[OOC]Shi no Zencho ~ Bad Omen!
03/26/2016, 12:48 AM #242
Um........... Kristy. How can Mira hear what Yuki is thinking?
"No matter how strong or what power the enemy has, I will fight and protect my friends, even if it cost me my life to protect them. I will fight until I die to ensure their future."
03/26/2016, 04:34 AM #243
Originally posted by Zekai
Um........... Kristy. How can Mira hear what Yuki is thinking?
Because you fucking people insist on PUTTING QUOTATION MARKS AROUND THOUGHTS.
QUOTATIONS SIGNIFY SPEECH.
THOUGHTS USE APOSTROPHE'S OR NO PUNCTUATION AT ALL.
Sometimes I feel like the only normal person here
"My Threshing has been Extra Princely Fresh"
"My Threshing has been Extra Princely Fresh"
Hazmer Baybee
03/26/2016, 04:35 AM #244
I clearly said Yuki thought and its a speaking action, just in the head also I italicize thoughts and your not Kristia so don't comment on something thats not towards you.
"No matter how strong or what power the enemy has, I will fight and protect my friends, even if it cost me my life to protect them. I will fight until I die to ensure their future."
03/26/2016, 04:43 AM #245
Originally posted by Zekai
I clearly said Yuki thought and its a speaking action, just in the head also I italicize thoughts and your not Kristia so don't comment on something thats not towards you.
First off, shut the fuck up.
Second off, it doesn't fucking matter, conflicting information happens all the fucking time. People automatically associate quotations with speech.
Third off, A NUMBER OF YOU FUCKING DO IT. STOP FUCKING DOING IT. YOU DON'T FUCKING SPEAK IN YOUR HEAD. YOU THINK.
Fourth off, shut the fuck up and listen to me.
Sometimes I feel like the only normal person here
"My Threshing has been Extra Princely Fresh"
"My Threshing has been Extra Princely Fresh"
Hazmer Baybee
03/26/2016, 04:45 AM #246
How about you just leave the forum again and stay gone cause it's talk like that is why no one likes you.
"No matter how strong or what power the enemy has, I will fight and protect my friends, even if it cost me my life to protect them. I will fight until I die to ensure their future."
03/26/2016, 04:50 AM #248
Originally posted by Zekai
How about you just leave the forum again and stay gone cause it's talk like that is why no one likes you.
http://theeditorsblog.net/2012/02/28/inner-dialogue-writing-character-thoughts/ Go read this.
"Never use quotation marks for thoughts, even if those thoughts are inner dialogue, a character talking to himself. Reserve quotation marks for speech that’s vocalized. Readers should be able to tell when a character is speaking inside his head and when he’s talking aloud, even if he’s the only person in the scene."
Sometimes I feel like the only normal person here
"My Threshing has been Extra Princely Fresh"
"My Threshing has been Extra Princely Fresh"
Hazmer Baybee
03/26/2016, 04:52 AM #249
Why is it youre the only one that has a problem with the why I rp? No one else says anything to me. So how about you just leave me alone and never talk to me ever again.
"No matter how strong or what power the enemy has, I will fight and protect my friends, even if it cost me my life to protect them. I will fight until I die to ensure their future."
03/26/2016, 04:54 AM #250
Originally posted by Zekai
Why is it youre the only one that has a problem with the why I rp? No one else says anything to me. So how about you just leave me alone and never talk to me ever again.
You asked a question.
I answered the question.
Read the article I linked.
Understand why you're doing it wrong.
Improve as a writer.
?????
Profit by progressively giving me fewer reasons to chew you out over these things.
Sometimes I feel like the only normal person here
"My Threshing has been Extra Princely Fresh"
"My Threshing has been Extra Princely Fresh"
Hazmer Baybee