[OOC Board] Eternal Galaxy: Shards of Starlight - Part I
10/23/2013, 07:31 PM #521
I don't take Memento that seriously, whether it's a profile, or a design.
Sometimes when you're driving down a road, a bug hits your windshield. It's ugly and unpleasant, but you just activate the wipers / cleaning fluid and it's gone in a few seconds. It's just part of driving down the road. You don't dwell on it, because that'd be silly. Bugs aren't worth the time.
You just discard their guts and keep on driving.
10/23/2013, 07:34 PM #522
Just fyi on the IC
Concerning Aura crystals, you guys nailed it on the head.
Concerning Aura crystals, you guys nailed it on the head.
10/23/2013, 09:22 PM #525
Originally posted by S121
Every time I see a new post on the Forum, I feel like a little kid during Christmas, all giddy.
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10/24/2013, 01:06 AM #526
Your link doesn't work, S1.
Sometimes when you're driving down a road, a bug hits your windshield. It's ugly and unpleasant, but you just activate the wipers / cleaning fluid and it's gone in a few seconds. It's just part of driving down the road. You don't dwell on it, because that'd be silly. Bugs aren't worth the time.
You just discard their guts and keep on driving.
10/24/2013, 01:09 AM #527
@ Mima
It's a strange link. Open it then copy it again, open a new tab, paste and enter and then it decides to work o.o;
I've never seen such strange things before...
anyway I went and re-uploaded it fer ya
It's a strange link. Open it then copy it again, open a new tab, paste and enter and then it decides to work o.o;
I've never seen such strange things before...
anyway I went and re-uploaded it fer ya
10/24/2013, 03:54 AM #528
Just leaving this here for convenience~
cheers
cheers
Sol Inceneron
Inopia - Underground Temple
Dalia looked to the far side of the plateau area. "Hmm...I would say around forty some minutes." She turned back to Nhiome. "No big deal. If worse comes to worst, If you don't want the rogues to get your hands on your ship, I would say destroy it. But ah, let's try to get down to that cavern! If we make it, we make it! Even if there's a possibility of causing the cavern to crumble and we'll wind up eighty floors underground in one of the temples! C'mon! Excitement! Let's go!" Dalia ran into the ship and went for the cockpit.
10/24/2013, 10:13 PM #530
@ Everyone
Alright we're now getting into the part of the story where I have no "middle" for getting between points A and B
In summary:
The story needs to introduce the "Hunt for the Shards of Starlight" and the means to do so is vague.
Chapter 4 I would try to introduce the main goal of the Venturian Council and thus the initial goal of the Strike Fighters alongside with the possibility of Commander Sullivan having alternative goals.
Chapter 5 needs to introduce the Legend of the Shards of Starlight
Chapter 6 is the transition where the story moves into Celestora system.
Any suggestions on what might be needed alongside ideas of your own are welcome.
Alright we're now getting into the part of the story where I have no "middle" for getting between points A and B
In summary:
The story needs to introduce the "Hunt for the Shards of Starlight" and the means to do so is vague.
Chapter 4 I would try to introduce the main goal of the Venturian Council and thus the initial goal of the Strike Fighters alongside with the possibility of Commander Sullivan having alternative goals.
Chapter 5 needs to introduce the Legend of the Shards of Starlight
Chapter 6 is the transition where the story moves into Celestora system.
Any suggestions on what might be needed alongside ideas of your own are welcome.