@Kristia
Sorry to hear.
To be honest, I didn't think your story was bad. Sure it wasn't professional quality, but I don't expect it to be. What I did see was that you were improving greatly. As for not going with Canon personalities, that's not a sturdy claim. After all, not all of a particular pokemon "race" act the same, do they? That's why it's called a fanfic.
As for me, I've been working a lot, sleeping A LOT, and have been on Mumble a lot. Still on Mumble right now, due to me being too lazy to close it down.
Sorry to hear.

To be honest, I didn't think your story was bad. Sure it wasn't professional quality, but I don't expect it to be. What I did see was that you were improving greatly. As for not going with Canon personalities, that's not a sturdy claim. After all, not all of a particular pokemon "race" act the same, do they? That's why it's called a fanfic.

As for me, I've been working a lot, sleeping A LOT, and have been on Mumble a lot. Still on Mumble right now, due to me being too lazy to close it down.

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