Remi's not posting. He doesn't want to. I'm gonna be honest, and I want you guys to know that what I'm about to say is in no way an attempt to be an asshole.
You guys really need to work on your writing.
1. You don't need all this... colored and emboldened crap. It encourages people to read only that and nothing more. That ruins it. 2. You guys write WAY TOO MANY DEUS EX MACHINAS. They are not fun. They are boring, and stupid, and take away any sense of drama or urgency. 3. A lesson for you guys to take away from this: When you RP, don't make it out to be this stupid "Oh, it's an RP, not a book. You shouldn't be collaborating with the other writers to keep it spontaneous." Working with other writers is the key to having a good piece of fiction. And it should really have an end. It shouldn't just go on and on like ATWAG is. 4. Read books and take some writing classes. They will help you immensely.
Seriously. End it.
Sorry to say, but Aeterna is done. I just can't maintain my interest.
Sometimes I feel like the only normal person here "My Threshing has been Extra Princely Fresh"
You need to practice. And take the things I said into account. They are excellent ways to improve your writing. Remi's pretty much not posting because of the posting that was going on here :/ They're part of the reasons we both bailed out of ATWAG
Sometimes I feel like the only normal person here "My Threshing has been Extra Princely Fresh"
That's sad. Maybe we just aren't good at RPing :p To be honest I really liked this RP. More That ATWAG in fact. Really sad that you're closing it. When I think back I do see a few places where I could have done something different.