To be honest i dont think it would get wriggles approval either. Despite that, you say you wont work on it for my approval, yet you deleted it without knowing if wriggle would approve or not. That tells me that either A: my words mean something to you, or B: youre that thin skinned. This is all part of character creation: criticism good and bad help you become a better writer.
Sometimes I feel like the only normal person here "My Threshing has been Extra Princely Fresh"
-Kilelicus has been added to Zekai's Ignore List (about 15 minutes ago) Zekai won't be seeing Kilelicus's post-
"No matter how strong or what power the enemy has, I will fight and protect my friends, even if it cost me my life to protect them. I will fight until I die to ensure their future."
- Your character application must be realistic. I don't care if your character had the craziest of incidents, if your character has a physical trait that makes him stand out WAY too much, it is going to be denied. Trust me, this is good for your for this reason. - This is the only RP that does not have magic or futuristic technology. Your character is under CONSTANT THREAT OF BEING KILLED. I repeat, your character CAN and WILL be killed if your character does something he/she does something that a normal survivor of war wouldn't do. Don't whine at me if it happens. I'm warning you now.
There was time before the final that was to be used for quick review. While others took the time to scan through the notes, I used the time to bring down the hammer.
So Wriggle says we're all presuming that at the start, everyone is starting out with the basic provisions unless you state they have less or whatever..
Sometimes I feel like the only normal person here "My Threshing has been Extra Princely Fresh"
I pm chatted with Wriggle awhile back and got aprroval, all he said was to repost it and make the changes. Spoiler Name: Zero
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Appearance: - Height: 5'8" - Weight: 190 - Body measurements: Average Teen Male Built - Hair style/color: Black, messy (bedhead like) hair - Eye color: Crimson Red - Black unzipped hoodie, dark grey t-shirt, black pants, black with white stripes shoes, black fingerless gloves. Slight burn scars on the right side of his face.
Personality: Rough attitude. (Rude to others when talking and things like that)
Skills: Some basic cooking. High and Quick Reflexes. Weapon alterating.
Biography: Grew up as an only child. His mom taught karate and his dad owned a gun range so he was taught CQC defense and how to shoot guns. Has a simple and basic life growing up. Went to school with his childhood friend who was also his next door neighbor. Life was going great for him until the artillery shelling started, during the shelling, he lost both his parents and his friend and was left with nothing. When he found out that he lost the people that ws close to him, he fell into dispair and closed his heart to others. So now he tries to avoid others to prevent them from getting close.
Traumas and Addiction: Always has something in his mouth when doing something, normally it's things like toothpicks to pocky, sometimes a bullet when working on weapons.
Notes: Starts with one .9mm pistol with a full clip and one full extra magazine with a bag of jerky and a 20 oz water bottle Will be trying to make these later on, 2 altered tonfas, has blades attached to the long part, carrys on the back of his waist, 2 .9mm pistols with knifes attached to make some form of gunblades, which he carrys on his thighs, A half sword on his back covered by his hoodie. Doesn't always carry all of this on him when he's out. Has a broken flip phone that's stuck on a picture of him and his friend in it. My schedule is always free, unless i hang out with friends for a day then can't post that day.
"No matter how strong or what power the enemy has, I will fight and protect my friends, even if it cost me my life to protect them. I will fight until I die to ensure their future."