[OOC]Shi no Zencho ~ Bad Omen!

[Zekai]

Are you sure? Cause I did think of a change if needed. I'm fine if you want change, I won't argue on your final choice.

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[WriggleRid3r]

Well, let's hear it at least. If you want, you can pm it.

[Zekai]

Alright, give me a few minutes.

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[Kristia]

About the evil Omens, the ones who don´t have a "normal", they would look like Bleach´s Hollows (black and sleek beings with masks on their faces) or monsters like chimeras?

[WriggleRid3r]

Funnily enough, Omen are heavily inspired off of Hollows; lesser ones are monstrous in appearance, while stronger ones appear more human. Think of them as different kinds of Hollows without masks or holes.

[Kristia]

Ok, now I can have the general idea of them

[Tewi_Inaba]

Is that my que to watch the first season of bleach?

[Zekai]

More than the fist episode. There's 366 episodes of it and I forget when the Arrancars show up.

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[Kilelicus]

Or you could just not watch bleach

[WriggleRid3r]

First few arcs were good. Then it just got complicated, just like how every shonen anime are.

[SUSTIC]

Yeah I agree on Bleach. For a look of how basic lower Omens would be (by the sound of the description from Wriggle.) Just watch a few episodes of the first arc where straight up Hollows were more prominent.

After the first few arcs Hollows began to be replaced with mostly other stuff that are both related to and not related to hollows, and things started getting complicated as shit.

So yeah.

I agree with Wriggle AND Kilel. I agree with Kilel in that you can just not watch Bleach and look up what Hollows look like and that might give you a vague idea.

[Kilelicus]

Listen, Zekai... I'm not ragging on you or anything because of past shit but....

That post is really shitassed.
"Yep, just got off the plane, crossing the ocean. Time to go to school!"

"Oh look there's buildings."

"Whoops, I'm late to school."

Do you actually have a computer? Because if so, you should keep Mobile posting to a minimum. It tends to create a level of laziness in posts.

Why not just have her go home for the day and explore the city? It's not like everyone is at the school

[Zekai]

I can make a post anyway I can to catch up. My phone is much faster than my computer and yes, I do have one.

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[WriggleRid3r]

Honestly I have to concur with Kilel, not only because of the quality of the post though.

I personally would NOT want to go to school as soon as I get out of an airplane. I'd rather take it easy for the day and then look for high schools to enroll in. It's just not realistic unless the person who was riding on the airplane had two extra hearts that constantly pumped energy into the bloodstream.

I'd recommend you change your intro post to something more believable. While that, you should also flesh it out more. Come on, you've been doing this for more than a year now, you should be able to make a decent-sized intro post. I can already think of one right now and I don't even control your character.

[Zekai]

She isn't going to start school immediately. Just there to fill out some papers before she actually starts. I did plan some things out, give me some posts before you assume things.