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Katrix

Katrix

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12/07/2013, 11:56 PM #751
@S121

Time travel, turning back time and the consequences. Might put it up in the literature section when I'm done with it.

Born in the light. Molded in the dark.
Never Forget, Keep Fighting.
–Don't Forget. Always, somewhere, someone is fighting for you. –As long as you remember her, you are not alone.
S121

S121

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12/07/2013, 11:57 PM #752
@Katrix

It sounds interesting. I'll be keeping an eye out. :p

Originally posted by S121
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Katrix

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12/08/2013, 12:19 AM #753
@S121

Gah. Now I feel pressure. And I don't even remember the full original story.

Born in the light. Molded in the dark.
Never Forget, Keep Fighting.
–Don't Forget. Always, somewhere, someone is fighting for you. –As long as you remember her, you are not alone.
S121

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12/08/2013, 12:49 AM #754
@Katrix

No worries. You're life doesn't depend on it. I'm not trying to put pressure on you. XD

You'll be done when you're done, and you shouldn't worry about anyone waiting. :p
Last edited by S121; 12/08/2013, 12:51 AM.
Originally posted by S121
Every time I see a new post on the Forum, I feel like a little kid during Christmas, all giddy.


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Cucoo5

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12/08/2013, 01:05 AM #755
@Katrix
Time travel scenario?
Those are always fun...
...and that reminds me I should work out how its working in EG cause of Revere and Selene cause I need to explain
1,000 times the story scenario happened...
Yet in the round which the story currently takes place, the loop is broken by Selene...
so...WHERE DID SELENE COME FROM?!
That is the main thing I have yet to explain...

SUSTIC

SUSTIC

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12/08/2013, 01:12 AM #756
@Cucoo

CUCOO I MADE AN APP FOR ARA HAAN IN ATWAG PLEASE LOOK IT OVER OR SOMETHING!!!
Katrix

Katrix

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12/08/2013, 01:12 AM #757
@Cucoo

Nope, no time travel involved. I'm throwing all that out the window. I'll replace it with memories and death. It works better that way. I don't really care if this story doesn't exactly follow the original. In fact only the beginning is similar. This one is much darker. I guess I can't use the name Heavy Vine anymore tough as it doesn't involve time travel so I need to find a new name.

Born in the light. Molded in the dark.
Never Forget, Keep Fighting.
–Don't Forget. Always, somewhere, someone is fighting for you. –As long as you remember her, you are not alone.
SUSTIC

SUSTIC

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12/08/2013, 01:15 AM #758
@Katrix

If I recall... Time Travel is one of the more annoying things to write about. It's easy to mess up and leave major plot holes and stuff in a story about time travel, and if you mess up it can be annoying to fix. I'm also now interested in your story as well.
Cucoo5

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12/08/2013, 01:20 AM #759
@ Katrix

Depends on how you use the "memories" concept, but maybe something like these for possible titles?

Poison Vine
Twisted Vine
(Because vines could still symbolize the concepts, right?)
or
Fragmented Darkness
Death's Mind


those are the first thing I would think of just with memories and death and dark.

@ SUS
It's tricky, not annoying. The hardest part is it's almost physically impossible to hit every aspect of time travel without breaking one of the rules of time travel.
And I'll quickly read over yer app (which S121 did already right?) and plug it in to the archives.
Last edited by Cucoo5; 12/08/2013, 01:22 AM.
SUSTIC

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12/08/2013, 01:25 AM #760
@Cucoo

Thanks, and to me... tricky is annoying =w=