Trinity Soul University REVAMPED: A Casual Magic RP [OOC]

[WriggleRid3r]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

I'll get to it right nao.

[jessespy]

Name: lufia lauuse

Race: human

Age: 19

Bio: a shy male but has great ideal's he gained his powers when he was 16 which is the year that his brother died
he is aware of others aura's but can't use magic just yet
lufia had a brother that was killed when his village found out about his powers because they feared magic because of the war
his brother's aura was a crimson red
he fears the use of magic after his brother killed himself with his dark magic
his village attacked him and his brother when they found out there powers but the brother use his magic to defend him self and let lufia get away but died from overuse

Gender: male

What type of magic. fire magic but fears to use it and can sense magic arua's

Luggage: a icy blue suitcase with red stripes for where the locks are

Appearance:a young but serious looking person with purple hair a blue and black tank top on as well



Why did you come to the University?: lufia had a brother that was killed when his village found out about his powers, his brother's
aura was a crimson red and lufia's mother decided that because the town they lived in feared magic (from the war the fear originates) and because lufia's sense made the town aware of there powers that she should send him to TSU to keep him safe from the town

Personality: shy, optimistic

Other: has the capability to learn Fire Magic

Suggestions: (This is for any suggestions about the RP, like if you have any suggestions for me to add or fix.)

[Kristia]

with you magic sense, I can imagine something like Lucario´s aura sense, , Lufia could see the magic emanating from the other people´s souls and they would be of different colours depending on what they do. Example: Ice would be light blue, electricity would be yellow and so on with each one.

About learning would be a slow growing progress, you can´t learn magic in a single day, but it would be fun to see how it grows through time.

The backstory is ok as a base to actually write the bigger one, try making a little biography about him growing up and sensing other people´s magic but couldn´t use magic by himself and so on with the reason for being kicked out and sent to the school

[jessespy]

thanks kristia

[Kristia]

no problem, anything else you need?

[jessespy]

iv done the backstory

ust updated it

[WriggleRid3r]

I hardly think that's enough to even be called a bio. I would appreciate it if there were at least 2 paragraphs of information.

[Zekai]

I agree with Wriggle. Take a look at other apps to get a sense of what he means.

[jessespy]

im still working on it just did another update

edit: updated again plezz give me any idea's about him it will help thanks

[Katrix]

For gods sake see this thing --> . , use it. If you can't properly punctuate your sentences then there is little chance that you will be taken seriously.

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[Lunasa Prismriver]

I have to agree with Katrix here. I won't be a grammar nazi and point out every single mistake, but please use proper grammar. If you don't understand all the rules of the English language, that's fine, I'm no English major either.

The only reason I'm saying this is that you can't exactly get away with terrible grammar here, on an RP thread, which is heavily based on writing.

[Tewi_Inaba]

As someone who has trouble reading and writing herself i recommend using microsoft word or some other third party document program with a spell checker. More often than not they'll show you any grammar mistakes you make like leaving out punctuation or misspelling a word. You can also paste posts made by other people into the program to make the text larger and easier to read. That will only take you so far though. You need some level of skill in literacy if you wish to role play.

For example i don't think any program thus far is advanced enough to add quotation marks or commas for you. And while it isn't necessarily a game breaker depending on the context, It's ill-fitted to give a three sentence response to a post that took up multiple paragraphs. Granted some times it's unavoidable but my point is you need to try to put in the same amount of effort as the person on people you're role playing with.

[DeadMasterChan]

Here's Cecilia's design, finally~! Took a long while to figure out a good basic look but I've finally done it.

Spoiler:

[Tewi_Inaba]

gah it's so adorable!!

[WriggleRid3r]

Focking cute

*deis*