We've used visions to sort of introduced characters.
I used quotes from the Halo franchise and made a sort of dream sequence where everything was black and the quotes echoed through John's head.
In the end, you are the master of your fate, not us. (Oh my, how overly dramatic of me.:p)
[OOC Board] - All the World's a Game
08/27/2013, 01:18 PM #11905
Even though this is from Endgame, not really spoilerish.
Note: If you read through the script, there's parts that change if Robin is Male or Female.
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'You still DARE resist ME?!' script
Grima
You still DARE resist ME?! Then perhaps I should end you first!
>Grima attacks Robin
Robin
So dark... A sea of black... I have...no final strategy... No cards left to play... He/She has...won... Ah... I c-can't see... I can't hear... I feel...nothing... ...... ...Nothing... ......
???
ve to ack!
Robin
...... ...Huh?
???
Yo ha fi back! ghting!
Robin
I...hear something... A voice...
???
Fight ba! ave to keep ing! Fight back, Robin! You swore to do so, remember? Now keep your damn word!
Robin
C-Chrom? Chrom! Chrom, I can hear you!
Grima
What?! No! You are mine now! The dragon's grip cannot be broken!
(Bunch of characters motivational quotes here)
Lissa
Come back to us, Robin!
Frederick
I know it would take more than this to stop you, sir/milady!
Sully
You gonna let that ugly snake get the last hiss? Come on!
Virion
History is watching, Robin! The bards would sing of your triumph!
Vaike
On your feet, soldier! Don't make ol' Teach give ya a lecture!
Stahl
Wake up, Robin! Only I get to oversleep!
Miriel
Arise from your hypnopompic state! You are sorely needed here!
Kellam
Hello? Can you hear me? ...Perhaps if I shout? AAAAAAH!
Sumia
Robin, remember all the days we spent together!
Lon'qu
[If Male] Answer us, Robin!
[If Female] ...A-answer us, Robin!
Ricken
Please, Robin! You're too important to me!
Maribelle
Get up right this instant, or suffer a swift smack of my parasol!
Panne
Do not rob the taguel of one of our last true champions!
Gaius
Up and at 'em, Robin! One dragon oughta be a piece of cake!
Cordelia
We're all right here by your side!
Gregor
Gregor will snap you out of it! Gregor does with the YELLING!
Nowi
I thought I was your favorite dragon! Forget about Grima!
Libra
The gods gave you to us. I do not believe they wish you taken away!
Tharja
Get up, Robin! No one goes down without my say so...
Olivia
Please, Robin! I still haven't shown you my new dance!
Cherche
Minerva wants you back, and so do I!
Henry
I know the darkness is warm and delicious... But too much of a good thing is just bad!
Lucina
You have earned my trust and my love, sir/milady. Now return to us!
Say'ri
Aye, awaken! You cannot leave now, with my debt to you unpaid!
Basilio
Pull it together, lad/lass! Death is overrated, believe me!
Flavia
You don't bow to dragons. You break 'em!
Donnel
I need ya to come on back, y'hear?!
Anna
Robin, you can't close up shop on us now! We still need you!
Owain
Heed not the dark's eerie call, friend! Summon forth the strength inside you!
Inigo
I can think of nothing worse than dying alone. ...No, seriously. I can't.
Brady
Come on, bud! No givin' up now!
Kjelle
This is a test, and by the gods, you're gonna pass it!
Cynthia
Come on! You can do this! You need to fight with us!
Severa
If you don't come back, I'm never going to forgive you!
Gerome
We lost to the fell dragon once. Do not grant fate a second victory!
Morgan (F)
Father! You mean everything to me! I can't lose you again!
Robin
I can hear them... I hear my friends!
Grima
Stop this at once! SILENCE those wretched voices! You are all powerless! Frail! Insignificant! You are NOOOTHING!
Chrom
Return to us, Robin! Your bond with us is stronger than even the fell dragon's might!
Robin
Chrom!
I'm coming, Chrom! Hold on!
>Robin breaks free and returns
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Use this instead of the standard opening of FE:A? Maybe?
Note: If you read through the script, there's parts that change if Robin is Male or Female.
-------------
'You still DARE resist ME?!' script
Grima
You still DARE resist ME?! Then perhaps I should end you first!
>Grima attacks Robin
Robin
So dark... A sea of black... I have...no final strategy... No cards left to play... He/She has...won... Ah... I c-can't see... I can't hear... I feel...nothing... ...... ...Nothing... ......
???
ve to ack!
Robin
...... ...Huh?
???
Yo ha fi back! ghting!
Robin
I...hear something... A voice...
???
Fight ba! ave to keep ing! Fight back, Robin! You swore to do so, remember? Now keep your damn word!
Robin
C-Chrom? Chrom! Chrom, I can hear you!
Grima
What?! No! You are mine now! The dragon's grip cannot be broken!
(Bunch of characters motivational quotes here)
Spoiler
Lissa
Come back to us, Robin!
Frederick
I know it would take more than this to stop you, sir/milady!
Sully
You gonna let that ugly snake get the last hiss? Come on!
Virion
History is watching, Robin! The bards would sing of your triumph!
Vaike
On your feet, soldier! Don't make ol' Teach give ya a lecture!
Stahl
Wake up, Robin! Only I get to oversleep!
Miriel
Arise from your hypnopompic state! You are sorely needed here!
Kellam
Hello? Can you hear me? ...Perhaps if I shout? AAAAAAH!
Sumia
Robin, remember all the days we spent together!
Lon'qu
[If Male] Answer us, Robin!
[If Female] ...A-answer us, Robin!
Ricken
Please, Robin! You're too important to me!
Maribelle
Get up right this instant, or suffer a swift smack of my parasol!
Panne
Do not rob the taguel of one of our last true champions!
Gaius
Up and at 'em, Robin! One dragon oughta be a piece of cake!
Cordelia
We're all right here by your side!
Gregor
Gregor will snap you out of it! Gregor does with the YELLING!
Nowi
I thought I was your favorite dragon! Forget about Grima!
Libra
The gods gave you to us. I do not believe they wish you taken away!
Tharja
Get up, Robin! No one goes down without my say so...
Olivia
Please, Robin! I still haven't shown you my new dance!
Cherche
Minerva wants you back, and so do I!
Henry
I know the darkness is warm and delicious... But too much of a good thing is just bad!
Lucina
You have earned my trust and my love, sir/milady. Now return to us!
Say'ri
Aye, awaken! You cannot leave now, with my debt to you unpaid!
Basilio
Pull it together, lad/lass! Death is overrated, believe me!
Flavia
You don't bow to dragons. You break 'em!
Donnel
I need ya to come on back, y'hear?!
Anna
Robin, you can't close up shop on us now! We still need you!
Owain
Heed not the dark's eerie call, friend! Summon forth the strength inside you!
Inigo
I can think of nothing worse than dying alone. ...No, seriously. I can't.
Brady
Come on, bud! No givin' up now!
Kjelle
This is a test, and by the gods, you're gonna pass it!
Cynthia
Come on! You can do this! You need to fight with us!
Severa
If you don't come back, I'm never going to forgive you!
Gerome
We lost to the fell dragon once. Do not grant fate a second victory!
Morgan (F)
Father! You mean everything to me! I can't lose you again!
Robin
I can hear them... I hear my friends!
Grima
Stop this at once! SILENCE those wretched voices! You are all powerless! Frail! Insignificant! You are NOOOTHING!
Chrom
Return to us, Robin! Your bond with us is stronger than even the fell dragon's might!
Robin
Chrom!
I'm coming, Chrom! Hold on!
>Robin breaks free and returns
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Use this instead of the standard opening of FE:A? Maybe?
08/27/2013, 01:29 PM #11907
@Cucoo
It could work.
The only time I would recommend using videos would be if it was a flashback, or memory.
Text sequences are much more flexible and can be altered to fit your needs.
@Kristia
Later.
It could work.
The only time I would recommend using videos would be if it was a flashback, or memory.
Text sequences are much more flexible and can be altered to fit your needs.
@Kristia
Later.
Originally posted by S121
Every time I see a new post on the Forum, I feel like a little kid during Christmas, all giddy.
sigpic
08/27/2013, 01:55 PM #11908
I could use either, such as converting the video to text.
I just need to know if I did the video's scenario who or what to use in place of Validar and Chrom.
For the other I'd use it as is and make it go like so at the end:
Robin: Ugh
- opens eyes
Robin: ...! Wait, no!
- gets up and looks around.
Robin: Chrom? CHROM!!
- panic starts to set in
Robin: Chrom! Lissa! NOOO!
- falls to his knees, and looks to his hands
Robin: I...what happened??? Did I...? No...it has to be a trick! The others need me! I... have to...
- goes limp and stares off into the distance.
Robin: This...can't...
- looks at his surroundings slowly, his eyes still wide. As he takes in his new environment, realization slowly seeps in.
Robin: Everyone...forgive me...
- closes eyes and feels the breeze rustle his cloak gently. His mind slowly worked on his current situation...
...Would this do or do I need to write it in traditional prose instead of script?
Last edited by Cucoo5; 08/27/2013, 02:02 PM. I just need to know if I did the video's scenario who or what to use in place of Validar and Chrom.
For the other I'd use it as is and make it go like so at the end:
Robin: Ugh
- opens eyes
Robin: ...! Wait, no!
- gets up and looks around.
Robin: Chrom? CHROM!!
- panic starts to set in
Robin: Chrom! Lissa! NOOO!
- falls to his knees, and looks to his hands
Robin: I...what happened??? Did I...? No...it has to be a trick! The others need me! I... have to...
- goes limp and stares off into the distance.
Robin: This...can't...
- looks at his surroundings slowly, his eyes still wide. As he takes in his new environment, realization slowly seeps in.
Robin: Everyone...forgive me...
- closes eyes and feels the breeze rustle his cloak gently. His mind slowly worked on his current situation...
...Would this do or do I need to write it in traditional prose instead of script?
08/27/2013, 02:04 PM #11909
I would say traditional prose.
That's the normal format here.
It tends to flow more easily and prevents the story from taking sudden changes in structure.
What are you trying to do with Validar and Chrom?
That's the normal format here.
It tends to flow more easily and prevents the story from taking sudden changes in structure.
What are you trying to do with Validar and Chrom?
Originally posted by S121
Every time I see a new post on the Forum, I feel like a little kid during Christmas, all giddy.
sigpic
08/27/2013, 02:14 PM #11910
Alright, lunch time. I got some time.
08/27/2013, 02:16 PM #11911
If I did do the video opening's "structure" (battle with bad guy, ally gets pushed from danger, Robin sacrifices himself in a sense etc.) I would replace Validar and Chrom with a respective character we have or planning on having for the two roles.
...and traditional prose, oh dear this will take a bit of time then.
...and traditional prose, oh dear this will take a bit of time then.