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Tewi_Inaba

Tewi_Inaba

Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 2026

08/10/2013, 10:54 PM #1171
should i post Seki's story now or wait for Kristia?

S121

S121

Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 12685

08/10/2013, 10:59 PM #1172
I think Kristia is here.

It should be fine.



EDIT:

Yea, Kristia is here.

Originally posted by S121
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Kilelicus

Kilelicus

Join Date: Dec 2012
Posts: 481

08/10/2013, 11:08 PM #1173
Remi's not posting. He doesn't want to.
I'm gonna be honest, and I want you guys to know that what I'm about to say is in no way an attempt to be an asshole.

You guys really need to work on your writing.

1. You don't need all this... colored and emboldened crap. It encourages people to read only that and nothing more. That ruins it.
2. You guys write WAY TOO MANY DEUS EX MACHINAS. They are not fun. They are boring, and stupid, and take away any sense of drama or urgency.
3. A lesson for you guys to take away from this: When you RP, don't make it out to be this stupid "Oh, it's an RP, not a book. You shouldn't be collaborating with the other writers to keep it spontaneous." Working with other writers is the key to having a good piece of fiction. And it should really have an end. It shouldn't just go on and on like ATWAG is.
4. Read books and take some writing classes. They will help you immensely.

Seriously. End it.

Sorry to say, but Aeterna is done. I just can't maintain my interest.

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Kristia

Kristia

Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 6006

08/10/2013, 11:17 PM #1174
fine, be it like that, Im out of here

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wonderweiss

Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 6777

08/10/2013, 11:21 PM #1175
Done? In what sense?
Kilelicus

Kilelicus

Join Date: Dec 2012
Posts: 481

08/10/2013, 11:32 PM #1176
In the sense that I'm having remi close these threads and/or delete them.

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Hazmer Baybee

wonderweiss

Join Date: Mar 2013
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08/10/2013, 11:33 PM #1177
Alright. Sorry we couldn't live up to your expectations.
Kilelicus

Kilelicus

Join Date: Dec 2012
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08/10/2013, 11:42 PM #1178
You need to practice.
And take the things I said into account. They are excellent ways to improve your writing.
Remi's pretty much not posting because of the posting that was going on here :/
They're part of the reasons we both bailed out of ATWAG

Sometimes I feel like the only normal person here
"My Threshing has been Extra Princely Fresh"

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Katrix

Katrix

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Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 3493

08/11/2013, 12:18 AM #1179
That's sad. Maybe we just aren't good at RPing :p
To be honest I really liked this RP. More That ATWAG in fact. Really sad that you're closing it.
When I think back I do see a few places where I could have done something different.
Last edited by Katrix; 08/11/2013, 12:28 AM.
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Tewi_Inaba

Tewi_Inaba

Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 2026

08/11/2013, 12:31 AM #1180
this was actually only my 2end time role-playing so i don't care that much. I won't be doing this again.