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  • S121
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    @Cucoo

    Ether energy instead of Anti energy? What is the Latin word for ghost or spirit?

    As for Aura tech, I might have a couple ideas. I'll type them up next data cycle.

    As for Irians, what are their physical features, abilities, and mental capabilities?

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  • Cucoo5
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    ok where are we...

    So on Papillians we've got that their wings portray morality, spirit, vitality, etc etc etc
    I think I might not develop Avonna's mother. Her father and sister are barely important to the story to begin with and trying to fill in the mother feels inconsequential as much as it's bugging me...
    They have an Aura, unique in effect per each individual, that pacifies people around them. (See Chapter 40 for a very brief mention of this ability for the time being.)
    A group of Papillians, led by Xystus, founded the Venturian Empire as a central governing body over the entire galaxy.
    At some point during the War of Eternity, Papillians were reduced to one known still alive: Avonna.

    If there's something more that could be added, I'm all ears.
    Otherwise, next is Irians
    "Beasts"
    I only have a mention of them in my old notes so I have next to nothing on them.
    Prideful and strong are the only other traits I have listed.

    Also to double up, I intend on developing Aura Tech a bit more.
    Common Technology developed during Era of Prosperity.
    It uses Corlaviri Crystals and the manipulation of Gaia and/or Anti Energy.
    I don't have a full list of things for it but the Encyclopedia at the end has a few "functions" listed.

    Also... perhaps another name for Anti Energy...

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  • Cucoo5
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    Chapter 40 - Edge of Eternity (Part 1)

    "Anna!" Aion was frantic as he raced forward in a mad attempt to reach Anankerisa being dragged away by the chains of energy, quickly approaching the Fissure. "Let her go!" He lunged forward, grabbing hold of her limp form and trying to pull her free. More chains, however, defeated his hope as now he too was being pulled into the Fissure. Accelerating helplessly forward, he clung to the still unconscious Anankerisa as if to protect her from whatever may lie beyond the rift. Once through, the chains restraining Aion ripped him away from Anna, throwing him to the hard tiled floor below. The shock from the impact knocked the air from his lungs, temporarily paralyzing him with pain.
    "Look what the cat dragged in."
    When Aion regained focus, he saw the man he had been looking for. "Sol..."
    A swift kick sent Aion sprawling across the floor. "We meet at last, Master of Time..." As Sol spoke, Aion got to his feet, pain and exhaustion inhibiting his movements. "I'll be honest, I expected more from the man who owned this place. So many mysteries... Like this sanctuary. Looks an awful like the easier to access Sanctuary of Light, but in reality... it's a completely different room, yet occupies the same space. How well do you even know your own home? Because while you were prancing about the galaxy..." Sol grinned manically as the chains holding Anankerisa lowered her next to him, "I was here, playing puppet master."
    "You... you were..."
    "Oh yes, quite comfortably too I might add. Having access to Heaven's Forge was also quite a convenience," he said drawing forth an ornate blade that seemed to be brimming with power. "It granted me access to one of the most powerful artifacts ever created! A fine blade... such attention to detail... and such power! The Void will be no match against this!"
    "You're mad."
    "Oh? What's that now? I didn't quite catch that."
    "If you think that sword alone will defeat the Void, you have another thing coming. You might think yourself so clever... but you're blind. Our best chance of surviving lies with the one Venturia sent us..." Aion took a moment to stand properly, fighting through the pain. Then he flanked over to Anankerisa. "Her. She's our hope."
    "Her? Oh you mean this puppet?" Sol caught Anna by the back of the collar of her dress as she fell free from the chains. "Our hope? Pah! She has played her role." His face then turned grim. "A puppet that no longer has use..." Energy surrounded Anankerisa's body, slowly growing in intensity as Sol spoke.

    "...is but mere garbage."

    In an instant, the form of Anankerisa vanished. Traces of the energy used to destroy her dissipated in the air as sparks. Aion stood stunned as realization of what Sol had done slowly sank in.
    "Nothing can stand against me. I have transcended this mortal plane and have become a god. With this sword I shall single-"

    "Enough."

    Sol looked annoyed at Aion for interrupting him, but his mood soon changed as the doors behind Aion opened. Those that entered soon were beside him. Joe, Eleos, Nemesis, Kiara, Starla, Terrisa, and Nero stood to either side of Aion, armed and ready.
    "How...?!" Sol looked perplexed. "Impossible! No one else would have known to come here!"
    "You're forgetting something, Sol." Aion said with a level voice that dripped anger. One more person appeared from behind him, a girl that made Sol stumble backwards in disbelief. "I am the Master of Time. Rarely do I choose to command it..." He glanced down to the girl next to him, to Anankerisa. "But for when I do choose to do so... It obeys." Aion held his left hand out and energy formed a sword, the same ornate design as Iris. "I am Aion Leonares, Master of Time, Champion of Venturia, Bearer of the Spirit of Iris. I fight on behalf of all who call this Eternal Galaxy home. And you, Sol Hyperion, Former Guardian of Time, Self-proclaimed god, Bearer of the Vessel of Iris... Your time is up."

    Disbelief flashed to rage on Sol's face as he lunged at Aion, blade at the ready. Before he knew what was happening, he found himself suddenly falling in the skies of Duon. A downed Orcus Class Cruiser rushed by him. Aion came hurtling out of nowhere, slamming Sol into the side of the cruiser. Barely moving in time, Sol evaded Aion's initial attack, watching as Aion's blade cut through the thick armor of the Orcus ship with ease. Using the top of the ship as a platform, Sol was put on the defensive against Aion's savage assault. Right when Sol thought he had good footing against Aion, everything changed again. Now they were in the middle of a battlefield on Alcyon between two charging armies. Aion kept pressing the attack. Sol barely keeping up countering each blow. Suddenly, a blast of dark energy struck Sol, sending him flying back. Achlys ran up alongside Aion, both now charging towards Sol, who was desperately trying to get to his feet. Before the duo could reach him, Sol unleashed a blast of energy from Iris. A wall of ice blocked the attack. A blue-haired Kiara then joined the fray, but the three found themselves on the defensive against Sol's attacks, which were slowly increasing in intensity as he drew upon the power of Iris. But as it seemed Sol had gained the upper hand, he found himself in a dense forest and immediately screamed in pain as a bullet punched through his sword hand. Eleos prepared for another shot, but Sol saw where he was and began charging after him, preparing to unleash another blast of energy despite his injury. His attack was cut short as Aion dropped from the foliage and knocked Sol down with the pommel of his blade. As Sol sprung to his feet, he realized that he was now in a magma cavern of Inopia, facing a charging band of renegades, led by Dalia. He was quickly beset by the mob, fighting through a flurry of axes, swords, and spears. A explosion of energy freed him from his assailants, but in the brief moment of exhaustion Aion struck him down again. As Sol stumbled, he was pulled up by his hair. He was staring face to face with Erebos, he simple grinned sadistically before throwing Sol into one of the pillars of the Fortress of Nox. Getting up from the rubble of a damaged portion of the Hunters' Guild on Duon, he stared for a moment down the barrel of Joe's BEHEMOTH Cannon as it charged. Reacting, he rolled out of the way of the laser blast, only to be punted by Terrisa's mech. Quickly getting up, Sol saw Aion, the Hunters, Navarre, and Ember taking aim with rifles all trained on him. He unleashed another blast of energy in the form of a roar of anger, which shattered the glass of the throne room of the Floating Palace. Avonna stood at the top of the stairs above Sol, unaffected. Next to her was Aion. Behind them was a Iupiter Class Cruiser belonging to the Noble Guardian Order, with guns aimed at Sol. His expression twitched slightly as he wanted to attack Aion, but the aura of Avonna prevented him from doing so. Instead he summoned all of the power of Iris to create an impenetrable shield to protect him from the looming danger of the onslaught of the massive war ship.

    Instead, he felt a sharp pain in his chest as he noticed that he was back in the Manor of Eternity. He looked down to be greeted with the sight of Aion's form of Iris protruding through the place where his heart would be. The blade was removed from him and he slowly turned to face Aion. What he saw horrified him. Holding a bloodied Iris was the last person he was expecting to see. "Lu-Luna?!"
    "Iris is not limitless power. Your 'immortality' was tied to the energy of the blade." Aion stepped forward. "Though it was not my right to decide your fate."
    Sol looked from Aion to Luna in total horror, his eyes slowly starting to cloud over. "Luna... why..."
    Luna merely stood watching Sol as he fell, laying on the sheet of his own blood. A moment of silence reigned before Luna finally dropped to her knees, crying.

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  • Cucoo5
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    Originally posted by Mima View Post
    From what you're saying, wings could be based on morality and personality.

    Xystus could have maybe more bat-like wings.
    Saltatrix's wings could mabe flicker different colors or shapes, considering unstable ground, at least from what you're saying.
    This...
    I like this.

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  • Koishi
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    Originally posted by Cucoo5 View Post
    ...originally I meant hair but...
    ...maybe wings...
    ...maybe meaning behind the wings.

    Avonna's were pure white and butterfly-like in appearance.
    ...Maybe it could be some sort of indication on "purity?"
    Possibly of the soul.
    Avonna might be purely neutral, hence why there's nothing special about her wings.
    Xystus was a true ruler, conqueror. His wings might not appear as butterfly wings and might not be white in color.
    Saltatrix could be the trickster with red wings, and may be butterfly... or not...
    From what you're saying, wings could be based on morality and personality.

    Xystus could have maybe more bat-like wings.
    Saltatrix's wings could mabe flicker different colors or shapes, considering unstable ground, at least from what you're saying.

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  • Cucoo5
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    ...originally I meant hair but...
    ...maybe wings...
    ...maybe meaning behind the wings.

    Avonna's were pure white and butterfly-like in appearance.
    ...Maybe it could be some sort of indication on "purity?"
    Possibly of the soul.
    Avonna might be purely neutral, hence why there's nothing special about her wings.
    Xystus was a true ruler, conqueror. His wings might not appear as butterfly wings and might not be white in color.
    Saltatrix could be the trickster with red wings, and may be butterfly... or not...

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  • S121
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    @Cucoo

    Heh, that would be interesting.

    Anyways, do you mean the color of her wings? Red, but not red... Maroon or magenta?

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  • Cucoo5
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    If we assume that the characters had roles during Echoes of time, yes they would have met.

    And I think I mean hue or something. It's like I want red but not red...


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  • S121
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    @Cucoo

    I wonder if the characters would have met Anankerisa before Phoenix, as well as Anankerisa's reaction to seeing them again. For some reason, I imagine it to be somewhat humorous.

    Avonna's in cryo, huh? I hate to say it, but it must be said... she is a.. butterflycicle.

    I'm so sorry. XD

    Also, "shade of red"? What do you mean by that?
    Last edited by S121; 11-19-2014, 03:04 AM.

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  • Cucoo5
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    Who survived?
    Eeeerrrr
    Well...

    Aion
    Ignis
    Zoe (maybe her other three sisters...)
    Descendant of Navarre, Chase
    Descendant of Eleos, Parker
    (Ignis was not sent alone out of the Galaxy)

    Possibly Avonna in cryostasis

    Anankerisa
    Venturia
    Morpheus

    That's about all I think...

    And Saltatrix...
    ...why do I want to say some shade of red. Not traditional red... Eh...


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  • S121
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    @Cucoo

    Ahh, I see.

    Who did survive?

    Anyways, what other traits do you imagine Saltatrix to have?

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  • Cucoo5
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    Eternal Galaxy Project

    I was thinking the same...
    It could work to contrast them.

    And for your second question...
    Uhm i think you mean something else

    Pre Phoenix Incident (Void)
    Caeles

    Post PI (Void)
    Arcains
    Prometheos
    Caeles

    Post PI (Arcain Revolt)
    Arcains
    Vatians
    Irians
    Papillians
    Humans
    Caeles

    ***
    What I think you actually want to know is Post-Inevitable Conclusion, my temporary name of the decay of the galaxy after Echoes of Time.

    In which case the answer is... None.

    Here's why I'm saying this...

    Note the fact Prometheos is not listed post PI (AR)
    Even though Aion, Aetheron, and Erebos exist.
    I only listed Races of great population.

    After the Inevitable Conclusion, a few individuals may still exist but ultimately the races are "gone."


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  • S121
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    @Cucoo

    Hmm...

    Well, she also strikes me as being a little bit of a troublemaker. Nothing serious, but maybe a more mischievous type.

    What are your thoughts?

    Also, just a question I just thought up of. Are the Papillians still alive, or did they die too? What native species survived the Phoenix Incident and are in the third EG?

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  • Cucoo5
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    Perhaps

    Maybe Saltatrix is a contrast to Avonna. If I went with this... I don't know how to contrast them aside from Saltatrix being more energetic and active than Avonna.


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  • S121
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    @Cucoo

    Well I would imagine that the black hair and height would be hereditary. The other traits may or may not be from either parent. Maybe the mother was pale?

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