Maybe for to new MokoHoboHut?

http://i742.photobucket.com/albums/xx68/Kilel/2013-03-15_223919_zpse54e9b50.png

http://i742.photobucket.com/albums/xx68/Kilel/2013-03-15_223936_zpscfdbc286.png

The one we have right now is made by Topaz and yeah. Also, this is a hobo hut for Moko. Topaz's is more like... an apartment. Moko lives in a cardboard box, sillies.
Also Moko burned the one I made so that means it's better or something.

Here is some constructive criticism:
1) you should fix the roof, it is too wide, what I recommend is that you make it smaller and make it one block taller.
2) don't add the gold platform to it, it doesn't really fit in, have you tried using spruce or jungle wooden planks for the platform?
3) the entire structure looks like it is floating, try to put some oak wood in the corners and fences on the side.
That's all that I can think of that needs improvement. I hope this helps~

i was actually thinking to do this but i didn't know how also the extremes of the roof are way too long for me

PLAES ENRUE MESAAGE IS TEN CHARACTERS

dat roof

bump for more attention please

no waaaaaaaay the otherone looks way better.... and you has creepy Marisa avatar..... TO SPOOKY!!

it could be greatly improved with the liberal application of voxel.

FIX THE ROOF

WHAT IS WRONG WITH THE ROOF, SID?

And Trouble, the other one is Topaz's. Meaning Replacement is necessary.

Everybody said it is too wiiiideeeee