[OOC Board] - All the World's a Game - Season II

@zEKAI

Yes I do have that Zero. The Zero as he was in the X series.

@Neo

Ok then, even though I could've easily done Neo Arcadina's Zero but decided not to. One Zero is awesome but to is too badass for this RP.

@Zekai

A bit of constructive criticism on your app before I go to bed.

First of, please remove the links. I don't want to have to read trough his whole profile every time I'm looking for his weaknesses or personality. A link to the profile may at times be okay for example if the profile is organized and have it's own section for for example personality. This one doesn't have this. As a general rule, if you have too look for the information(yes this means that you can keep the link in the biography), then the app begin to loose it's value because you could have just used google as easily. That's the main problem at the moment.

Secondly, explain a little bit more about how your character work. You mention a virus core, but what is a virus core, how do he get them. It's the same for the avatar, is it a big monster that comes into the battlefield and begins fighting in his place, is it a support element, does it fight side by side with the character? This also applies a little to the stats. Are they good, are they bad, what is normal hp, is 12000 hp normal hp? Things like that. I see that you did this a little bit in the earlier section of the app which is great.

Thirdly, this is just a reminder so that you know. Remember that this is not the original game. Things (may) need to get adjusted to the RP. Cucoo have had a fair bit of this. A attack that works just fine in the game may be overpowered or underpowered here.

Well, that's it. Remember that this is constructive feedback to improve your app.

@Zekai

If I recall both of those Zero's are the same. It's just the one from the Zero series (Neo Arcadia) is Zero's mind, and essence put into a fake copy body that was made by Dr. Weil when he took Zero's original body to put Omega's mind and consciousness into.

So that might have been weird. Besides I kind of am already planning on having Zero get f*cked up big time in my arc, thus needing to get a new body (his Zero series body in fact.)

@ Zekai and Neo

...inb4 the fact I'm intending on using multiple instances of the same character.

Robin (M) and Robin (F)

@ Katrix And Zekai

aye....going from turn-based to real time...

Fire Emblem: Galeforce is OP for turn based cause it grants you another move...
...in real time...
....I'm still trying to figure it out tbh...

@Katrix

1: Not removing the links, you can basically say that he's weak against magic attacks and he's a bit of a delinquent.
2: What's a Virus? If you can answer that then think of it as he's extracting the core of it.
3: How does he get them? Um... Avatar Awakening like I said in app.
4: He only uses Skeith when facing giant enemies so it will rarely appear.
5: I made has stats at his basic max without improvements so yeah they're good, with improvements will take his HP to 9999 so 12000 HP is impossible.
6: If change needs to be done then a PM can be sent to me about what change needs to happen in the IC before hand.

@Neo

So it's a good thing I didn't go with Zero then.

@Cucoo

.hack isn't a turn base game so I don't have to worry about that.

...make it so someone that hasn't even heard of the game can understand it.

You'll need to copy and paste the important information.

I looked at the site now and I can't see anything on weaknesses.... I just see a wall of text that does not tell me WEAKNESSES ARE HERE
I don't see POWERS HERE

I just see something I would have to sift through in order to understand anything.

@Zekai and anyone else
It's a good thing that I'm not assessing these things... And it's a good thing that I've held back in saying something because... God damn it, Zekai!

@ TR
technically speaking everyone of AtWaG are obligated to review apps

11. In order for an Application to be accepted, the community shall peer review them. Once at least 3 different opinions (Meaning the applicant cannot give an opinion on their own apps) for that application have been made, and those three opinions give the "OK," Then the App will be accepted. If the opinions do not give the go ahead, then changes must be made to the application.

@Zekai

Too vague.



1. Put that in your app.

2. Knowing how a virus works does not give an idea on how his ability works. Does he make the characters sick, then extracts the virus from them? Does he get himself sick and draw poeer from it? Does he summone a large virus, then takes power from it. We have no idea how anything works in his game, so you need to explain.

3. Same as #2. Explain Avatar Awakening. Don't assume we already know the process.

4. Explain what Skeith is. Is it god-tier? Is it weak? Don't assume we already know this.

5. Translate his stats into actual info we can use. 12,000, or whatever number does not give us much info. Can he tank a planet-busting weapon, or can he be felled by a single slap?