iv done the backstory :)
ust updated it
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03/21/2015, 04:26 AM #533
I agree with Wriggle. Take a look at other apps to get a sense of what he means.
"No matter how strong or what power the enemy has, I will fight and protect my friends, even if it cost me my life to protect them. I will fight until I die to ensure their future."
03/21/2015, 01:13 PM #535
For gods sake see this thing --> . , use it. If you can't properly punctuate your sentences then there is little chance that you will be taken seriously.
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| Born in the light.
Molded in the dark. Never Forget, Keep Fighting. |
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Don't Forget.
Always, somewhere,
someone is fighting for you.
As long as you remember her,
you are not alone.
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03/21/2015, 06:36 PM #536
I have to agree with Katrix here. I won't be a grammar nazi and point out every single mistake, but please use proper grammar. If you don't understand all the rules of the English language, that's fine, I'm no English major either.
The only reason I'm saying this is that you can't exactly get away with terrible grammar here, on an RP thread, which is heavily based on writing.
The only reason I'm saying this is that you can't exactly get away with terrible grammar here, on an RP thread, which is heavily based on writing.
03/21/2015, 07:34 PM #537
As someone who has trouble reading and writing herself i recommend using microsoft word or some other third party document program with a spell checker. More often than not they'll show you any grammar mistakes you make like leaving out punctuation or misspelling a word. You can also paste posts made by other people into the program to make the text larger and easier to read. That will only take you so far though. You need some level of skill in literacy if you wish to role play.
For example i don't think any program thus far is advanced enough to add quotation marks or commas for you. And while it isn't necessarily a game breaker depending on the context, It's ill-fitted to give a three sentence response to a post that took up multiple paragraphs. Granted some times it's unavoidable but my point is you need to try to put in the same amount of effort as the person on people you're role playing with.
For example i don't think any program thus far is advanced enough to add quotation marks or commas for you. And while it isn't necessarily a game breaker depending on the context, It's ill-fitted to give a three sentence response to a post that took up multiple paragraphs. Granted some times it's unavoidable but my point is you need to try to put in the same amount of effort as the person on people you're role playing with.
03/23/2015, 02:53 AM #538
Here's Cecilia's design, finally~! Took a long while to figure out a good basic look but I've finally done it.
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