Aeterna - OOC/Character Registration

[Tewi_Inaba]

should i post Seki's story now or wait for Kristia?

[S121]

I think Kristia is here.

It should be fine.



EDIT:

Yea, Kristia is here.

[Kilelicus]

Remi's not posting. He doesn't want to.
I'm gonna be honest, and I want you guys to know that what I'm about to say is in no way an attempt to be an asshole.

You guys really need to work on your writing.

1. You don't need all this... colored and emboldened crap. It encourages people to read only that and nothing more. That ruins it.
2. You guys write WAY TOO MANY DEUS EX MACHINAS. They are not fun. They are boring, and stupid, and take away any sense of drama or urgency.
3. A lesson for you guys to take away from this: When you RP, don't make it out to be this stupid "Oh, it's an RP, not a book. You shouldn't be collaborating with the other writers to keep it spontaneous." Working with other writers is the key to having a good piece of fiction. And it should really have an end. It shouldn't just go on and on like ATWAG is.
4. Read books and take some writing classes. They will help you immensely.

Seriously. End it.

Sorry to say, but Aeterna is done. I just can't maintain my interest.

[Kristia]

fine, be it like that, Im out of here

[wonderweiss]

Done? In what sense?

[Kilelicus]

In the sense that I'm having remi close these threads and/or delete them.

[wonderweiss]

Alright. Sorry we couldn't live up to your expectations.

[Kilelicus]

You need to practice.
And take the things I said into account. They are excellent ways to improve your writing.
Remi's pretty much not posting because of the posting that was going on here :/
They're part of the reasons we both bailed out of ATWAG

[Katrix]

That's sad. Maybe we just aren't good at RPing
To be honest I really liked this RP. More That ATWAG in fact. Really sad that you're closing it.
When I think back I do see a few places where I could have done something different.

[Tewi_Inaba]

this was actually only my 2end time role-playing so i don't care that much. I won't be doing this again.

[Kilelicus]

Don't be that way, Trouble. RP is fun! I'll probably come back with another one, more touhou oriented and probably ripped from Sid's "Angel's Fall First" idea where toohoos WILL die. :3

[Katrix]

But I thought you thought we are terrible at RPing. And I sawy the same Tewi. You were really good. Can't just quit after just a little bit.

Anyway, I'm of to bed. I need some creativity and one of the times I'm the most creative is wehn I'm about to fall asleep (the other being baths, but I can't take a bath anymore because of moving.) Anyway, good night.

[S121]

@Trouble

Just as Katrix said, you are good. You brought the character out.

If you're feeling bummed out, don't give up just yet.

[Kilelicus]

Well, it's not like you guys are bad at RP, but there are things you need to work on. Which are mainly the four or five things I said.

[Tewi_Inaba]

I'm not quieting because i'm bummed or i feel that i am bad. Like i said in my character form post i'm a very casual rper and i don't do it often. I did this time because the story appealed to me.Anyway thanks for the complements and all the fun. I'll be around if anyone wants to talk. And of corse i'm always on the server.