Originally posted by Mima Now you're calling my antique store a junk shop Wriggle. It's filled with magical items, tomes and the like. I described it earlier.
I think that was in character. yuuka probably has no interest for those kind of things, or that's how it appears to me. not that im saying it is...
Originally posted by Mima Now you're calling my antique store a junk shop Wriggle. It's filled with magical items, tomes and the like. I described it earlier.
I'm not calling the antique shop junk shop. Yuuka is. In the RP, Yuuka has, well, trouble with having a coherent conversation without actually making the other person feel offended. If you feel offended by this, sorry, but it's the character design.
Sometimes when you're driving down a road, a bug hits your windshield. It's ugly and unpleasant, but you just activate the wipers / cleaning fluid and it's gone in a few seconds. It's just part of driving down the road. You don't dwell on it, because that'd be silly. Bugs aren't worth the time.
Originally posted by topio1 hah. my first post. i think it sucked but if you guys could give me tips it would be greatly appreciated. or if it sucks beyond repair go right ahead and tell me. I can take it!
Not sure how active you'll be posting tonight, but right now I'm going to say that you better start posting soon because Remi's going to end up in Paris real damn soon. If you want to make some interjectory post as you intercept her while she's heading North, I won't mind. Just make sure to make it interesting :P
Also just a note, when you start a post you should do the bold and underlined format for [ b ] location - city(if applicable) - country [ /b] so people know where your character is.
(*Side note: Lucas is just a human who is in good terms with Nitorim, who fixes machines and devices for the people of Rio. The people of Rio grant Nitori protection and, sometimes, access to their nightlife. This is utterly casual sidestory, used when the situation in the other main storyline gets spectacular or heavy with seriousness.)
Not entirely sure if that's a good thing since that's basically going off and doing your own thing and not working with the rest of the RP to develop a central plot.
Basically, either change it so something does happen down at Rio so that it can tie into the central story or not continue that route.
I know, but I'm saying Nitori, as Wriggle said himself, isn't tied into the main story in any way. From his current usage of Nitori, it's just a "side story" that he does when he can't interact with the rest of the RP due to waiting or whatever reason. What I'm arguing is that if your character isn't being planned to somehow tie into the central plot somewhere in the future, you shouldn't be using that character. Period.
The RP isn't a progressive fanfic thread. It's meant to make users collaborate in some way or another, whether it be battling each other or allying with each other, to progress the central plot, which is the "good Characters vs bad Characters" battle.
Info about the post I just put up with the map: Fiora and the Spy will both be in the battle. Fiora will tank Remilia and gain her attention. The agents will give covering fire, slowing and weakening Remilia as she dodges their bullets. During Remilia's battle with Fiora, the Spy will appear behind Remilia and shoot a near fatal wound through her vitals. Remilia ends up escaping in a very weakened state.
The actual writing for the battle can be written by multiple people. Changes to the plot can be discussed here. As this is the first large-scale planned battle, we should attempt to get through this in a more organized manner. The overall plot should be known by all. Small discrepancies are welcome to be made.
