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**S121** · 02-10-2015, 11:00 PM

Okay, here's my app. I still need to make the adaptations though.

Name of Character: Ethan Ambers

Gender: Male

Age: 20

Appearance:

Height: 5'10" (177.8 cm)

Weight: 200

He has bullet, slash, and stab scars scattered across his torso and back from the incident involving his family. Because of this, he tries to hide them with shirts.

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Faction: DCERT (other) (See reason for faction)

Base Corruptivity Level: 59.9 (Ethan has not committed any crimes yet, but he is definitely out for blood.)

Biography: To be honest, Ethan didn't really care all too much about the world's problems. How he saw it, it was simply the world being as it usually was. People killed each other every day, and nothing was really going to change that. Humans weren't human unless they were either in conflict, or at someone else's throat. Of course, Ethan's apathy towards the world's problems soon changed one day when he was at a family reunion.

While Ethan was at one of his family's usual reunion parties, a crazed, troubled man broke into the house with a gun and opened fire. Ethan was shot multiple times, then was left for dead as the man finished the rest of the household. Once everything was quiet, Ethan tried to crawl to a phone, but the man intercepted him and shot Ethan again. When the man ran out of bullets, he switched to a knife. A neighbor called the police, and when they got there, many of Ethan's family members were dead, with only a few left in critical condition. Ethan and what was left of his family were taken to the hospital and placed into ICU. A couple days later, the rest of Ethan's family died in the ICU, leaving Ethan as the only survivor.

Ethan remained in the hospital for the better part of a few months before being let out, due to his injuries. During that time, the police had listened to Ethan's story, but could do little else. They were so backed up with various other crimes that they couldn't track the man that killed Ethan's family. Ethan grew bitter about the entire situation, how the police couldn't do anything. Ethan thought about what had happened to him, to his family. Why was it that that man would break into a house and gun down everyone inside? What was going through that man's head when he did that? Ethan didn't know, but as the days passed, Ethan learned about a man named Vector Leire, how he riled up all the troubled people in the world and convinced them to act out against the world. This man, this monster was the reason Ethan's family was dead. As Ethan thought about this, he became more and more troubled by what had happened. He became angry at the man for what he had done, and angry at Vector, that sub-human scum for being the catalyst. Ethan knew what he wanted to do. Ethan wanted revenge. He was going to make sure that both that man and Vector would pay. Those people that would do the same to innocent people like Ethan deserved the same fate. They were all going to burn for what they had done. They were all going to pay.

After a couple months of being in the hospital, Ethan was allowed back out. Of course, it wouldn't be easy for him to adjust back to ordinary life. While in the hospital, he would get these horrible hallucinations and nightmares about his family being massacred. Not only that, he also felt depressed, tired, and had very little patience or enthusiasm for anything. The only thing Ethan really had to look to for hope was his plan.

Ethan wanted to make The Corrupt pay, but he certainly wasn't going to do it with just his fists. Ethan needed a means to end The Corrupt, something that would give him the power to change things, the power to make a difference, the power to take his life back. When nobody was looking, Ethan would steal one of the armor prototypes he was working on, and that night, when everyone would leave to go home, Ethan would sneak the armor and weapon systems off of school grounds. After that, Ethan would don the armor and begin his hunt, his war against The Corrupt. Of course, after that, it would be a matter of finding a means to pay for ammunition and weapons, as well as a means to repair his armor in the event it got damaged. With that in mind, Ethan applied for internship, and after a couple of days, he had found a place he could work at. Now, it's just a matter of getting the job, and soon after that, the armor and weapons. He doesn't care if his plan is suicidal, he always meant for this to be a one way trip anyways. After all, he has nothing to lose... doesn't he?

Personality: Before the incident, Ethan was a calm, kind individual. He still is, but not in the same way he used to be. Now, he's more silent and seems more depressed than calm. He's more cynical about how the world works, and is downright merciless towards The Corrupt and anyone affiliated with them. In general, he's usually glum, even bitter at times. Of course despite that, it's still possible to see him in a positive mood every once in a while. Even when he is in his worst moods, he always has a soft spot for people that have been wronged, especially if it involved The Corrupt. Because of that, he is willing to help those that need it. Despite his emotions and inner turmoil, he is good at hiding his emotions, sometimes acting the opposite of how he really feels. He is also somewhat ashamed about his scars. They remind him of the incident with his family and it makes him feel as if he's been permanently marked, tainted by the incident.

Reason you're in that faction: Ethan wants Corrupt to pay for what they have done, but is often at odds with DCERT. After all, he is a vigilante. He doesn't care about ideologies or the causes the factions are fighting for, and he couldn't care less about the "war" between DECERT and The Corrupt. All Ethan wants is for The Corrupt to die. He's a vigilante, which means that he's on the wrong side of the law. In a way, he's a Corrupt, yet he is a Corrupt that wants to kill The Corrupt. He essentially thinks about Vector's message like this:

"... But if you can't... If you really think the world turned it's back to you... Make The Corrupt pay. Leave a mark in you own way! Let them know who they wronged! Take it by force and make them pay! It's not your fault!!! It's theirs!!! DO YOU HEAR ME!?!? TAKE REVENGE!!! MAKE EVERYBODY PAY FOR WHAT THEY HAVE DONE TO YOU!!! THEN KILL ME IN THESE DAMNABLE SHACKLES!!! THEN I SHALL LEAD YOU TO SALVATION-"

How he sees it, the world turned its back on him. If the world won't help him, then Ethan will help himself. The Corrupt wronged him, took everything away from him, and if Vector wants Ethan to rise up like all the others, then he will do so. He will rise up and put an end to his suffering. He will make The Corrupt pay for what they had done to him and kill Vector. Her knows that him being a vigilante makes him an enemy of both sides, but he doesn't care. His sole reason for living now is to kill The Corrupt, to take revenge for his family.

Skills: Ethan is in college to study for an engineering degree. As such, he is a talented engineer and has a knack for science and technology, as well as how things work. On top of that, he is also skilled with hacking, albeit not to the point of being called a master. Lately, he's been thinking of taking up shooting guns, martial arts, and using knives as a hobby. He also knows first-aid.

Inventory:

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Armor

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Weapons

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Misc.

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Theme: I saw one person do it, so now I just have to.

I know this is the Psychopass theme, but I couldn't resist. It fits the character so well; the intense electric guitar, the sorrowful piano and violin, the electronic beat... it just matches so many aspects. The second theme just really emphasizes what his final goal is, how he wants to do one thing before his end. Because of the one video limit for posts, I have put the first song as a link.

Psychopass Theme
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rmmpVm0Xclc

Vengeance - Zack Hemsey
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Lhv_yFMuwxs
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lhv_yFMuwxs

Extra Notes: The armor is heavily based off of a real concept that is supposed to be implemented in the near future. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...04_639x800.jpg

The other note is that Ethan will not have all of his equipment at the start. He still needs to get all his equipment, save for the phone. There's also a good chance that if he finds a good weapon, he'll take it, or even make a couple home-made weapons.

Also, his Corruption level is very likely to increase substantially. After all, he will be killing a lot of people, stealing weapons and vehicles, hacking stuff, breaking into buildings, and speeding down highways.

**wonderweiss** · 02-10-2015, 11:52 PM

I'll accept it as soon as a (reasonable) BCL(Base Corruption Level) is placed. As far as faction...

TO EVERYONE!!!

THERE ARE TWO SIDES, DCERT AND CORRUPT. IF YOU FIGHT THE CORRUPT, YOU ARE DCERT. VICE VERSA. HOWEVER, IF THERE IS SOME COMPLICATION, CONSIDER WHO YOUR CHARACTER'S REAL ENEMY IS AND WRITE DOWN SO AND SO (OTHER)

FOR EXAMPLE, WITH S121'S APP, HE WOULD REALIZE THAT HE FIGHTS AGAINST THE CORRUPT SO HE IS DCERT, BUT HE IS DOING SO AGAINST THE LAW. IN WHICH CASE HE WOULD PUT DOWN DCERT (OTHER) IN THE APP.

Okay enough caps. So this is what it would look like.

Faction: DCERT Other (see Reason)

I hope this helps. And I made a modification to the CR radar section. Do check it out.

**Koishi** · 02-11-2015, 01:05 AM

Seems a bit more fleshed out than before. Might give it a try. Also, Wonder, the faction thing for this one's a bit different. I don't see why there can't be a neutral position, really. It's a war, but sometimes sides can be blurred.

Name of Character: Soane Withergreen

Gender: Female

Age: 32

Appearance: Soane herself is quite tall, around 6'2", and can be quite the sight. She has long waist-length hair dyed white, with part of it tied up in a side ponytail wrapped by a grouping of three red beads. She has somewhat pale skin which is contrasted by her bright blue eyes.

Normally she wears a plain grey t-shirt and black pants, covered by a light, but long black leather trench coat with a kevlar covering on the interior of both the shirt and the coat. A simple necklace with a large-caliber bullet casing attached to it adorns her neck. She normally wears gray slip-on shoes, and lastly, she has black gloves with detachable ends, so they can be both fingerless and normal. Occasionally, she wears a plain black mask to hide her face from identification.

Faction: Neutral/Other (See reason)

Base Corruptivity Level: 40

Biography: Soane lived a somber childhood, raised solely by her father, who himself worked a very shady business in illegal weapons trafficking, acting as a sort of middleman for orders. Because of this dangerous profession, he taught Soane how to use, clean, and efficiently hide weapons.

However, one day, when she was around 13, the law enforcement finally found out about her father around the time they started cracking down on anything they deemed "corrupt". They had little time, so the dad sent Soane off, while he stayed behind, detonated the weapons, and drew attention away from her as she escaped with what little she had.

From that point onward, she was on her own. She got by through pickpocketing and other less-than reputable acts of the thieving variety. She learned what she needed to learn from online classes, and trained further with weapons and other things of use.

Eventually, when she hit the age of 23, she learned even more, and eventually became a freelance hitman. She started off small, taking out easy targets, moving up the ladder, getting bigger and better jobs, though, of course, that meant more and more aliases to cover her tracks, as she moved throughout the US, back and forth. She continues that pattern to this day, with many people trying to hound her down and kill her. They've never succeeded.

Weapons: She uses a Taurus Model 44 as a sidearm, and a silenced G3SG/1, an in emergencies, she has a small Kukri in a sheath hidden in a compartment inside her coat.

Personality: Soane is in a word, cold. She almost never expresses any emotion, and many would say that she acts more like a machine than a human. She cuts pleasentries and gets straight to the point. She alwayss tries to find the quickest and most efficient manner to solve a problem, and can be very patient. It takes a lot to piss her off, but if you do, the best thing you can do is hide until she cools down, or risk injury/and or potential death.

Reason you're in that faction: Soane is a professional hitman and an assassin. She doesn't care who she needs to kill, regardless of faction. She could be seen as an ally and an enemy to both, someone who walks in-between the lines. She isn't insane, like the Corrupted, nor does she see any reason to help DCERT, due to her less than fevorable past with them.

**Kristia** · 02-11-2015, 01:13 AM

Name of Character: Sara Lynchwood

Gender: female

Age: 24

(This is where most info is a rop off of one of my favorite anime characters so deal with it)

Appearance:Sara is a woman in her mid-to-late twenties with a moderately muscular and curvaceous build, blonde hair that reaches the middle of her back and brown eyes. The Sara has broad shoulders from her military training and flared hips appropriate for her age.

Her usual attire are a brownish black turtle neck, a double rib(?) pistol holster and a light grey jacket over it, black pants with military styled boots and a brown belt with ammo straped on it.

An image of her

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Faction: vigilante (See reason)

Base Corruptivity Level: 30ish

Biography: Sara was on the military when the whole corruption mess started, as what she expected, the military was sent to deal with the major problems such as firefights or warzones caused by all of it. Soon even some soldiers started acting by their own and she saw how even some of her friends opted to take more than what they usually got during the battles. She tried to stop even to the point of aiming at one of her colleagues head when he lusted for blood of civilians, unfortunately she had to shoot at him before innocents were murdered. Lynchwood decided to leave the military since the corruption was getting too close to her.

Surviving by her own as a mercenary, Sara only accepted works from honest people that did need help, the pay was low, but she was rather fine with it since she was at least weeding out the world`s problem, one step at a time. Soon the DERT contacted and wanted to take her into their troops since she could be a great asset to their ideals, but had to keep an eye on her since she declared in her interview that she wouldn`t kill someone unless he or she truly deserved it.

Now, the weapon`s specialist works usually as a lone wolf dealing with what the higher ups marks as the enemy. She decides what missions to do thanks to her instinct even though she risks her career or her own life by deceiving direct orders.

Lynchwood fears that even the people of DCERT may become or are already corrupted

Personality: Sara is a quiet, collected woman, with a serious but courteous demeanor. She is viewed by her peers as the model of a perfect soldier; strictly disciplined and extremely rational, she rarely relaxes when on the job and is usually tasked with keeping her colleagues on track. Though from the outside she might seem strict, rigid, and even a little mean, Lynchwood is not as cold and distant as she may appear. Those close to her know that there is more to her than her no-nonsense attitude; beneath her professional aura is a kind soul who understands the difficulty of carrying a heavy burden.

Weapons: (Time for what many people like and need)
Aside from having expertise in most types of actual weaponry, Lynchwood usually uses what many people call "outdated" weapons, yet her skill surpass most of soldiers with updated weapons

The Webley Revolver: A standard issue service pistol for the armed forces.The Webley is a top-break revolver with automatic extraction. That is, breaking the revolver open for reloading also operates the extractor. This removes the spent cartridges from the cylinder. Firing the large .455 Webley cartridge, Webley service revolvers are among the most powerful top-break revolvers ever produced.

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The FN Model 1910: A blowback-operated, semi-automatic pistol, this pistol uses a novel operating spring location surrounding the barrel. It incorporates the standard Browning striker-firing mechanism and a grip safety along with a magazine safety and an external safety lever (known as the "triple safety") in a compact package.Offers a .32 ACP (7-round magazine) calibre.

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The Karabiner 98 Kurz:It is a bolt action rifle chambered for the 7.92�57mm Mauser cartridge. The Karabiner 98k is a controlled-feed bolt-action rifle based on the Mauser M 98 system. Its internal magazine can be loaded with five 7.92�57mm Mauser cartridges from a stripper clip or one-by-one. this rifle uses a turned-down bolt handle that makes it easier to rapidly operate the bolt, reduces the amount the handle projected beyond the receiver, and enables mounting of aiming optics directly above the receiver on the Karabiner 98k. The rifle is furnished with a short length of cleaning rod, fitted through the bayonet stud.

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Other: The reason for being neutral is because Sara fights for what is morally good, she won�t hesitate on aim her weapons at an authority if said authority is doing something that threatens the civilians, that is why the blonde is alert even with those she works with, because everyone can be corrupted

**WriggleRid3r** · 02-11-2015, 02:05 AM

Question! What's the character limitation per RPer?

**SUSTIC** · 02-11-2015, 02:05 AM

Bringing my app from the original one and modifying it for this revamp.

Also seeing the CR Radar I just can't help but have a character of mine wield that damn thing in his hand then crush it while yelling "IT'S OVER 9000!!!" Just for shits and giggles.

**SUSTIC** · 02-11-2015, 02:15 AM

Name of Character: Drake Alger

Gender: Male

Age: 21

Appearance:

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He stands at 6ft 2. Though instead of the emblem that you see in the picture is not there. Instead on his jackets right shoulder is the emblem of the Corrupt, while on the left it is the emblem of the DCERT. On the back of his jacket is the emblem of the Psyche (if they even have one.) His eyes underneath his glasses are a dark blue. Also a fun fact in that he has dark circles under his eyes which are usually hidden by his glasses. This is mostly due to lack of sleep and stress.

Faction: Neutral Mercenary- He is not on either side. He does not hold anything against either side, yet he does not favor either side as well. As such he is willing to work for anyone who hires him. Say the Corrupt hire him, he will work for them unless the DCERT pays him or gives him a better offer.

Base Corruptivity Level: Around 39-45 or so.
Biography: Drake Alger, of the Alger family has had a rather interesting yet boring past. He grew up in a rather rough neighborhood, there were gang fights every other day, and this made going anywhere in the city a fight for survival. As such he had gotten into quite a few fights whenever he left his home, in turn eventually taught him how to fight and defend himself in hand-to-hand combat. Even though he did train himself to fight back when he needed to it still wasn't enough. As such his two brothers, his younger brother, and his older brother had helped him and they formed their own little "gang" of sorts. Of which their gang never became big or anything, as it only consisted of the three Alger brothers. Though when the DCERT, and the Corrupt started to become headline news, their little trio of brothers was split. Drake's older brother Andrew, and his younger brother Maxwell split.

Andrew began to see that the Corrupt would eventually become too dangerous, and as such joined DCERT in hopes that he can one protect his family and friends from the Corrupt. Unfortunately for Andrew the youngest sibling of the three Maxwell saw that the Corrupt were truly wronged, and should not be treated the way they are. As such Maxwell became a Corrupt.

The brothers began to split even further, with Drake being the only one... unmoved by their decisions. He dealt with gangs, and other life threatening situations and he was unswayed. Drake saw this whole thing pointless, as such he didn't join either side. The three brothers eventually got to the point where they don't even speak to each other. In fact they actually became bitter enemies towards each other. Something that still persists to this day.

Now Drake works as a freelancer since he lives alone (he needs to make a living somehow), he does not care which side he works for, nor does he care which side he is against. Because of his brothers decisions he just doesn't feel any hostility. From their words Drake finds that both sides have their points, and their arguments. Because he had become a freelancer he did take up quite a bit of physical training to make sure his body is at it's best, and some training to hone his combat skills.

Currently he is willing to work for either side depending on how much he is offered...

Personality: Drake is a rather calm, and relaxed person. Due to the conditions he grew up in he is rather hardy emotionally, not being phased by much when it comes to conflicts. It is hard to piss him off, yet it is also somewhat easy to at least annoy him. Other than that he is rather average. Though when he has a job he is actually quite clever, and surprisingly determined to get his job done. His intelligence is quite average, if not slightly smarter than the average civilian, and yet he is quite clever and is sometimes said to be a tactical genius, capable of thinking of complex plans and strategies in a few minutes once given the information. He is also quite Street Smart due to the conditions that he grew up in.

At times inside, and outside missions he doesn't care about anyone but himself, only assisting teammates if they truly need help, and he is hired to do so (like he is hired by the DCERT to take out some Corrupt, he will help his teammates on the squad he had been hired to work for.) Even outside of missions and work Drake just does not seem to care about anyone but himself, though it isn't uncommon for him to get attached to someone he has worked with in the past.

In his eyes neither side is his enemy, nor is either side his "friend".

Reason you're in that faction: He is not really in a Faction, and as such is a mercenary because it is the closest one to being true Neutral. When in reality he would easily work for any side if they pay him enough, or give him a good enough offer.

Extra Note:
His weapons:
The SIG Sauer P226 9mm handgun:

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A standard 9mm handgun, that is quite reliable. It is something his older brother Andrew gave him after becoming a DCERT so that Drake would at least be able to defend himself.

A Black Aluminum Bat that his younger brother Maxwell gave him.

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Drake does not use either of these weapons unless he has to, or just feels like it. Other than that he relies on his reliable Hand-to-Hand combat skills, of which Drake is even better at as he trains his body with physical training, cardio, and hand-to-hand combat training for 3 hours a day, for 4 days a week.

He also knows his way around vehicles, knowing how to drive a Car, Truck, and Motorbikes.

Good luck. Will you need it?: Even with a strong body, and quick mind one will not be able to get far. Sometimes all they need is a little bit of luck. (Take this as however you wish Wonder.)

**wonderweiss** · 02-11-2015, 04:42 PM

Alright!

@Wriggle
Up to three, but if you want more, just ask. But know that characters beyond the third count will be judged thoroughly.

@Mima
Nicely done.

ACCEPTED

@Kristia
Well done, but I'll need that base corruption level. But more importantly, the reason you are in you faction is actually not just based on why you are in it, but why you choose to fight against the corrupt.

STILL NEEDS WORK

@SUSTIC
Good, but again, I'll need that corruption level. It may seem trivial, but it does help.

STILL NEEDS WORK

**WriggleRid3r** · 02-11-2015, 06:00 PM

Okay, I'll let you know if I need more than 3. Trust me, if you've read my recent apps, you'll see why my bios are top-shelf quality.

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**Kristia** · 02-11-2015, 06:41 PM

edition done

**wonderweiss** · 02-11-2015, 06:53 PM

@ Kristia

There we are.

And quite honestly, if you're willing to point a gun at a DCERT member for corrupt actions... I honestly don't see why that warrants another faction. I'm going to label you under DCERT unless you have a stronger justification for going neutral. Otherwise,

ACCEPTED

@Wriggle

Hmm,.. I see no problem with it.

ACCEPTED

And guys, I know that being neutral has its perks, but let's please try and have at least one character with a side. I personally feel that there are too many neutrals. THIS DOES NOT MEAN ANYONE HAS TO CHANGE ANYTHING. Just please keep that in mind.

**S121** · 02-12-2015, 07:08 AM

@Wonder

Done with my app.

Is it all good? Anything wrong with the corruptivity level? I tried to make him seem like his crime-spree is imminent without making him a Corrupt.

Also, what is Corruptivity? Is it based on the crimes you commit or might/will commit, the person's mental state and/or morals, or both the crimes and mental state?

**SUSTIC** · 02-12-2015, 10:01 AM

I fixed my app. Also don't forget Wonder. I have 2 other characters. One for DCERT and one for Corrupt. I just need to refine them a bit.

**wonderweiss** · 02-12-2015, 11:34 PM

@ S121
To answer your question, the reader is based on your mental state, your history, and your general possibility of inflicting harm. All of that calculates into the corruptivity level, using a weight system similar to a grading system. But that's just for reference. Just shoot it and it'll show up. I'm really leaning towards the owner giving the corruptivity level after being scanned, but I worry for shenanigans...

I'll figure it out later.

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