other type of light, photons traveling trough the air. This could be fixed with the fact that maybe he didn't really know the properties of the sunlight he controlled. Maybe it got to concentrated and hot and in the end he killed his master with it. The reason moon light is easier to control is because it's not as much of it, leading to lower amount of heat and energy.

2. Goodness of the moon. This is the big one.

Noe that when I talk about gods here, I talk about the six gods. The seventh is something entirely different. This is a problem because there is a set amount of gods that exist. There is also ways that gods work and rules that governs gods. One of these rules are that they might not ineract with the world in any way. They are seperated from the world by a barrier of sort. This is a problem because he both say and talked to her. The next thing is that they all have a magical element associated with them. This element is way above the normal elements and is normally outside of what normal humans can do. Only the gods selected people can use in, barely. There is also the fact that I really don't want more gods. It would also be kind of hard to integrate it into the plot.

3. His magic knowledge. This one I just need a explanation sort of on.

While he is a magic student, that was several years ago. Magic and the knowledge about magic is currently at it's prime age. New things are leanrt fairly often and the half-life of knowledge is about 5 years. Maybe something more appropriate would be 4-2.

There is also the fact that he have 5 in Geography. This is at the point where is fairly knowledgeable about how the world looks. I just need a explanation on how he gained such knowledge.

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WriggleRid3r

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01/11/2014, 10:37 PM #3542
Back, but not for long.



GRIMSLEY PLEASE STAHP
(*currently playing Black/White Nuzlocke)

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Cucoo5

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01/11/2014, 10:52 PM #3543
@ Katrix

Right.

unfortunately, if I were to go off my interpretation of him...I would make him sound like he is the universe that has taken on the representation of a mortal. But that's not what he is.
He's more a computer (An A.I.) linked to the central "code of the universe."
Even in the game he's vague on what he really is, there is no definite answer...
also the reason why it's difficult is because the game was riddled with plot twists
One second he's a Homs seer for the High Entia royalty, next he's Zanza's Disciple, then he says he is Monado, and finally he reveals he is a computer used in an experiment that restarted the universe.

He's got too many plot twists to really make a single app, so I'm kinda lost on how to do it for him...

S121

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01/12/2014, 01:24 AM #3544
If Aeterna was still up and running, this would be its theme.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MTB-ssuBDvw

Originally posted by S121
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Katrix

Katrix

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01/12/2014, 01:33 AM #3545
Wow, you even managed to get the name right

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S121

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01/12/2014, 01:50 AM #3547
@Katrix

I know, right? :p

I saw the song's name, listened to it, and thought it was perfect. It has a touch of that technological sci-fi sound, which emphasizes that it's all a simulation and that there is some technology in Aeterna, but at the same time, the chorus and classical instruments give it that fantasy feeling, the magic. Aeterna was a fusion of magic and science.

Man, I wish it was still going. That was an RP I thoroughly enjoyed. :(

Don't get me wrong, all the other RPs are great, but Aeterna had a certain feel to it that can't be perfectly replicated.






@Cucoo

No problem. :p
Last edited by S121; 01/12/2014, 01:54 AM.
Originally posted by S121
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Cucoo5

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01/12/2014, 01:51 AM #3548
Aye and now...

I just looked through some more of Two Steps From Hell's songs...
...I found a new theme for Aion (Astraeus)



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JwH2Ufc7RVk&list=PLDE3F12DB37755C23




And I'm still lost on how to tackle Alvis's app...as I mentioned in my prior post prior to the prior...
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WriggleRid3r

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01/12/2014, 01:55 AM #3549
So.

Tell me.

Why is that Gothitelle SO HARD TO BEAT!

UAAAAAGH!

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Luna Pixu

Luna Pixu

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01/12/2014, 02:05 AM #3550
@Katrix
*double clang* ARGH! What the hell?! Why are there two pans here?
Balls... Not only did I get the wrong Riku, not that it truly matters. But I also did not see that post of yours until now. I'm so stupid...

*clang* What?! Why am I getting another pan?! Is this because of the fact that I broke the spambox rule?
Last edited by Luna Pixu; 01/12/2014, 02:07 AM. Reason: *clang* Very bad grammar
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