[OOC Board] Eternal Galaxy: Phoenix

[S121]

@Wriggle

Looks good to me.

[Kilelicus]

HELLO HELLO, I AM HERE. This project intrigued me, so I thought I'd toss my hat into the ring

(So some of you who participated in Aeterna may remember this name, however this is more or less the original version of this character. All things labelled as <CLASSIFIED> are merely to add mystery to him, as Phenom was originally created as an enigmatic character. If you'd really rather spoil the mystery, go ahead and open the spoiler, but I'd personally prefer you not. <<DATA EXPUNGED>> is only labelled so because its hard to explain in less than a sentence.)

Name: Phenom Ortus

Gender: Male

Age: 25 (+90,000)

Appearance:
Reference 1 (As drawn by Aki Yoku (Ignore Citatus in the Foreground)):

Spoiler:

Reference 2 (Clothes (hood down and keyblades not included)):

Spoiler:

Reference 3 (Head minus his keffiyeh scarf):

Spoiler:

Race: Human/Living Miracle

Profession:

Spoiler: <<CLASSIFIED CLEARANCE LEVEL 5>>

GaHDD Member // Rank: Guardian Angel (IX)

Talents: <<DATA EXPUNGED>>

Inventory:
2x - Matte Black Desert Eagles
1x - Combat Knife
1x - Personal Collapsible Terminal
1x - Multiwave Personal Headset

Personality: Phenom's personality can be summarized in one word: Serious. He doesn't take kindly to jokes, though most of the time he ignores them outright. He does not make idle threats, and he does not say anything without meaning what he is saying. His body language and expression are almost always that of a stoic with too much to do in too little time.

Bio:

Spoiler: <<CLASSIFIED CLEARANCE LEVEL 9>>

Somewhere in the depths of space lies a secret society of powerful humans that once watched over the well-being of Earth, known as GaHDD (Global-and-Human-Defence and Development, pronounced "God"). When the Earth was destroyed, most of the Organization lost most of its members in the wake of the destruction, leaving a mere 1000 members (Known as Angels), most of which are support staff and maintenance crews. With no place to call home, the leaders of the organization decreed a random course be set, and the crew placed into stasis until a habitable planet was within a year of travel. Their space-faring headquarters, colloquially known within the organization as Heaven, eventually found its way to the galaxy of Venturia 90,000 years later.

Upon their arrival, the organization quickly turned their eyes outward, only to realize that the stars have been disappearing one by one. Multiwave pulses have revealed that whatever is happening, it's occurring in a perfect circle around Venturia, and that circle is closing in with each passing day. They have altered their mission from maintaining the welfare of the late planet Earth, to discovering what is causing the stars to vanish, and hopefully putting an end to it.

Phenom is a very elite member of this organization. Though he was raised as a warrior from a child, he is a soft-spoken soul with a pained past. Years ago, while GaHDD was still large enough to field a private army, and Phenom was still learning how to wage war, he and a team he led encountered an ambush. Their transport was shot down, and his team was wiped out. The trauma, the stress of the situation, and the self-preservation instincts that were triggered as a result of numerous gunshot wounds he sustained, all caused his body to snap in a monstrous way.

His adrenal glands began to overflow, and the resulting adrenaline explosion shattered any limits of strength and speed his body had at the time, to the point where he could move faster than the eye could see and crush a pelvis with no effort. He completed his mission and was safely extracted, but the ungodly amount of adrenaline his body was producing threatened to cause his heart to burst.

GaHDD surgically equipped Phenom with a special pacemaker that kept his heartrate in check, but also inhibited the amount of adrenaline flowing through his veins. Phenom is able to consciously disable this inhibition for a short period of time, allowing himself to execute the superhuman feats he displayed on that fateful day. He is not able to do this for long, however, as the pacemaker will reactivate its inhibition if too much adrenaline flows for too long.

Now, Phenom and his operator and best friend, Lachesis, work to uncover the cause of the vanishing stars

Notes:
Phenom is very much intended to be an imposing character.
Phenom is a fight ender, not a fight starter. Unless of course you're keeping him from completing his mission.
Phenom will stop at nothing to complete his mission, and he is brutal, even having gone so far as to partially cripple someone he was suppose to protect in order to save not only their life, but the rest of the Earth as well. (In his original story)
Speaking poorly of Phenom's father, Søren, is a good way to convince Phenom you would be better off with a broken arm. Or two. Whether you knew him or not.
Phenom has a soundtrack!

Spoiler: Standard BG

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UtxNw8Rs8Ds

Spoiler: Sudden Appearance/Intervention

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3ogZjHUyVeE

Spoiler: Basic Combat

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HIoq4gBNApU

Spoiler: Desperate Situation

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z3uPzA2e7n8

Spoiler: Gained The Upper Hand

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FC757TSFrZA

Spoiler: Overwhelming Power

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bivdxuY2dAQ

[Kristia]

first thing that came to my mind was of Mara or Bryn trying to make Phenom show emotions (possibly irritation or anger) since they love challenges

I like the app indeed, letŽs see how our main guy Cucoo judges it

[Cucoo5]

[OOC Board] Eternal Galaxy: Phoenix

@kilel
Ish good to go
Though I forgot to mention...
In the timeline earth was destroyed about 90 thousand years ago.
A minor detail you could add is that he had been in a sort of Stasis for the trek to Venturia.


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[Kilelicus]

Das fix tapatapatap

Also made an addition to his soundtrack

[Cucoo5]

aye

also where would you want to start?

There's currently activity in the Celestora system on Alcyon and soon to be activity on Duon of Helios system.

[Kilelicus]

I've just posted my introduction post I suppose it kind of defeated the purpose of hiding a bunch of stuff about Phenom, but whatever.

[Kristia]

but that is we know as users, our characters on the other hand..

[Kilelicus]

but that is we know as users, our characters on the other hand..

Yeaaaaah, but even in his original story, which was less of an RP and more of a collaborative effort to write a story to the end, I kept secrets from the other users about Phenom, his allegiances, his motives, his past.

[Kristia]

well then, it will be an adventure to know about him

[Kilelicus]

I hope to make it so. At least for the other characters. I just hope you guys don't think he's too powerful. He was originally meant to be more of a watcher. He would often appear in the lair of his antagonist in his original story just to irritate him. He's really supposed to be one of those characters that's potentially OP, but played in such a way that he is not OP.

[Kristia]

We shall see, but there must be limitations too

[Kilelicus]

Oh of course. I'm going to be doing my best to make sure he's not broke as all hell. Besides, although I havent really read many of the other bios, I'm sure there are people more broken than Phenom lol

[S121]

@Kilelicus

YES. YES THERE ARE. XD

Welcome back to the community, and the app looks good to me as well.

[Kilelicus]

Im not really back in the community. I just like to check in every now and then, see whats up. I hang out with other folks nowadays. I just happened to have my eye caught by the name of this RP and thought HMMMMM THIS MIGHT BE A GOOD OPPURTUNITY TO GET BACK INTO WRITING THE ORIGINAL PHENOM SINCE ITS BEEN 4 OR 5 YEARS