(Wonder. Make your posts longer and Make it clear who is speaking.
"You. Please watch where you're going. You could've broken the suit."
"You were in the way. Plus, why do you have that in a place like this? Is it to hide your ugly face?"
I nearly confused that for you talking the whole time.)
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(6:50 am) Land of Sinders and Ashes:
The small village where the pyromantic shrine once hailed had beed somewhat in ruins. Many houses had burn down or bean torn apart by the fighting, crops had been trampled and around the village were people, bruised, battered and brokenhearted at the sad state of the world. On the upside the zombie infestation had been pushed back and the threat slain by the fire maiden. All around the village the zombie got many strange looks but for the most part no one paid him any mind, apart from the children who ran into him. At the steps of the shrine of fire a young woman had knelled and seemed to be preying.
"You. Please watch where you're going. You could've broken the suit."
"You were in the way. Plus, why do you have that in a place like this? Is it to hide your ugly face?"
I nearly confused that for you talking the whole time.)
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(6:50 am) Land of Sinders and Ashes:
The small village where the pyromantic shrine once hailed had beed somewhat in ruins. Many houses had burn down or bean torn apart by the fighting, crops had been trampled and around the village were people, bruised, battered and brokenhearted at the sad state of the world. On the upside the zombie infestation had been pushed back and the threat slain by the fire maiden. All around the village the zombie got many strange looks but for the most part no one paid him any mind, apart from the children who ran into him. At the steps of the shrine of fire a young woman had knelled and seemed to be preying.
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