Trinity Soul University REVAMPED: A Casual Magic RP [OOC]

Originally posted by Zekai
"But you would think maybe a display of magic would've happened when we got here don't you think?" She asks.

you could always do the fireworks XD

Well Sus, I can tell you this, you need to get inspired or even make a filler post to keep moving

Even more since you are the main Role Player in this story, you know what may happen if you keep staying like that.

@Book

Sadly I am not going to go overboard with the Welcome Wagon in this Revamp like I did with the original. I have a idea for what will be done (a more tame welcoming party.) So... yeah...

Sorry to those who wanted a big welcome from the staff of the University in the IC XP


@Kristia

You have a WONDERFUL point. One problem with myself when I try that...

I have been getting too distracted lately. When I CAN think of a post I end up getting distracted by something else for crying out loud!

I have a serious problem... I need help... *begins crying in corner*

Im just warning you, if you want to keep this thing alive and not be a second disaster, you need to do something to focus while also encouraging others to keep the flame on it.

If not, it will just dwindle and be forgotten like many other stories that had great potential but died too soon

how can i make it longer katrix?

May I make a suggestion? How about a longer Bio? I know I don't have the right to say that cause I make shorten Bios myself at times. What I suggest is saying how she lived before her parents died and how they died. Look at other Bios to get what I mean on how to make longer Bios.

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Trinity Soul University REVAMPED: A Casual Magic RP [OOC]

@Jessespy
Add more details
Elaborate on points, especially the bio. Right now she sounds like just some generic character, the kind you see to make a crowded room look crowded and nothing more. Flesh her out, give more depth to her. You have a start but as it is, it's really shallow. You're trying to help everyone else understand your character with the app. Explain her. Explain through details. And then explain the details.

For instance, go in depth about the necklace and her parents' death. Make it a story. And tell it to us.
Also answer the questions: why is she wandering? What is this EX power? Why does it "exist?"


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Okay a post is made! I'll really try and be more active, but if I am not posting at all when I need to then please someone inform me that I need to post or else I'll forget to.

Look who I found.

@Lunasa

Lol yeah, the image I used for the NPC Gant was an anime styled drawing of that guy in fact. S1 showed me at one point in the past, and I just had to make an NPC out of the picture I used (because he just looks badass.)